FF: DESIRE I Prologue - Part 14 - Page 93

Originally posted by: RomComFan

Veee... What was that? So worth the wait. Loved the welcome, the elaborate plans- finally a night in a hotel goes right for these two, geez!She is so overwhelmed and he made it that way, loved the proposal- and the way you worked in the 'deal seal' and the 'kya'... RKB in black... what can be more killer then that?The mention of the Victorian maidens was so perfect... and the way it ended... you're a teeease!😆 I'm already blushing from this, I can't even imagine the next part... but that doesn't mean I am not eager for it. Terrific job ,as always, terrific!🤗

Originally posted by: rutu83

desire indeed!

what i like though is it stays classy - fantastic!👏

Originally posted by: -Gan-

this is good V ☺️...wish you had continued😉...and we're all primed for some grown up love...satvik pyar se pakk gaye hain😛

Originally posted by: Eyes-Wide-Shut

Also Vee wanted to post this a long time ago but now the way your FF is going it fits perfectly with this song called Desire by Ryan Adams, i heard it for the 1st time when they played it on one of the episodes of the The West Wing.

You know me.
You don't mind waiting.
You just can't show me, but God I'm praying,
That you'll find me, and that you'll see me,
That you run and never tire.
Desire
Desire
Desire
Desire

Originally posted by: pomegranate

so, do we assume they did it or are you going to continue in the next chapter? either one is okay with me, at least ishra got to spend time alone with each other. this level of passion and intensity unlike the satvik one we see on screen, now let's hope their date continues to be uninterrupted for the rest of the night☺️ This clandestine romance may not last much longer but I have faith in you.

your a great writer because one can actually feel the palpable tension between ishra, you have written their raw desire while keeping it class. I was listening to music while reading and coincidentally boond boond from the movie roy came on and it made the reading experience even better.

Originally posted by: sush_avina

Veee thank u so much for the update

but y stopped it was so hot...

super amazing

Originally posted by: krishy13

Vee...this update was so tastefully passionate! I love that Raman's love empowered Ishita to be bold and forget the insecurities she mentioned in their car ride a few updates ago! I also love how you have woven in scenes from the show into your take...it just breathes even more life into the story!

*sigh*

Can't wait for your next update! 😊

OMG !!! This was Awesome!!! HOT Hope you'll continue this suite part 😉

Omggg Veee...Your title lured me! Hahahah!
Fantastic update! The choice of words to describe the hotel and everything else was super Beautiful!

And then their kiss.. uff ufff! The way u explain gives me goosebumps! Lol!

Yeh toh original novel jaisa hogaya..Ruhi's custody se pehle IshRa's lovemaking! Wahh wahhh! Ishita being bold here.. I loved it! Waiting for the desirelicious mature update! Lolll ;-) ;-)

The way you described the Taj hotel and Maharaja Suite was amazing, could really feel the luxury of the whole place. I'm so happy that Raman proposed Ishita again with a diamond ring to make it official. Their first date was so beautiful and it's nice that it was done in private. I knew the date was going to lead to something big. It's super sweet how Raman controls his passion around Ishita but looks like Ishita wants him to show it to her. Can't wait for the next update.