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Posted: 10 years ago
Lovely OS Ana.. I really liked the dance sequence.. it took me back to those beautiful days on ...and then you got Mihir and Mihika married.. that's something all of us wanted but couldn't get out of the show. So thanks for that😃
And loved the chemistry between IshRa throughout! So romantic😳
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Desperate for wishes

Hi guys

I'm here with another OS. Thank you for your lovely comments for my previous work. I'm really very happy for it.

My picture is couch romance. Pic no: 59;


This pic is not the central plot for this OS.

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Ishita Raman Kumar Bhalla was very happy. Tomorrow, it was her first birthday after her marriage. She was excited about celebrating it with her Raman. Especially after their changed equations, they were no longer Ruhi Ki Ishima or Ruhi ke papa but were couple fallen in love freshly.

Ishita was sitting on couch in her room and thinking what all surprises her husband might give her. She was even blushing .She hit her head and chided herself "Ishita, Paagal ho kya tum.yeh tumhara pehla birthday thodi hai. Teenager ki tarah behave kyu kar rahi hai" [Ishita,are you mad?This isn't your first birthday.Why are you behaving like a teenager]

Raman entered the talking on phone "Yes, I'll check the file in morning" Ishita wondered how he will check the file in morning when he is going to celebrate her birthday. However she ignored it and waited for the clock to strike 12.Each moment passing was very difficult for her.

She just turned back on the bed to see her Raavan Kumar still working on laptop. She asked "What are you doing?"

"Aankhen hai ya button. Presentation bana raha hu" [Is that eyes or button. I'm making presentation]

"Kab tak kaam karenge" [Till when will you work?]

"Jab tak yeh complete nahi hota.Tum so jao" [Till when this gets completed. You sleep]

Ishita thought Raman was ignoring her to give her surprise. Clock strikes 12, Ishita wishes herself and turns to see her Raavan Kumar working very seriously. She was staring him continuously.

He asked "What do you want?"

"Kuch nahi, Aren't you over yet?"

"No"

After about an hour .Raman completed his work and saw his Jhansi Ki Rani sleeping peacefully. He looks at his clock and told "Shit"

He ran to her couch, bent to her; kissed her on cheek and wished "Happy Birthday jaan...Sorry bhool gaya".She wasn't awake to see this and thought Raman didn't wish her. She woke up earlier than usual and went to take bath. She was very upset.

She came out wiping her wet hairs. She had decided somehow to make her Raavan Kumar wish her. She wantedly went near him. She bent over a bit and started wiping her hair. Drops of water in her hair were falling on his sleeping form. She expected him to wake up but he didn't, he just wiped it off and slept.

She got angry, she picked up the glass of water kept on nearby table and poured it on him.

He woke up startled "Paani ka hamla,paani ka hamla" [Water attack]

She was smiling "Yeh paani ka hamla nahi, Ishita Bhalla ka jalwa hai" [It was not water attack ,it was Ishita bhalla's work]

"Phir se Paagal pan ke dohare pad gaye kya tume" [Again madness got into you]

He got out of bed and went to washroom. She spoke "went away...How can he do this?"

Ishita got ready in unusual way and sat on the bed. Raman came out of washroom completely ready in his suit and saw his wife dressed beautifully. She was wearing a low cut sleeveless blouse and even her back was exposed. He looked at Ishita and smiled. She gave him a smile thinking he remembered.

He spoke "Bataya kyu nahi?" [Why didn't you tell?]

"Kuch baaten aise hoti hai" [Some things are like that]

"Aise kya hai iss baat mein ishita" [But what is there in this thing Ishita]

He walked towards her. Her heartbeat increased as he came closer. He bent over her, took the tie behind her and walked away. She had closed her eyes due to his proximity. She opened her eyes and saw Raman tying his tie.

She clenched her fists and walked to him. She caught hold of his tie and asked "May I". He nodded in yes. She carefully tied hid tie and kissed him on his cheek.

He told "Pyaar baad me karna madrasan pehle naashta lagao". She made a pout and left. [Love me later madrasan, first serve me my breakfast]

He came down for breakfast and sat. She served him.

He asked "Listen" She came and settled on chair beside him.

"Anthing special today."

"Haan woh.." Sh started.

But he cut in between "Chodo...Beautiful"

She thought of not telling Raman directly so she started "Raman, Rinki's birthday is coming .Have you thought something to gift her?"

"Yes...Appointment letter. She always wanted to work with Mr. Sharma. Now she can do her internship there"

"Nice...then"

"Even Romi's Birthday is coming. I have ordered his favorite watch, he asked me for that long time back"

She faked a smile and asked "For everyone's birthday do you gift something?"

"Yes. I already have a list what to gift also"

He left to office. She "Uff...yeh Raavan kumar ko sabke birthday yaad hai sivai mere" [This raavan kumar remembers everyone's birthday except mine]

Raman was sitting in his office looking at her picture "Paagal madrasan.Directly bol thi nahi hai". [Mad madrasan doesn't tell me directly]

He had known it was her birthday; he wanted to wish her too but seeing her trying to gain his attention by her tricks, he thought to let her try all the tricks.

