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Posted: 10 years ago
Even I am disappointed :'(
Bechara Raman..

But I think sabar ka phal meetha hota hai... May be something meetha awaiting for him
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Posted: 10 years ago
Sorry kaan pakad k...for not commenting on prev 2 updts...
Tussi toh kamaal kar ditta...

Main bahut samajhdaar hoon aur mujhe samjhdaari waala ishara bhi samajh aa gaya tha...

Ishita kitna pyaar karti hain Raman se...itna mujhe samajh aaya...bechaara Ajnabi...usska aage kuch hai k nahi??

Nahi hoga coz as Ajnabi said main toh tum dono ki luvstory mein ek supporting character tha bas aur kuch nahi...


Kya yaar koyi apni shaadi ki first nite ko sota hai...but sachhme shaadi k din dulhan hi sabse jyaada kaam karti hai...

Maine aaj khud ye baat ki hai k Expectations lead to Disappointments...kitni sacchi baat hai ye...

Bada comment dena tha...but itna sab kuch hai kehne ko but usska outcome Ittu sa hi hai..as u see...luved it...superb updt as alwaz...missed u soo vry much...luv u..🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
A long update but without ishra in it😭
liked d part of expectation nd disappointment..
even i had expectation of ishra romance but ended up in disappointment😉
hope no disappointment in next part
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Posted: 10 years ago
Didi mai kya kahu evry update so superb tat literally jaan le li
Woh subah subah raman ka ishita ko utana thn his assurance her guilt her disappointment abt sleeping on wedding night
I loved it totally fell in love with it again n again
n thn ishita ka confusion woh toh bahut realistic tha
Har ladki feels that i think tis part z more out of experience
N thn raman ka expectation n disappointment
Bechara raman biwi ki ek jhalak ke liye tadap raha tha
Is abhi ne use phirse disappoint kar diya
bechara I m really feeling bad for him
Ek bar toh apni biwi milne do didi
I think yeh raman ka expectation bhi kahi jeeju ka expectation toh nahi jo ki aapn thod di ...haha
Vaise like abhi n raman convo. Now waiting for next update
Thanku for pms n sry kaan ppakadke sry for this very late reply
bt dekhiye lambi thi😛
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Ishradivani

Didi mai kya kahu evry update so superb tat literally jaan le li

Woh subah subah raman ka ishita ko utana thn his assurance her guilt her disappointment abt sleeping on wedding night
I loved it totally fell in love with it again n again
n thn ishita ka confusion woh toh bahut realistic tha
Har ladki feels that i think tis part z more out of experience
N thn raman ka expectation n disappointment
Bechara raman biwi ki ek jhalak ke liye tadap raha tha
Is abhi ne use phirse disappoint kar diya
bechara I m really feeling bad for him
Ek bar toh apni biwi milne do didi
I think yeh raman ka expectation bhi kahi jeeju ka expectation toh nahi jo ki aapn thod di ...haha
Vaise like abhi n raman convo. Now waiting for next update
Thanku for pms n sry kaan ppakadke sry for this very late reply
bt dekhiye lambi thi😛


Cmnt lamba ho to late reply ki galti maaf...
@bold: Aisa kuch bhi nahi hai...han magar ye sach hai ke Over expectation leads to disappointment ye sabaq to maine apni shadi me hi seekhi thi...bahut hi interesting experience tha...kabhi mouqa mila to uspe b kuch likhungi
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Posted: 10 years ago
Didi kaha gayab ho gayi ho?????
Ek update dede yaar
Waiting
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Ishradivani

Didi kaha gayab ho gayi ho?????

Ek update dede yaar
Waiting



kal mai song os-thon ka secnd part likh rahi thi aur update krte waqt sab kuch delete hogaya...
pehle o rewrite karungi...phir ye update karungi
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Posted: 10 years ago
I read all parts in one go
it z really outstanding concept with fabulous description
every part makes exciting
u r one of the good writers really👏
felling bad 4 viren but rkb is imp so not so sad
nowwant to c hw ishra progress their life with new found feelings of ishita
wanna also read ishita sisters part also
update soon
waiting
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hii wen r u updating??? It's been long... Plzz update soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hi All!
😒 Phir se mujhe SORRY note e shuru karna padh raha hai...

Aur is baar to aap logon ka gussa hona jayiz hai kyunki maine aap logon ko Char Kadam ke safar me beech raah pe chod kar Song OS-thon ka rasta pakad liya tha...

Plz maaf kar do yaaron!

Anywys Here is the update...

Part 54

"Tujhe abhi nikalna hoga"
(You will have to leave now)


Did he just say that!?


