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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thanks for all your comments and encouragement. Hope you enjoy this chapter too. Let me know how you find this one.

Chapter 2

Shagun is acting all sweet with Ishita. She asks her ." Ishita, bohot khush dikh rahi ho, kya baat hai?"
Ishita replies smilingly " Bohot dino ke baad date pe ja rahi hun to"
Shagun acting more sweetly," Achcha ho gaya sab sort out ho gaya Raman ke saath. Waise Italian place ja rahe honge na? Raman ko Italian bohot pasand hai. Mujhe itna guilt feel ho raha tha, abhi achcha laga."
Ishita shrugs and asks" Kis ne kaha mein Raman ke saath date pe ja rahi hun? Have to hurry.. Bye."
Shagun's mind working faster as usual. She quickly goes near Toshiji and says" Mummyji, aap khane mein kya bana rahi ho?"
Toshiji uninterestingly" Chicken lollypop aur muttar paneer. Kyun? Adi ki kuch farmaish hain kya?"
Shagun acting all coy." Nahi nahi. Bas aaj veg kyun bana rahe ho? Aaj to sab non veg wale hain na..."
Toshi indignantly replies" Oye, meri bahu non veg nahi khati. Uske liye khas bana rahi hun."
Shagun intervenes " Lekin aaj Ishita date pe ja rahi hai.."
Toshiji all happy" Kya? Shukar hai mata rani ka, meri baat sun li. Lagta hain jhagda khatam aur romance shuru. Thike thike. Phir bhi ek baar Ishitase pooch leti hun."
Shagun dropped the bomb immediately. " Kisne kaha Raman ke saath?"
Toshiji all confused asked her." Matlab kya hai tumhara? Sabko apni taraf samajhthi ho kya? Kuch bhi bolti hai.."
Shagun trying not to smile and acting all concerned." Are nahi mummyji. Usne khud kaha.. Chaho to pooch lo. Woh Ruhi ke kamre mein hai."
Toshiji replying as if the news has not disturbed her." Badi aai hai mujhe samjhanewali. Tu ja."
Shagun goes smiling as she knows she has planted the seed of doubt in Toshi's head. Toshiji tries to avoid thinking about it but then she thinks if Ishita is angry with Raman, she might take any step. So she decides to tell Raman instead of Ishita. She approaches Raman and tells him everything.
Raman starts to laugh" Kya mummyji, aap kiski baath sun rahi ho. Us aurat se jitna door rahoge utna achcha hoga. Ishita appa ke saath bahar ja rahi hai."
Toshiji was relieved listening to this." fitte muh!!! Tujhe bataya Ishita ne? Sab thik hai na, puttar?"
Raman went all quite and answered" Mujhse abhi tak naraz hai. Bataya nahi usne lekin unki baat suni. Samajh mein nahi aa raha kya karu. Hamesha kuch aur sochta hun aur kuch aur ho jata hai. Hamesha, usko takleef deta hun. Woh kabhi kuch mangti bhi nahi lekin kuch nahi kar pata hun."
Toshiji understanding her son's troubled mind tries to help him. " Sab thik ho jana hai, puttar. Tu jyada soch mat. Us shagun ko kisiki bhi khushi dekhi nahi jati. Jab dekho tang adati rehti hai. Ishita ko time dena, who samajh jayegi. Ya phir tu Vandita se baat kyun nahi karta? Use to pata hoga Ishita ko kaise samjhana hai?"
Raman likes this thought. " Idea achcha hai. Vandita hamesha samajhti hai. Mein aaj hi baat kar leta hun. Thank you mummyji."
Toshiji glad she could help her son. " Oye koi nahi! Tu bhi tayar ho ja, mein khana tayyar karti hun."
The moment she leaves, Ruhi comes in running with Ishita following her behind.Ruhi was all loud and complaining to Raman." Papa, aap Ishima se kaho mujhe chodke nahi jaye. Mujhe bhi jana hai unke saath."
Ishita, wanting to spend alone with her appa, tries different tactic." Arre, mere appa world ke best hai. Isiliye mujhe le ja rahe hain. Tum bhi apne papa se kaho leke jaane ke liye? Dekhte hai kiske papa best hai?"
Ruhi wants to prove her father can be best as well. "Ha papa. Aap mujhe leke chalo. Hum bhi best father-daughter banenge."
Shagun is right outside the door listening to the conversation enters with Adi. Shagun has her plan all ready. "Ha, acha idea hai."
Adi understanding his mother's plan starts "Ha papa. Mein bhi kitne dino se nahi gaya. Hum sab family bahar jate hain. Aap, main, mamma aur Ruhi. Humari family."
Ishita just looks at them and walks away. Before she could walk away, Raman holds her back and says "Family Ishita ke aane se hi complete hogi. Lekin aaj use waqt nahi hai. Maybe some other day."
Ruhi chirps In " Arre maine best father- daughter kaha tha. Aap daughter thodi ho?"
Adi tries his level best to convince Raman."Whatever. Papa, Lekin mujhe aaj jana tha. Aap meri care nahi karte. Hum kyun nahi ja sakte? Papa please."
Raman considering Ishita's feelings decides to avoid the drama today. " Not today, Adi. Tum apne mamma ke saath jao. Aaj mujhe important kaam hai."