Just then he got a message. It was from his JKR .Selfie in another sari. He smiled and sent a smiley emoticon. After about an hour she sent him another pic with different sari. He replied "Hmm...pretty". Again she sent one more pic in the blue dress he had gifted her long back.

Now he couldn't stop laughing at her cute antics. He clicked a pic of his with few files dumped in front of him and sent "Busy,busy...Mujhe bina bataye modeling kar rahi ho". She sent an angry emoji and later in day he didn't receive any messages from her.

Ishita was sitting in hall. Toshiji, Mr.Bhalla came out an told "Ishita puttar hum pammi ke yaha ja rahe hai,kal lautenge.Simmi hume join karegi" [Ishita we are going at pammi's place. We'll return tomorrow. Even simmi will join us]

She smiled. Romi had gone to Bunty's party and simmi was out to do some shopping for her baby. No one was in the house except for Ishita and her desperation.

Empty mind is a devil's workshop. Ishita was sitting and thinking when two Ishita's popped in her head - one angel and another devil.

Angel Ishita "Ishita, you haven't told Raman it's your birthday so he hasn't wished you"

Devil Ishita "No, he should have known; he is your husband"

Angel Ishita "No, do you know his birthday. No, so he doesn't know yours"

Devil "Whatever it is he must and should know mine"

Ishita - real one was tired of this good VS bad war .she shouted "Enough both of you. I don't need your help" She felt it appropriate to listen to some songs and listen to radio.

She told her heart "It's okay. Keep no hopes from Raman. He's not gonna wish. However till last year was he wishing? No, so be happy and enjoy your day"

She turned on the radio. Song was playing.

Dil ye mera bas mein nahi

Pehla kabhi aisa hota tha nahi

Tu hi bata.. iss dil ka main..

Ab kya karoon

hmm.. Kehne pe chalta nahi

Kuch dinon se meri bhi sunta nahi

Tu hi bata iss dil ka main ooh uff main kya karoon

Main kya karoon.

She thought "Uff...yahi gaana play hona tha. This so much matches my situation." [This song had to play]

She "Kya kare yeh dil manta hi nahi ki Raavan Kumar ne wish hi nahi kiya aur nahi karne wala hai" [What to do my heart doesn't accept that Raman hasn't wished me or was not going to wish me]

She was being restless when the song continued.

karta hai awaargi

Iss pe toh dhun chadhi, hai pyar ki

Naa jaane gum hai kahaan?

Baaton mein hai pada, bekaar ki

Ulti ye baat hai

Aise haalaat hai

Ghalati kare ye, main bharu

Uff dil ka kya karoon

Main kya karoon

Main kya karoon...

She kept on changing her positions.

Dil pe mera, kaabu nahi

Fitrat kabhi iss ki aisi thi nahi

Tu hi bata.. iss dil ka main ab kya karoon

hmm.. Kehne pe, chalta nahi

Kuch dinon se, meri bhi sunta nahi

Tu hi bata iss dil ka main

She got frustrated and turned off the radio. Then Mutthu entered holding a basket. She looked into the basket; it had a beautiful wrapped gift with an happy birthday card.

She caressed Mutthu's head "Only you remember my birthday "

She went to kitchen and cooked for dinner. Mutthu again came with another basket which had a bouquet full of blood red roses. She took and felt sad. Mutthu walked away.

Raman came home. He saw Ishita cooking and went to room. He changed to his blue shirt and came down. She saw him changed and thought he has changed. That means no outing. She was continually thought how can this person forget when all his family members wished her.

She also changed to her night black kurta. She had made a firm decision to be normal in front of him and not hint him about her birthday and also not to talk to him properly.

She was telling "No, murugan, no I'll not tell him anything". She saw him holding his back .She thought "Again...back ache" She brought balm from first-aid box and sat beside him.

She instructed his hand down and pulled his shirt down. She started rubbing balm and while getting up she thought "ek hint me kiska kya jaata hai" [From one hint, what will happen]

She spoke "Raman,aaj kuch special hai jo aap bol rahe hai" [Raman there is something special today which you're forgetting]

"What?"

"You think...Some birthdays or anniversaries" she said stressing on word Birthday'.

He was scratching his head and after few minutes he told "Yaad aaya" [I remembered]

"What?" she got excited

"Birthday"

"Correct" she raised her hands in air.

"Thanks Ishita. What would I do without you? I'll wish now only"

"Quick" she told

He picked up his phone and started dialing some number.

"Who" she asked

"Neil...Today is his pet's birthday"

"What. You're unbelievable" she gave him an angry glare and went to kitchen.

"What? Ishi"" Raman told.

He felt enough of troubling her. Let's surprise her.He made his way near the kitchen.She was cooking.

