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Nisha0604

@Nisha0604

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#421

Originally posted by: Wings-of-Fire

I apologize if it seemed critical to you. I don't dissect things to critique, it's just when I read a story I try to visualize it and the math geek jumps up in irregularities, and before I know it, I've written about it! I will not dissect your story again.

In this case the "math" is wrong, coz the distance between two people holding hands could be as MUCH as 4 to 5 feet😃

No offence taken Rosh

I notice you say mostly critical things only. Since this is CLEARLY my pastime I hope people will say NICE things too😃 I apologize for not matching up to your tough literary standards never took a class never wrote anything before... dont care to put my life on hold and take any professional training either I am sorry... I write SOLELY to amuse myself ONLY... not for any other lofty reason
Sorry if I gave you any other impression yaar

Edited by Nisha0604 - 10 years ago

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TanjoreGirl

@TanjoreGirl

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#422

Originally posted by: TanjoreGirl
Fear & Misery

Nisha how can u stop here ...😭 i am going to die of curiosity and my work is going to go for a toss...😭
OMG pavam R&B what can he do , poor II what will she dooo ..such a cute note and aloo tikki
ok atleast tell me when the next update is...

nish update yeppo.. any plumbing or dentist appointments?

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swathi1990

@swathi1990

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#423

Nish

How is she going to get back home re ? Why do u torture us like this ? Now have to wait till the eve ? Can u work from home today alone ? 😭

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deepthi

@deernav

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#424

Her clothes were intact... and so was her suitcases... PHEW!!!!
🤗she hadnt left him😭

Ok now we know even R & B scared too that II will leave him..these two will kill each other with their insecurities..

I so want to hug him right now..he s so worried for her..

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Ashu25

@Ashu25

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#425

This so heart tugging. The guy is really scrambled up from the inside. II!!! What have you done di 😭😭

she did'nt know what his Paris number was, she tried to recall his India number, and could'nt recall it fully!!!!!!!!!!!!!! - I knew it 😕😕😕

Why on earth is she remembering Selvi, Amma, shravu, Athim and Akka...Gosh this girl is crazy!! Finally she remembers the Rakshasan and does understand how he would react to her stupidity

I feel so bad for her at the same time I so want to smack her on her head. How can she be so stupid!! Why switch off her India phone, why ignore Paris phone ? Why DOES'NT she remember her husband's number 😡😡😡

She doesn't know anything, the language, the roads, the stations, the routes...How II 😭😭 How will you reach home now 😭

she had said "MYOB - what is MYOB??

Ayyo...Paavam...he is so worried. M sure he will handle her softly as he is mature and thinks its her first time..But I somehow feel he might get agitated at the fact that she didn't carry the phone he left for her ?!

One whole paragraph this idiot can write about her goddamn recipe and not ONE SINGLE LINE about her adventure trip ? 😡😡😡

Bloody, he thought she LEFT him 😲😲😲

I so feel bad for him 😭😭

Please God ...do some magic!!! Just let her get home without the Parisian police 😭😭😭

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blue5sky

@blue5sky

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#426

Originally posted by: Wings-of-Fire

Sorry for the geek rant! 😳

Nahi nahi... Impressed with your analysis. One admires what one can't do ... Me and that kind of stuff don't get along.. Was admiring yours!

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Ashu25

@Ashu25

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#427

Originally posted by: swathi1990
Nish
How is she going to get back home re ? Why do u torture us like this ? Now have to wait till the eve ? Can u work from home today alone ? 😭

Swathi, I asked her this question yesterday ...I am sure Author Sahiba loves to hang us on tenterhooks like this after each update 😆😆

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nidhi.b23

@nidhi.b23

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#428

both of them are in a bad state yaar...feeling so bad...II in tears and R&B in misery... i hope he finds her soon...im dead scared..

when is the next update nisha...plz say soon...