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Prayosha

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Posted: 10 years ago

#741

Originally posted by: maanvir
Sorry guys...very very busy...
Kal poori koshish karungi update dene ki...
Sorry fr mkng u all wait

Koi baat nahi...
Itne din intjar kiya hai ...to kuch din aur kar lenge...
Par maine suna hai ki Intjar ka phal mitha hota hai...😆

Iss intjar ka phal mitha milega...to koi problem nahi...😉

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VENBA

@VENBA

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Posted: 10 years ago

#742

superb update..

Raman's state of mind was shown nicely...

Thanks for pm..😊😊

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asma18

@asma18

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Posted: 10 years ago

#743

Koi nai itna intezar kiya thoda aur sahi
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par update superb hona chahiye 😊

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maanvir

@maanvir

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Posted: 10 years ago

#744

Originally posted by: asma18
Koi nai itna intezar kiya thoda aur sahi
...
par update superb hona chahiye 😊

Koshish jaari hai

Kuch hi der me update aari hai😉

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maanvir

@maanvir

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Posted: 10 years ago

#745

Urghhh😡 Patha nahi mai kab sudhrungi...

Update post karne se pehle hi page close kar diya🤢

I feel like pulling off my hairs

Phew! Calm down! I can do it again! I will write it again!

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maanvir

@maanvir

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Posted: 10 years ago

#746

Hi All!

In a grumpy mood after having deleted my update because of my carelessness...so no note...

Here's the update

Part 55

More disappointments lined up for me?

Did I just say that!?

What am I saying? Disappointed??? Why would I be?

After all it's my favourite client here!

And that must bring in surprises and not disappointments right?

No Raman No! No more expectations!

Don't you remember the quote you recently read 'Never expect things to happen because its better to get surprised then disappointed'

(Quote credit: Hersheys aka .Harshita.)

Yeah right! No more expectations!

I can do it! I can do it!

No expectations! No expectations!

Just wait for the surprise! Just wait for the surprise!

Good going Raman! Finally you have learnt not to keep any expectations!👏

Thank you!😊

BTW Isn't waiting for surprise an expectation again?😲

Whatever!😡

Why are you wasting your precious time over this darned expectation which has always brought you disappointments when a surprise is standing in front of you?

Look who's here!

Your favorite client clad in your favorite dress of your favorite color!

''Ye le beta tere sabr ka phal' I felt God from heaven say this to me.

Today I agree Sabr ka phal meetha hotha hai!

Itna meetha ke uski mithaas mai bayaan nahi kar sakta!

My eyes shamelessly roved over the figure standing in front of me.

She looked more beautiful than what I had imagined while picking up this dress for her.

http://www.sareespalace.com/image/cache/data/royal-blue-zardoshi-work-georgette-anarkali-suit-800x1100.jpg

The dress fitted her perfectly.

The royal blue looked even more royal in contrast to her glowing alabaster skin.

The deep maroon patterns on her long beautiful hands went well with the zardosi work on the upper half of the dress.

The silky waist-length hair parted towards the right and let open added to her beauty.

The simple jhumka that she wore was a perfect match.

http://thumbs1.ebaystatic.com/d/l225/m/mRT3kQRQcRjwGON6UchDr1A.jpg

(AUTHOR'S NOTE: Sorry I am very bad at describing beauty...I spent more than half an hour to thin how to describe still ended up with this...😕)

I could go into every minute detail that spoke volumes of beauty and divinity but what what attracted me the most were 3 simple things: The pinch of vermilion on her forehead, the Chooda in her hands and the Mangalsutra in her neck.

That's because these 3 things screamed to me that this royal, divine beauty in front of me belongs to me alone.

They were the symbol of my right on her.

They said that she is ISHITA RAMAN BHALLA!

And right at this moment I felt proud of my choices!

The choice of the colour, the dress and the person!

BTW how does she know that I wanted to see her in this dress today?

Budhhu! She must have read your note obviously!

Yeah right! The note! I completely forgot about it!

Ishita's POV

Mai madad kar dun teri?

Did she just say that!?

----------------------------------To be continued----------------------

This update was supposed to be longer...but I got to go now...

So I am leaving it here...

If I happen to come back early I will write another update...

Till then leave ur cmnts😊

Edited by maanvir - 10 years ago

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Sushma

@SushSathisha

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Posted: 10 years ago

#747

I'm first I'm first

inta chotu sa update

di!!!! aisa nahi chalega...

mein duty lelungi aapki!!!!

expectations make me love u more!!!

agar aap jaldi update nahi karoge na toh... toh... mein.. mein apna update aapke post mein kardungi heheheh i have gone crazy

beta update maadi.. nanagoskara please na akka

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maanvir

@maanvir

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Posted: 10 years ago

#748

Originally posted by: sush_avina
I'm first I'm first
inta chotu sa update
di!!!! aisa nahi chalega...
mein duty lelungi aapki!!!!
expectations make me love u more!!!
agar aap jaldi update nahi karoge na toh... toh... mein.. mein apna update aapke post mein kardungi heheheh i have gone crazy
beta update maadi.. nanagoskara please na akka

Hey sush! This update is incomplete!

Hubby dearge dinner serve maadi barteeni...Ok na?

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Wings-of-Fire

@Wings-of-Fire

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Posted: 10 years ago

#749

I'm guessing the chapter isn't over yet. But I couldn't stop from commenting. I read the line about Raman deciding to wait for surprise and I thought that- well, that's an expectation and two lines later, I see that you've written it! Imagine my surprise!!!

I don't do well with surprises. But it was a good one, made me happy.

Edited by Wings-of-Fire - 10 years ago

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maanvir

@maanvir

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Posted: 10 years ago

#750

Originally posted by: Wings-of-Fire
I'm guessing the chapter isn't over yet. But I couldn't stop from commenting. I read the line about Raman deciding to wait for surprise and I thought that well, that's an expectation and two lines later, I see that you've written it! Imagine my surprise!!!

I don't do well with surprises. But it was a good one, made me happy.

Well TBH I wasn't expecting ur cmnt this early...and this was a surprise for me...which defntly made me happy...

Looks like v r in for more surprises...😃