"Kitna pakaegi ye madrasan.Mere sir ke baad kuch aur bhi bachahe pakhane ke liye...interesting" he spoke to himself [How much will this madrasan cook.After my head something is left to cook...interesting]

She was murmuring in kitchen "Yeh Raman samaj the kya hai apne aap ko.Hamesha kudkud karte rehte hai.Neil ki pet ki birthday yaad hai par apni khud ki patni ki nahi.Khaak ache pati banenge yeh" [What does this Raman think of himself? Always he keeps on speaking. He remembers neil's pet's birthday but not his own wife's. What good husband will he become?]

He walked inside the kitchen and hugged her from back. He kept his chin on her shoulders and told "Smell is good"

She said "Your favorite food" He kissed her on both the cheeks and told "Not food. You" he winked at her. She tried to free herself from him .She felt her legs parting away as he kissed her neck. She tried her level best to control her hormones but she couldn't .She turned and hugged him.

He lifted her in his arms and walked towards guest room. He stood in front of door and instructed her to close her eyes. She did. He walked inside and asked her "Open. Now"

She opened to find the room decorated beautifully with white flowers, balloons and crape papers. There was cake on the table with words "Happy Birthday JKR" on it.

She turned to him and asked "Aapko yaad tha" [you remembered]

He nodded in positive and "I thought to have some fun with you. Kitni desperate thi meri wishes ke liye.thadap rahi thi madam" [How much desperate you were for my wishes. You were dying for them]

"Why did you do decorations here.You could have done in our room" she asked

"Why? For you to see"

"Oh" she caught her forehead

"Oh...Now cut the cake"

She cut the cake and they both feeded each other.

He put his arms around her shoulders and told "I Love you jaan. Happy birthday"

She blushed and told "I love you too"

He asked "Happy birthday too nahi bologi"

"Kyu" she asked confused [Why]

"Jab tumne yeh maan liya ki woh gifts mutthu ne tumko diye the to yeh bhi boldo" [When you believed that mutthu gave you all gifts,then tell this also]

"Kisne diye tha woh" [Who gave that]

"Maine bhij vaye the mutthu ke haathon" [I sent it with Mutthu's hands]

"aapne?" [You]

"Hana.Ab tum yeh bhi boldo" [Yes.Now you tell this also]

"Kuch bhi"

"Kuch bhi"he imitated her and pulled her to a hug.

He asked "You will hug me all night or do something else also"

"Huh?"

"Maine gharwaalon ko yuhi thodi baahar bheja" [I didn't send the family out just like that]

"You sent them out...Why"

"Kyunki mujhe meri biwi ke saath akele birthday celebrate karna tha" [Because I wanted to celebrate my wife's birthday alone] He winked at her.

He lifted her in his arms. She put her arms around his shoulder and buried her face in his chest while he walked away to the decorated bed.

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Thank you for wasting your precious time in reading my work. Criticism and appreciation both are equally welcome.

Main aadat hu uski, woh zarurat hain meri,
Main farmayish hu uski, woh ibadat hai meri
Itni aasani se kaise nikal du use apne dil se,
Main khwab hu uska woh hakikat hain meri.
Edited by vidya_prasad - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Congrats on ur 1000th post
Happy b'day dear
Amazing dear
d title was nice
Loved the devil ishu and angel ishu
wen muttu gave her a gift. Aww. I was like so cute
the kitchen romance was nice
Loved ur story
Ab as usual loved ur dialogues

"Yeh paani ka hamla nahi, Ishita Bhalla ka jalwa hai"

"Kitna pakaegi ye madrasan.Mere sir ke baad kuch aur bhi bachahe pakhane ke liye...interesting"

Keep writing more

Edited by darlingpinks - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: nrn1486

@Pallavi: More pics?😆

Awesome👏

arey dere r still people who havnt been allocated pics n others who still wanna come in. I thought the left over pics werent that appealing so added more, just to give more choice basically.. 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
@vidya, congrats on becoming goldie! 😃
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Originally posted by: peace..

@vidya, congrats on becoming goldie! 😃


Thanks a lot 😆
i updated my 1000th post here on my b'day
Edited by vidya_prasad - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: vidya_prasad


Thanks a lot 😆
i updated my 1000th post here on my b'day

its ur birthday today kya..arey bade wala happy birthday to you! 😊 🥳
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: peace..

its ur birthday today kya..arey bade wala happy birthday to you! 😊 🥳


Thanks a lot. 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
@vidya i just read ur OS too! Perfect Bday wala OS 😃 A really cute one!
Well written and some really cute dialogues in btw.. I m soo glad u added Muttu dere 😃😳

Loved d angel/devil ishita idea 👏

I am delighted overall. Wishing u a happy birthday again and a great yr ahead. 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
loved it... One of the scene which I want to see it in our show is birthday mode...
And MANY MORE HAPPY RETURNS OF THIS DAY...

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