FF: DESIRE I Prologue - Part 14

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shadeslayer

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Posted: 10 years ago

#901

Brilliant V!! Blush attack☺️☺️☺️

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Eyes-Wide-Shut

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Posted: 10 years ago

#902

OMG Vee! This is perfect! There is so much passion between these two in this story that their feelings are palpable and I can imagine a couple like this in Delhi dying to spend some time with each other, to hold each other!

While reading this I was reminded of this Ed Sheeran song, that I adore!

Settle down with me
Cover me up
Cuddle me in

Lie down with me
And hold me in your arms

And your heart's against my chest, your lips pressed in my neck
I'm falling for your eyes, but they don't know me yet
And with a feeling I'll forget, I'm in love now

Kiss me like you wanna be loved
You wanna be loved
You wanna be loved
This feels like falling in love
Falling in love
We're falling in love

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rajkona

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Posted: 10 years ago

#903

Oh dear! Why did you stop now? Caught up the last three parts - and they were sublime. Dont make us wait for the next part please!

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Eyes-Wide-Shut

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Posted: 10 years ago

#904

Also Vee wanted to post this a long time ago but now the way your FF is going it fits perfectly with this song called Desire by Ryan Adams, i heard it for the 1st time when they played it on one of the episodes of the The West Wing.

You know me.
You don't mind waiting.
You just can't show me, but God I'm praying,
That you'll find me, and that you'll see me,
That you run and never tire.
Desire
Desire
Desire
Desire

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shidin0117

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Posted: 10 years ago

#905

Vee,

Hot romance b/w the two, temp rising, Ishu breaking free of her bonds, loved how u described Ramans and Ishu's attire and the way love that started in NZ is reaching the crescendo.

Waiting to see what Bala will do and finally the familys reaction.

Hot song selection but perfect for them.

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Shravs

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Posted: 10 years ago

#906

Hey vee...

Awesomely written...

I just want the next update asap...

I can't wait for tat...

Vee.. I would say... There was no mature content... Still its was blush worthy... May b I would expect in the next update...

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Ishu27

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Posted: 10 years ago

#907

Ayyo I am getting addicted.. Sooo nice dear... Great going.. Hope no one disturbs Ishra as in serial.. This time no interruption pls..

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pomegranate

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Posted: 10 years ago

#908

so, do we assume they did it or are you going to continue in the next chapter? either one is okay with me, at least ishra got to spend time alone with each other. this level of passion and intensity unlike the satvik one we see on screen, now let's hope their date continues to be uninterrupted for the rest of the night☺️ This clandestine romance may not last much longer but I have faith in you.

your a great writer because one can actually feel the palpable tension between ishra, you have written their raw desire while keeping it class. I was listening to music while reading and coincidentally boond boond from the movie roy came on and it made the reading experience even better.

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sky-if

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Posted: 10 years ago

#909

I love how you weave in the scenes we all loved like the 'deal pakka seal' into your narrative and they fit perfectly in!

Awesome first date!

Edited by sky-if - 10 years ago

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usaonly

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Posted: 10 years ago

#910

Awesome part for perfect propose the deal was seal and all setting so romantic date. Finally Ishu take first step and openly inviting Raman to continue in what he had plan for her.you always stop at the right time so we have to wait again hope will not take long time. ☺️☺️