Ishra TS: Chalo...Dum Lagaake Haaishaa - Part3- Pg 11(completed)

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Jiyaa

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Posted: 10 years ago

#61

Vidya read ol parts. amazingly written👏

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Aani

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Posted: 10 years ago

#62

Lovely one Vidya 😊 sorry for being late am a little tied up 😳 and I so want to see the movie soon now 😳😉😆

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Mehak Ashraf

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Posted: 10 years ago

#63

It was full of romantic! Awesome update. :D

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cloudy24

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Posted: 10 years ago

#64

Di its been a crazy day.. i wanted this day to move in fastforward pace..it weny in rocket speed. But this ts i read in snail pace.loved it😊

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Sunita

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Posted: 10 years ago

#65

OMG!! So romantic and sensuouss!!! Beautiful endinggg!! I loved it!

And the songg.. OMG! Vids... My fav!!!! <3 <3 <3 <3

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Aishwarya

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Posted: 10 years ago

#66

Superb ending Vidya😃..it was hot sensuous what not..😳☺️❤️ brilliant piece of writing👏..I can always imagine the scene in front of my eyes in your works😃 so perfect-esp the dialogues-👍🏼 And yes thanks to you I ended up watching the movie..and I liked it.😳.Very cute n subtle n a very good message😊..Thanks for the TS 😳🤗

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DipaRB6

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Posted: 10 years ago

#67

Nice one! Another romantic story. Loved the protective/possessive puttar in the theatre

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usaonly

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Posted: 10 years ago

#68

Romantic and sensuous update Vidya. They never leave their cute nok jok about the bed and the couch remind me early day of this scence. Finally both give in and have a bed romance. Thank you for the beautiful love story . Hope you will come up with new story soon.🤗🤗