PicOSthon: 39 OSes | Catch up with the ones u hv missed! :) - Page 24

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: nrn1486


Okay, I'll prepare an index soon😊

yey!
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Posted: 10 years ago
It is very nice and I thoroughly enjoyed it. Thanks for such a beautiful beginning.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Peace... Sorry I don't know your name...

Next update... Please... When will it be there?
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: TamannaSethi

Peace... Sorry I don't know your name...

Next update... Please... When will it be there?

hey will ask d author n let u guys know. I m pallavi.😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
Neethi, it was a treat to read this one shot. They way she dropped hints was so genuine and nothing forced. And I liked how she took matters in her hands. On the flip side, her insecurities and her fears were also so eminent. But I loved how RKB tackled it when she laid her cards down. At the spur of the moment, that's how I always envisioned it.
Like a snap and then just get to the business.

My fav lines were, They held on to each other, giving in to their needs, and amidst gasps and moans, surrendered to the waves of ecstasy, until desires were abated and their bodies, satiated.

It was subtle, yet to eloquent. I loved how you managed to decipher the whole situation in just few words.

And like I said earlier, it was just as I had expected. Subtle and beautiful.

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Posted: 10 years ago
super
loved it
their romance and nokjoks well written
peace.. thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: aaminah123

Neethi, it was a treat to read this one shot. They way she dropped hints was so genuine and nothing forced. And I liked how she took matters in her hands. On the flip side, her insecurities and her fears were also so eminent. But I loved how RKB tackled it when she laid her cards down. At the spur of the moment, that's how I always envisioned it.

Like a snap and then just get to the business.

My fav lines were, They held on to each other, giving in to their needs, and amidst gasps and moans, surrendered to the waves of ecstasy, until desires were abated and their bodies, satiated.

It was subtle, yet to eloquent. I loved how you managed to decipher the whole situation in just few words.

And like I said earlier, it was just as I had expected. Subtle and beautiful.

Aamna, wud u be getting time to write a one shot here? 😊 (Pls say yes..😃)
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Posted: 10 years ago

Aamna, wud u be getting time to write a one shot here? 😊 (Pls say yes..😃)

Ah, pallavi I hate to refuse and specially when you are being so sweet. Can I let you know in by the weekend? I'm super busy nowadays with other commitments.

I can't promise but I'll try my best to write one. Soon. 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: peace..

hey will ask d author n let u guys know. I m pallavi.😊



Okay Pallavi...

Will be waiting to read the update...
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: aaminah123

Neethi, it was a treat to read this one shot. They way she dropped hints was so genuine and nothing forced. And I liked how she took matters in her hands. On the flip side, her insecurities and her fears were also so eminent. But I loved how RKB tackled it when she laid her cards down. At the spur of the moment, that's how I always envisioned it.

Like a snap and then just get to the business.

My fav lines were, They held on to each other, giving in to their needs, and amidst gasps and moans, surrendered to the waves of ecstasy, until desires were abated and their bodies, satiated.

It was subtle, yet to eloquent. I loved how you managed to decipher the whole situation in just few words.

And like I said earlier, it was just as I had expected. Subtle and beautiful.


Thank you so much Aamna for the lovely words. I'm so relieved that you found it subtle.. I was afraid that I had gone overboard with their attraction towards each other.
So glad you liked it😊

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