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Prakrithy

@Arya1991

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Posted: 10 years ago

#351

Nisha.

It's official. You are evil.

Why?

I just about manage to catch my breath after the previous one.

And you give this FULL TOSS straight at my heart. And. Lungs, of course.

Not that that's an altogether bad thing.

It's so true to the SoSy legacy.

Some parts go straight for the heart strings, some knotted my stomach (she lost count of the orgasms... that many?!!!). And some had me laughing like a hyena. Altogether, I'm all out of breath.

Every single thing has two extreme and opposite reactions.

I'd have died for this update. And I'm dying (due to joy and a lack of breath) because of it. 😆

Edited by Arya1991 - 10 years ago

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SunshineBliss

@SunshineBliss

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Posted: 10 years ago

#352

You have no idea what these updates have been doing...pura hila diya Nisha... I knew it..it had to happen on a Monday workday for me...and gosh..work is the wrooonggg place to read it. Phir bhi read it on my phone

Himmat nehi thi to leave a comment then...I left work earlier than usual- benefits of flexi timing - went to school to pick up kids...parked far far far from the gate and took a lonnnggg walk to clear my head. An attempt to recover from the hormonal overture.. Not done girl...absolutely not done😆

Honestly at this point I'm beyond reviewing anything...it's a surge of various feels... The slightest hint of R&B's tenderness pulls the rug from beneath me... When will II see it

This last update ended on an absolutely ROFL note and yes...kind of bringing me back to ground...

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ishruhi

@ishruhi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#353

dont have any words dear...you are making us believe this as real updates after updates...now i cant consider this as a story...that makes you PERFECT here..

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taramira

@taramira

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Posted: 10 years ago

#354

Kya Kahoon. Don't have words. What has he done to her. For a moment I was as frightened as II..OMG she is literally a prisoner. It will be fun to see how she explains this to her parents and others. All sudh budh gone out of the window.

Loved the bit when she runs frightened to RB and hugs him. Awww that was sooo sweet.

Shravu looking a bit scared, what has happened to his Chithi? Feel like punching RB - indeed is a devil. Lekin itna sexy devil ho to...

Emotions all - tenderness, care, passion, naughtiness rolled into this one. NISHA you are indeed a master storyteller. THANKS BUDDY.

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Ashu25

@Ashu25

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Posted: 10 years ago

#355

Yeh kya ho raha hai bhaiyya yeh kya ho raha hai 🤣

ALL are dazed after the super HOT UPDATES...

I bet Nisha is going to wake up to all these zombied forms from tomorrow on 🤣

This is so awesome!!!!

I broke all records of being lazy today..My mom is NOT scolding me aaj suddenly, dont know what got into her 🤣

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nidhi.b23

@nidhi.b23

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Posted: 10 years ago

#356

she is been missing for 3 days...ha ha...appa must be so mad on R&B..his precious daughter forgot about D-II and her parents... sam and vandu are gonna tear her apart...

hats off to you nisha..the chapters keep getting hotter and hotter...as u said enough heat to melt the arctic... too good...

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Ashu25

@Ashu25

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Posted: 10 years ago

#357

This guy has taken over all of us here...Seriously!!! He is JUST ENIGMA ❤️

Her innocent form, defenseless and bruised...him wondering if she actually cared for things to be perfect since day 1 ...I totally totally loved that !!

He is a DEVIL 😳.The way he tricked her into bed as soon as she ate...he is sooo...Main kya kahoon..I simply dont have words for him...❤️

II, please. DO NOT ATTEMPT TO HAVE COUNT OF DAYS NOW ON. You are dazed now and FOREVER 🤣

I so loved the hug...I love how he just picks her up and gathers her to him...So so adorable Nisha

Shravu is back 🤣, and so are II-Shravu hilarious conversations 🤣

Let the riot ensue now...Lets see how this smug of a HUSBAND of hers will put her in uncomfortable situations like this for LIFE 😳😳

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blue5sky

@blue5sky

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Posted: 10 years ago

#358

☺️ many times over!

II is swept off and how...many times over.😉

SO is RnB he acknowledges living his fantasy! ❤️

He has her transported into a totally different dimension - time and space is measured differently for II after this.

Loved Shravu - II interaction! Real world appears far away poor thing she's all at sea!

Would be interesting to see her with her parents!

He had promised Mrs.Iyer that he would kidnap her! She has played willing hostage.

Waiting to see the couple with their family!

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poorna3666

@poorna3666

Beginner

Posted: 10 years ago

#359

Nisha Every update leaves us on the edge...more so for the past three updates !!

And you say you aren't a professional writer !!!!

And pllleeeaaassseee don't even think about ending this story anytime soon

R&B and II ki picture Abhi baaki hai...so no more even distant thoughts of stopping

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SunshineBliss

@SunshineBliss

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Posted: 10 years ago

#360

I remember in one of the very early chapters, II had visions of her folks visiting her in MM late afternoon/evening and R&B waking her up to go meet them downstairs... this was one of her unabashed fantasy sessions

Talking about dreams coming true II - you are there!

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