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All I will say about Idlis and ideologies is PHEW THEY ARE FINALLY TALKING.

ah one more insight M only spent his money what a contrast to II ..😳
Like a broken record i am worried how will II shop 😆

Originally posted by: Nisha0604

At the risk of making it appear like I write my own chapters AND reviews, here is Errant Nomad's review of Chapter "Wrapped up Truths", as she hit her post limit for the day gushing over Kanwaljeet :)
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Beautiful!!
Reconciliation after the discord felt natural. Most people would agree that "you're never fighting for the reason you think"
Only in reconcilation, we look beneath the crux of the argument, communicate better, take responsibility, be more humble, let go of our ego of wanting to be right, learn a little bit more about your spouse or partner, their concerns/ desires,appreciate your spouse, care more,and sort of in a way set boundaries too with remorse . It's a better ground to be in.

This chapter had it all. Awesome. This is what came to my mind as I read this chapter.
Hope I have done enough justice to my random thoughts.

Ps I want 14 idlies/ sambar of Saravanan bhavan too.

Bang on review of a beautiful update 👏 Nothing more to add.
On the other hand I did not find anything wrong about Bourbon update. As I remember, II half the time says no to him when they make out. She married him not completely knowing his feelings for her. Till now Raman took care of her very well. He is quite aware of her feelings and put up with her mood swings. He is the one who held back when II wanted to go all the way before marriage. Besides II is not the kind of woman who takes crap from anybody. We all know she revels in pushing him over the edge with her constant insecurities. Cut them some slack please. They are newly married couple who are strongly attracted to each other . Things can get aggressive. They are two strong , intelligent individuals. We do not want them to be regular lovey dovey, mushy couple.

Nisha, I read a comment saying you will try to be Ektha from now on. Please do not change the essence of these characters, if that is what you are referring to. Hope you do not change the tone of your story based on these comments.

Originally posted by: TanjoreGirl

ah one more insight M only spent his money what a contrast to II ..😳
Like a broken record i am worried how will II shop 😆

Originally posted by: DesiUs_fan

Bang on review of a beautiful update 👏 Nothing more to add.
On the other hand I did not find anything wrong about Bourbon update. As I remember, II half the time says no to him when they make out. She married him not completely knowing his feelings for her. Till now Raman took care of her very well. He is quite aware of her feelings and put up with her mood swings. He is the one who held back when II wanted to go all the way before marriage. Besides II is not the kind of woman who takes crap from anybody. We all know she revels in pushing him over the edge with her constant insecurities. Cut them some slack please. They are newly married couple who are strongly attracted to each other . Things can get aggressive. They are two strong , intelligent individuals. We do not want them to be regular lovey dovey, mushy couple.

Nisha, I read a comment saying you will try to be Ektha from now on. Please do not change the essence of these characters, if that is what you are referring to. Hope you do not change the tone of your story based on these comments.

Are we going to get that dinner with R&B's friends coming over and asking II to sing next? Well, whenever you have that planned for, I have a few song suggestions. 😊

Nisha,

Originally posted by: DesiUs_fan

Bang on review of a beautiful update 👏 Nothing more to add.
On the other hand I did not find anything wrong about Bourbon update. As I remember, II half the time says no to him when they make out. She married him not completely knowing his feelings for her. Till now Raman took care of her very well. He is quite aware of her feelings and put up with her mood swings. He is the one who held back when II wanted to go all the way before marriage. Besides II is not the kind of woman who takes crap from anybody. We all know she revels in pushing him over the edge with her constant insecurities. Cut them some slack please. They are newly married couple who are strongly attracted to each other . Things can get aggressive. They are two strong , intelligent individuals. We do not want them to be regular lovey dovey, mushy couple.

Nisha, I read a comment saying you will try to be Ektha from now on. Please do not change the essence of these characters, if that is what you are referring to. Hope you do not change the tone of your story based on these comments.

Hi! Desi US Fan,

THANKS VERY MUCH!! BLUE was what I was HOPING to convey I thought most got it and then suddenly BOOM, I was accused of causing rape😲😭
It NEVER occurred to me that he was forcing himself on her, I had another part written where there was a conclusion to it, but didnt post it when the whole rape accusation was thrown at me😲

EXACTLY!! She is tremendously intimidated by his sexuality, anyone with her "non experience" would be IMO. Maybe she should have torn his shirt and climbed over him and started pushing, to make things equal? I can only write things however I visualize it unfortunately

He is overpowering and strong... she was not inviting rape, she was hoping he would somehow put an end to it... since he had already handed her, her passport the chances were very low, so she went to get her ticket printed out



Its like religious or racial opinions, people are entitled to it...
If gutting my story gives them pleasure so be it.

To the other 99.99%: THANK YOU ALL FOR NOT SEEING AS RAPE, THANK YOU ALSO FOR BELIEVING II IS POWERFUL ENOUGH TO REACT AND KICK HIS ASS IF NEED BE



I am totally sorry for taking it out on Deernav this morning, it was uncalled for😭 I hope she forgives me. And NO I dont plan to turn it into a Ekta Kapoor story, no husband sharing nobility in my tale... I would rather stay poor and employed😃 I was too frustrated and didnt know what I was saying, I apologize...

Originally posted by: EnVee

Ah! I like the way he is gently probing or hoping to hear or not hear some things! Perhaps he wonders whether she has second thoughts about their marriage, perhaps she has thoughts of leading a normal life with the likes of Subbu and so on. He saw her shaken a bit when she met Subbu but he does not know why, right? perhaps he is still thinking about him being the Rakshasan with her... perhaps he wants to be the only one for her too.

Funny right? The person who he loves does not want a penny off him but the person she thinks he may have a feel for spent all of it.

I just gave in to an itch to write before dashing off to the airport 😆.

More only when I am safely landed and find Internet. Happy reading people! Like all the FB posters floating around... Keep Calm and Read... Oh yes, you can twirl your hair while reading 😆

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