One hour later, I am here in my office doing what? Waiting for the goddamn client/investor who got no other day but this when I am craving to spend a moment with my newly wed wife.


I haven't even seen her since we got married...aa...ermmm...ok...that was an exaggeration...Coz I spent more than half of last night looking at her


Last night! Hmphhh! Our First Night!
Like every other hot-blooded man I too dreamt of my wedding night being the best night of my life.


I did fantasize a lot about this night but before last to last night I was unsure if my fantasy would turn into a reality on this very night. Having sensed Ishita's hesitation in accepting me, I had assumed this special night would not be the first night of our wedding. I knew I would have to wait.


But after Ishita's declaration that she would never leave me no matter what and her wholehearted acceptance I was almost sure that I would not have to wait. I had seen my effect on her last morning and I knew she would want this night to be special too. And I started looking forward to it.


It was past midnight when I entered our room. Our room!

Not finding her on our bed, I assumed it should be a prank by my not-so-naive sister and her not-so-innocent would be husband. I was ready to go back looking for them and pull their ears out when a cool breeze coming from the balcony hit me.


My balcony is my favourite spot in the house and henceforth it will be my favourite spot in the world as I lay my eyes for the first time on my wife Ishita Raman Bhalla.


It was a treat to watch her sleep so peacefully with a serene smile adorning her face. One could say that she went into sleep in a genuinely happy state and that made me happy as well because it said that she was happy with my existence in her life.


If I say that I was not at all disappointed to see her asleep, then I should be considered the biggest liar of the century!
That says how desperate I was to make love to her!
But I knew she needed rest...
She had had a long tiring day and she hadn't slept the previous night because of all that happened.



But never mind she is mine forever now and that's all what matters...
My fantasy could wait!


I gently gathered her in my arms and softly placed her on the bed.
She stirred a little and I gently tapped her forehead making her go back to sleep.
She turned to her right in her sleep and her lips twitched, forehead creased.
I realised the heavy jewelry she had been carrying all along was troubling her.
I thought twice before going ahead with my decision of freeing her from her jewelry and then I arrived at the conclusion that I should go ahead.
I hoped she wouldn't mind, after all I am her husband and I have a right to do that...


This task seemed simple to me but when I actually got my hands on it I realised how difficult it was. Not because it was complicated to untangle the jewelry but because it was difficult to keep my desires on hold.


With every piece of jewelry I removed I remembered how I had thought of kissing the very spot on her alabaster skin where the jewelry stayed until then.

With a lot of determination I freed her from the jewelry keeping my self-control intact.

After having done what seemed to be the most difficult task in life, I showered, changed into night clothes and lay beside her on our bed.


Yes, I slept on the bed. Not because there was no couch in our room. There was one and had sufficient space to hold my not so huge figure.
Yet I chose to sleep on the bed because our marriage was not of compromise, but by choice.


I switched off the lights, positioning myself on my right elbow watching her angelic face in the faint moonlight that peered through the curtains.


I woke up to the same beautiful sight and I felt the luckiest man on earth.
I was sure this would be the best day of my life!
Alas! I don't know what went wrong then?
Why was this day proving to be the worst now?


We have already had a count of number of disappointments that came my way since morning, so I am not going to repeat them.
Yet another disappointment stood at my door now...
I EXPECTED the client to be here earlier and finish off the meeting within an hour...
But see it's been an hour already and I am still waiting...
If not for Abhi I would have left already...But I realise I have wronged Abhi in last few months and this could be one of the ways to pay back. I know he would be furious if he gets to know that, but still this helps me overcome my guilt of keeping him away from Simmi for more than a year.
As you sow, so you reap! I kept him away from Simmi (intentionally) and now he is keeping me away from Ishita (unintentionally)


Oh Ishita! I miss you so much!
How I wish you were here!


Let me call her!
I can at least hear her!


Right at that moment the intercom rang...What a timing!!!
I rolled my eyes picking up the phone
"Yes?"


"Sir the client you wanted to meet is here"


"Send him in please"
Finally he was here. I will just finish it off ASAP and rush home to meet my Ishita.


God! Let this meeting wrap up quickly! I silently prayed closing my eyes.
The client was standing at the door when I opened my eyes and I knew This meeting would take longer.


More disappointments lined up for me?


Did I just say that!?

------------------------------To be continued----------------------------

"Ab ye koun agaya bhai romance me break lagane?
Bechare Raman ki halath pe zara bhi taras nahi aya ye sab karne se pehle?"
Yahi sab kehna chah rahe honge na aap log?
Koi baat nahi jo kehna hai kahiye...
Magar kahe bina na rahiye😉


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