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Posted: 10 years ago
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"Did you ask Ruhi?" he lightly mumbled.

"But have you ever thought about how scared would she be? Bhai! She's FIVE years old! How do you expect her to take it smoothly...wait, why am I thinking about her, I myself can't handle it! I mean, this is basically kidnapping!" "Yes." I said assuring him.he set his hands on the shoulders of the front seats. Romi s making sense 😊


"Well what are we waiting for," Mihir interrupted raising his arms.


"Lezz go!" These three are so cute😆. I sighed at his childish question, "No."


"Are we there yet,"


"No,"


"Are we there yet,"


"No,"


"Are we there yet,"


"No"


"Are we there yet,"


"No!", I couldn't handle his uselessness and stopped the car, placed my hands on the dashboard and repeatedly slammed my head on it so I could rid myself of this much stupid. Hahhaha ramannn...rolf...🤣

Yes, it's the only way I can be close to my princess." I stated firmly, she was mine, not Shagun's, mine. 👏 possessive raman. 😊 bhai, she won't be happy.

That was the first time he had said such deep lines, he was right -for the first time- , I was taking away her happiness just to satisfy my own. But I didn't want to ruin her life, I just wanted to make mine better. Intense😊 poor raman how badly he wants his daughter😭 di akirti s so good at writing.

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Posted: 10 years ago
#82
Nice update 😃
Possessive papa 😳 👍🏼
Romi 😆 😆 Yeaa he had a point there though. But I could so imagine him going on asking stuff n pissing his bhai 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Im loving the raman love for his daughter.im just confused about shagun pregency?in your story there is no scope for ishita character?
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Very nice! U've got such good talent!! Keep going...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow... okay then... I do not see this ending well but I can't wait to see where it goes.. you have such a great imagination- terrific job!👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
#86

Originally posted by: vidya_prasad

Loved this part

Raman is so possessive about Ruhi.
Romi has made some sense - true her missing posters will be hung on roads
Let's see what Raman does now


Thanks! Hope you're gonna enjoy the next part.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: cloudy24


"Did you ask Ruhi?" he lightly mumbled.

"But have you ever thought about how scared would she be? Bhai! She's FIVE years old! How do you expect her to take it smoothly...wait, why am I thinking about her, I myself can't handle it! I mean, this is basically kidnapping!" "Yes." I said assuring him.he set his hands on the shoulders of the front seats. Romi s making sense 😊


"Well what are we waiting for," Mihir interrupted raising his arms.


"Lezz go!" These three are so cute😆. I sighed at his childish question, "No."


"Are we there yet,"


"No,"


"Are we there yet,"


"No,"


"Are we there yet,"


"No"


"Are we there yet,"


"No!", I couldn't handle his uselessness and stopped the car, placed my hands on the dashboard and repeatedly slammed my head on it so I could rid myself of this much stupid. Hahhaha ramannn...rolf...🤣

Yes, it's the only way I can be close to my princess." I stated firmly, she was mine, not Shagun's, mine. 👏 possessive raman. 😊 bhai, she won't be happy.

That was the first time he had said such deep lines, he was right -for the first time- , I was taking away her happiness just to satisfy my own. But I didn't want to ruin her life, I just wanted to make mine better. Intense😊 poor raman how badly he wants his daughter😭 di akirti s so good at writing.


Thanks! I'm posting the update now...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: .TIA.

Nice update 😃

Possessive papa 😳 👍🏼
Romi 😆 😆 Yeaa he had a point there though. But I could so imagine him going on asking stuff n pissing his bhai 😆


Thank You! Romi is my idol...i will always look up to him and his childish ways😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: janani_divan

Im loving the raman love for his daughter.im just confused about shagun pregency?in your story there is no scope for ishita character?


Thank You...what are you confused about dear?

As for Ishita's character, i don't want to give anything away but she will be there in this story and will also play an important part in it, but you're gonna have to be a little patient, she'll be entering after some updates.😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: RomComFan

Wow... okay then... I do not see this ending well but I can't wait to see where it goes.. you have such a great imagination- terrific by DiscountExtensi" style="border: none !important; display: inline-block !important; text-indent: 0px !important; float: none !important; font-weight: bold !important; height: auto !important; margin: 0px !important; min-height: 0px !important; min-width: 0px !important; padding: 0px !important; text-transform: uppercase !important; text-decoration: underline !important; vertical-align: baseline !important; width: auto !important; background: transparent !important;">job!👏


Thank You! Even I'm waiting to see where it goes...I have the whole story outlined but sometimes instinct just tells you to turn the whole thing around!

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