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.TIA.

@.TIA.

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#21

This is beautiful 😛 The concept is soo good 😊

Ur really awsome at this Aani. Wish u could write for the show😉 Imagine the AWSOMENESS we'd have 😃

Thanks for the pm 😛

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smilydear

@smilydear

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#22

Beautifully written ...

Adi will definetly need a companion like Natasha, in his life...

Forgiving isn't something you do for someone else. It's something you do for yourself.

I believe in this and this helps a lot.

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Rumaisa

@Rozy77

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#23

aww, this was wonderful⭐️
another brilliant os from you👏

i thought it was Raman narrating. a pleasant surprise to read a grown up Aditya👍🏼
loved the addition of the other kids in the family😳
Rinky's death was sad😒
Even felt a tiny bit bad at Shagun's death . If only she had reformed, she would have had at least Aditya's affection if not anyone else...

really enjoyed this one😊
take care

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WhyAmIHereAgain

@WhyAmIHereAgain

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#24

i cant even tell u how much i love this piece of urs... in this one OS, i saw the next generation of YHM... n if ever YHM takes a leap n the script is even half of what u wrote..i will be a happy customer... lovely...

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AdventureGirl14

@AdventureGirl14

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#25

This is so good. Loved all the family moments. Brillaint😊

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aashiqua

@aashiqua

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#26

It's just as beautiful as yours other stories...and after reading this I can feel a warmth engulfing my heart...and really thankful for this as it helped me to lessen the stress of mind

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Aarohi Talegoankar

@Albeli26

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#27

sorry sorry aani di for late comment but caught up with work. it was no doubt a beautiful update. loved it thoroughly. you really executed very well. liked the pairing of couples very well. loved ishra son rishi also. and new addition Natasha,I hope she healed his wound soon. my prev os save my soul is also pending, will comment soon after reading