FF: DESIRE I Prologue - Part 14

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Veeann

@Veeann

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Posted: 10 years ago

#881

Originally posted by: fugitives123

Oh no romance is the need of the hour so can wait till tmw..but Why so angry with him today?

He cancelled my beach holiday to work at the last moment, and it's too late for me to organise anything else, so I am home alone and bored this Easter weekend. So in a bad mood, but I'll be fine by tomorrow and will update when I'm happier. 😆

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fugitives123

@fugitives123

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Posted: 10 years ago

#882

Originally posted by: Veeann

He cancelled my beach holiday to work at the last moment, and it's too late for me to organise anything else, so I am home alone and bored this Easter weekend. So in a bad mood, but I'll be fine by tomorrow and will update when I'm happier.😆

Oh vee...cheer up yaar. Hope this makes u feel a lil better 🤗

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7350879

@7350879

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Posted: 10 years ago

#883

Hey, its an amazing update,
I am mostly a silent reader, I guess m rplying for the first time for ur story..
Its an amazing story I must say..
I just go on checking this page after every 5-6 hrs to see whether their is any update..
I m just loving it..
Its beautifully written..

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F1a2r3h4a5n6a7

@F1a2r3h4a5n6a7

Beginner

Posted: 10 years ago

#884

I just read this story in one go and it is so brilliantly written.to the writer you are so talented your explanation of emotion and thoughts and the speech of wen the characters talk unbelievable.This is also another very interesting story.the well thought out twists and turns are so wittingly put.As a reader I just don't have the patience to wait for the story to unfold but I am so forced to on this forum.There are such talented writers here but we as readers have to exercise so much of patience in order to find out all the suspense.I appreciate the effort all the writers take on this forum to entertain us .WELL DONE

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Paru

@paru_rox

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Posted: 10 years ago

#885

Yay for V ...coz she got RKB to cut his mane & shave in this FF. I can go all dreamy eyed now 😳😆

Am so glad Bala decided to hold his horses for the evening ... can't wait for the romantic evening to begin

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SurabhiA91

@SurabhiA91

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#886

Hey its an awestory ff ...👏

Have been following it but why r u not updating every day initially it was one update every day. ... Pls continue that way...😊

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@Zola029

Sparkler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#887

Awesome update !

Love how they are keeping their relation secret for now !

But seems the odds aren't in their favor 😆

Even Bala came to know !

But glad he understood them and decided to leave them alone for their date !

IshRu bonding is just so cute !

Thanks for Pms ((:

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shreya

@Shre28

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Posted: 10 years ago

#888

I read the entire story in one go. Love how you developed the plot and Ishraru characters.

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Anu

@RomComFan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#889

Vee,just realized I forgot to comment on this update. So lovely though, loved the way you rewrote the rose moment form the show, Bala's thoughts, RKB's nervousness and especially Ru's sweetness. Glad Bala's going to give them this night... looks like Tuesday will definitely be an interesting day in Ishita's life- can't wait to see what happens.

Before the drama & fallout, the date, their first official, hopefully uninterrupted date- can't wait!

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geno0309

@geno0309

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#890

Vee-last two updates were lovely dearie!
I have to say your RKB is very different than YHM RKB. And I am not at all complaining! Him and Ishita deserve the love and openess in the relationship. I really like how you are making them slowly secure in their relationship-that's absolutely lovely!

Funny how Bala found out-sooo glad you kept him sensible-thankoos:)) I sometimes feel the characters are only as sensible as the writers themselves! And of course it helps immensely when you are writing s FF and not a desi soap-hehe

I love it how you made RKB gift Ishita a sareee-another beautiful touch! Wonderful amalgamation of the rose scene with Ru!

Can't wait for their date! Update soon!!!!
Sorry your vacation got cut short-workaholic puttars I tell you!!! Lol