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Posted: 10 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: ..DiVan..
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Posted: 10 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: MysticRiver
very well written...👍🏼

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Aani

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Posted: 10 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: krishy13
Aani, you are such an eloquent writer, and I love that you chose to share your views on "the scene" from Saturday via story and not just a post. Your story brought more focus on the raw emotions of the scene that for many were lost in translation. I'm on mixed grounds with the scene (probably owing more to issues with the track's lack of logic than anything else), but I love that you captured and elaborated on Raman's sense of urgency and desire to have a single moment of togetherness with the woman he loves so dearly before hell breaks loose in their lives yet again.

Thanks Krishy. 😊

Logic has went missing since ages Krishy no use now to look for it. Glad you liked this interpretation of the scene. 😃 Perhaps if the Cvs had not rushed into the scene and built it up more with some monologue from Raman it would have been better. god knows why cant they have a little more care while planning the screenplay 😳

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Posted: 10 years ago

#44

Originally posted by: vidya.anand
I belong to the other group but thats not because of Raman or his intentions. I really feel for Raman and his helplessness. I also support his decision to keep Adi secure and safe under his wings. He has every reason to do that. so I dont accuse him at all. If I had a problem, its with the half baked reality of the scene. Raman's intentions were wrongly interpreted because CVs failed to capture and put it across properly.
Its also because the CVs never close a track properly and nothing comes through clearly from such intense scenes.

Anyways, coming back to ur OS
It was intense, beautiful, hot, romantic and to top it all, it described the trust that the couple share, the belief she nurtures that he wouldnt hurt her, the love which unite them and could make them go to the extremes to make the other happy, the devotion that they bestow for each other as a couple. It was all that we believe and perceive Ishra is or perhaps was.

I really want to believe and see the saturday's scene in such a light but then, all that was lost in the way the scene panned and shaped out.

But never mind, thanks for giving us this so that we can visualize such a beautiful scene.

Hey Vidya thanks a ton 😊

@bold - BINGO, like I just wrote in my reply to Krishy, the CVs need to be careful when planning the execution of the scene and so take care of the screenplay, the rush with which the scene started and ended made it seem like it was a tactic of seduction just meant to distract Ishita and if while at it he could get in her pants, no harm, no foul was done 😵 Had there been some build-up to it, some flow and not to mention a monologue here or there from Raman about him being scared of losing Ishita forever or scared of just what would happen to them come morning it would have been a very different thing. I dont rebuke Raman for wanting to save Adi too, no parent can watch from the sidelines, if they have a heart, while their child gets suicidal, rather push the child over the edge to carry out the plan, the intention, in that he isnt wrong.

And since I was disappointed with the way the scene shaped as well I wrote this, thanks for the acceptance y0u had of my version and for liking it Vidya 😊

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Posted: 10 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: VENBA
Awesome os..
Brilliant writing..👏👏

thanks Venba 😊

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Posted: 10 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: Anuhyaa
Aani - It's such a pleasure to read your works...

Your insight coupled with your vision makes the stories so interesting and after every read you make me wish for it to unfold on the screen too...

Raman's turmoil, his need, his guilt , his love - Ishita's love , her innocence , their talks -
you captured everything so beautifully...

Thanks Anuhyaa 😊

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Posted: 10 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: meenu_taarey
awesome os
soo good

thanks Meenu 😊

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Posted: 10 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: sush_avina
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Posted: 10 years ago

#49

Originally posted by: ATTITUDEBABY
I have to say it was a beautiful display of emotions. From the feeling of being wanted to helplessness, it was a perfect piece.

thanks dear 😊