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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Eyes-Wide-Shut

NIvs!!! I cannot tell you how much I loved this OS! Thank you for posting this brilliance. I hope everything is sorted with your family and all is well.


Thank so much Doc! Those words mean a lot coming from you especially.
Yes, everything is all well now...thanks for asking. 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: RaBir

Beautiful one u write Nivi! I no watch show but I read other story from u so I excite to read some new one. Really unique idea and concept!

Nicely written...you leave me happy and smiley every time.


Thanks a lot for reading and commenting Poonam! I'm glad you enjoyed it even though you don't watch YHM. 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: peace..

@nivi, neha, i m yet to read ur oses gals, will do it as soon as i get some time and give my comments 😊


Will be waiting for your comments Pallavi. 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
Guz, my OS coming up next.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hi, My os will be on Pic No. - 17. It's my second, 1st one's link is here-

https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4327648

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Posted: 10 years ago


Ishra OS - The chronicles of shower (mature) (Picture no.-17)

"Aah...this bladdy backache" said Raman holding his mouth.He was on the couch of their room working in his Mac. He pondered on the word , their. Finally it was literally their. They have got the permanent custody of Adi and Ruhi, now everything was right except that his JKR has stopped talking to him for last three days.

"Simmi did Raman have proper lunch today?" Ishita asked Simmi who gave a mischievous smirk. Though Ishita did not gave lunch to Raman, she had prepared everything and had pleaded Simmi to give Raman everything when he comes for lunch. She herself pretended to be with Ruhi while Raman was at home in lunch time.

"Ishita, wasn't you angry at bhai?" Simmi said.

"Of course , I still am..." Ishita said trying to sound convincing.

"Don't worry, I fed your hubby properly ...Don't forget he is my bhai too" Simmi said.

"Yeah , thanks" Ishita said

"By the way, when are you ending this anger-drama?" Simmi asked next.

"Drama?" Ishita said.

"Oh common , your eyes say that you are not at all angry at bhai, stop pretending" Simmi said next.

Well it was true, Ishita has long forgiven her Ravan Kumar. She could only be mad at him for so long. But she hasn't said it yet. After all Raman deserved punishment on his doings. He had been asking for apology since last three days, but Ishita didn't fell apart.

"Ishita, it's dinner time now, call your husband or I again have to do it on your behalf ?" Simmi asked breaking Ishita's trail of thoughts.

"Yes please..." Ishita said and drifted into Ruhi's room with food for the two.

It's been a regular routine for Ishita. She will have dinner with Ruhi in her room and everyone eles along with Adi will be on dinner table.

Raman came downstairs and saw this, enraged he moved back to his room.

"Bhai what happened? Won't you have dinner?" Simmi asked.

"Stop bothering me Simmi, the one who should is not, Why will you?" Raman said in his trademark taunting tone.

"what are you saying puttar? It's not Ishita's fault, you caused her anger. And don't be upset on dinner" Toshiji said trying to calm her son.

"Ma, Ruhi is my daughter too, if someone doesn't think the same, then let her...why shall she bother if I'm starved or even dead" Raman said and left.

"Ishima why are you crying?" Ruhi with her little hands washed the tears off her Ishima's face.

"Nothing beta, you eat" Ishita said.

Ravan Kumar, he won't ever change- Ishita muttered under her breath. She heard Raman's words and got furious at him. Though his last words were enough to tickle tears down her cheeks.

Raman heard something while having shower. JKR must have come, he thought.

"Ravan he is, always showing anger and tantrums, what anger on food ? Even is stomach is not good" Ishita was sulking to herself in their room with a plate on table. Raman peeped through the door of washroom.

"Ok JKR, lets see how you not talk to me" Raman said to himself and planned a remedy.

"Aah..." Ishita heard Raman shout from bathroom. She forgot all her anger and sulking in a moment and ran into the bathroom, where she saw Raman lying on the floor, eye closed.

"Raman" Ishita cried out loud and bent on her keens, close to his head.

"Raman open your eyes...please Raman talk to me" ishita said cuddling his head on her lap.

Raman was enjoying the affection of his JKR.

"Raman please" Ishita said close to fainting. "You cannot leave me like this I'll die without you, first Ruhi, then you, I'm a human after all how much pain can I take..."

Raman realized he had gone over the top. He opened his eyes.

"Raman ...you you are okay? What happened? Where did you get hurt?" Ishita asked frantically.

"Were not you talking to me" Raman said with a sheepish grin.

"So...so...you we acting?" Ishita said disbelievingly.

"You are quite observant" Raman said.

"You are so mean" Ishita got up and was about to leave.

Raman caught hold of her hand" where are you going? I apologized so many times" Raman said, anger ozing out of his eyes.

"It is not about apology" Ishita said, struggling to get out of his hold.

"Then what?" he said tightening his grip.

"You hide things from me, you don't believe in me, that is why. We are husband-wife, we should share everything but you don't, that's why" Ishita said, tears flowing freely as she let go all self control.

Raman looked at her tear-soaked face and kissed the tears away.Words became secondary rather unnecessery...As their eyes did all the talking, giving assurance for the rest of their lives.The two locked eyes as if till the dooms day.

"Umm...Raman" a loud moan escaped Ishita's mouth as Raman engulfed her lips into his.

"Do you need anymore assurance?" Raman asked "I trust you more than my own life".

"Then share everything with me" Ishita said eye's closed, cheeks beetroot red.

Raman looked at her in disbelief "What are you made of" he said and took his bundle of joy is his arms with utmost care as Ishita buried her face in his chest.

"I love you Raman... You and Ruhi are the two I'm made of" She said as Raman entered her.

"And you are the one along with Ruhi for whom I live for...I love you Ishita and forever will" Raman said.

Their moans and shadows marked the two souls becoming one, setting all their inhabitations and insecurities away for a new start with only brightness of life, away from all the darkness of the past.




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Posted: 10 years ago
Hope u njoy...




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it was wonderful..👏👏👏
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Neha quite good...👏👏
RuMan are always a treat to watch and read..
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Posted: 10 years ago
Ravan Kumar will be ravan Kumar only... But good that they made up...

Good writing 👏👏

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