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vidya.anand

@vidya.anand

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#21

edited in Pg1

I loved your interpretation of the scene but cant say the same about the actual scene in the episode!

Edited by vidya.anand - 10 years ago

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JazzyM

@JazzyM

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#22

Fabulous writing. You have twined the story so well with the events of Saturday, that even a Raman hater would feel for him. I loved how you brought laughter, mirth, smile into the bedroom scene. Very tough to write but fantastic to read...thank you so much.

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.TIA.

@.TIA.

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#23

Aani, that was one brilliant piece of work 👏. Brilliantly written😛

Loved it.

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kavya

@s_kavya

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#24

Amazing... Awesome... Brilliant 👏 the way you portrayed each and every moment of this night was Beautiful loved it...Thanks for the PM Aani 😊

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Mehak Ashraf

@Mehak_KPian

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#25

It was beautiful! More than the mature content, I really liked the understanding between them and how you showed Raman's feelings for hurting her but before that he wanted to give her the most beautiful moments of her life. How he need it a moral support before things get worst in his life. I wish CVS could have shown something like this. It was excellent.. A brilliant piece of writing and yes, it was HOT!

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-Anku-

@-Anku-

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#26

When I saw that scene the other day, what everyone already thought of a moment like that was at the back of mind. It made me judge the scene too. But when I tried keeping that aside. I did think the whole thing from Raman's POV. Raman was selfish YES but that was momentarily. His love for Ishita was genuine, it was so obvious through the whole scene. His love, concern and guilt it was all there. But sometimes scenes, direction and acting can only do this much to express an emotion. But WORDS NEVER FAIL. And that's exactly what your One shot managed to do. It expressed the emotions more boldly, more delicately and in a beautiful way.

You're way of writing romance and even intimacy is the most subtle, and the most real I've read. Whether its physical or emotional, it all seems genuine and heart warming. You have a way with words Aani and it absorbs me into your stories from the word GO.

Great piece. Added to the list of my favourites 👏

Edited by -Anku- - 10 years ago

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NidhaA

@NidhaA

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#27

There was this lingering feeling on the back of mind after reading many views on the said scene. That somewhere what Raman did was not entirely wrong. I am not supporting intimacy for gain here, that's a crime to me as well. But at times we cross certain bridges only at certain moments. Your interpretation just portrayed that so well Aani.

Well written and executed. Enjoyed it thoroughly.

Love

Nidha

PS : I want mangoes now.

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AdventureGirl14

@AdventureGirl14

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#28

This is so beautifully written! Though Raman's actions were questionable, the emotion that was most prominent in the scene, I feel, was his love for Ishita. And you've brought that out beautifully through this OS.

A treat to read, as always😊