Shagun not wanting to spoil her good image tells Adi."Aise zid nahi karte Adi. It's ok Raman. " Adi stomps off the room. Shagun is also not much interested as Raman and Ishita are not together.
Raman decides to put Shagun back in her place." Shagun, shayad tum bhul gayi ho. Main yaad dila deta hun. Please knock the door before you enter. Aur Adi ko bhi sikha dena. Is kamre mein aane ke liye meri ya Ishita ki permission leni padhti hai."
Shagun just smiles and walks off. Raman looks at Ishita thinking she might forgive him but she just looks at him and goes to her cupboard. " Ruhi, Ishima ki help karo na tayyar hone mein."
Raman mutters, " Yeh madarasan aasan nahi hai. Vandita ko call karna hi padega" and moves to balcony. "Hi Vandita, kaisi ho?"
Vandita is surprised " Great! Kuch chahiye tha kya, Raman? Aise achanak phone?"
Raman sheepishly, " Actually kaam tha. Kya tum free ho? If Shravan bhi hai, toh kya main aur Ruhi aa sakte hain? Pizza order karte hain bachcho ke liye aur tumse baatein bhi ho jayegi."
Vandita amazed with all the planning." Pura plan ban chukka hai aura ab permission maang rahe ho? Chalo aa jao. Waise bhi Bala is not there. Lekin pizza veg order karna."
Raman happily" Of course! See you in an hour."
As Raman turned back, he saw Ishita in a plain designer saree which was looking ethereal. Ishita was sitting in front of the mirror and Ruhi was selecting her accessories. He thinks maybe she might go a little soft on him so decides to gift her earrings. He quickly asks Ruhi to get him a glass of water and goes near Ishita.
With dimples in his cheeks he says,"Ishita, tumhare liye gift leke aaya tha. Who lohri hai na kal to pehen lena. Hope you like it."
Ishita looks at the earrings and was shocked,"You took it back from Shagun?"
Raman quickly explains,"Nahi. Tumne diya toh mein kaise wapas maang sakta hun. Maine dusra banvaya ekdum similar. Tumhe achche lage the na earrings. Socha dekh ke khush ho jaogi."
Ishita gives him back the earrings and says,"Iske badle mein respect milega toh aur khush ho jaungi." She walks from there and goes to the drawing room.
Raman mutters," Jhansi ki Rani! Bohot papad belne padenge. Chalo, Vandita se pooch leta hun."
He follows her to drawing room where he sees appa was already ready and talking with papaji. He quickly walked up to them and joined the conversation. Soon Ruhi asked about their plans, to which he replied she is having play date with Shravan and pizza as treat. This easily pleased Ruhi and went to her room to get few things to take to play with Shravan.
Appa felt little guilty and spoke, "Sorry Raman. Tumhe bina pooche plans ban gaye."
Raman assured appa."you don't have to apologize. Woh aapki beti hai. Isme kya poochna? Aap mujhe sharminda kar rahe hain."
Appa took him aside and said "Raman, woh paise nahi liye to bura nahi laga na? Ishu ne diye mujhe paise. Usne insist kiya to na nahi keh paya. Hope you don't mind."
Raman reassured him "Bilkul nahi. Infact, main aapko job offer kar raha tha. Mujhe accountant ki zaroorat hai. Aur aap se achcha koi nahi hai. Abhi bhi available hai aapko chahiye to. Mujhe pata tha aap paise mujhse nahi loge."
Appa was happy thinking how much he respected him. He replies "I will tell you about it. Was there really a job? Ya fir mere liye job vacant ho gayi? Aur I hope tumhe koi problem nahi maine Ishu se paise liye toh."
Raman told him "Appa, job aapki hai agar aapko chahiye toh, abhi bhi. Aur rahi baat paiso ki. Toh I am proud of Ishita. Har bachche ka farz hota hai ki apne parents ki help kare fir ladka ho ya ladki. Aur agar har ladki Ishita jaise apne parents ki support kare to aap ke jaise kisi ko bete aur beti mein farak nazar nahi ayega. Infact, mujhe aapko thank you kehna chahiye. Thanks to Shagun, uski hasi chali gai hai. Aaj aap ki badolat dekhi maine. Enjoy karo, appa."
Ishita seeing their serious conversation turns towards them and interferes. "Kya ho raha hai? Sab kuch thik hai na?
Appa chuckles"Nosy, Ishita? Kuch nahi. Bas permission le raha tha tumhe le jane ke liye."
Ishita immediately replies."Aapko permission lene ki koi zaroorat nahi hai. Main pehle aapki beti hun phir inki biwi. Ab chale. Late nahi ho rahe? Ruhi, idhar aana. Bye bolna hai beta."
Appa was flustered. Raman slyly says "Ab pata chala Jhansi ki Rani kyun kehta hun?"

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Edited by sumamagal - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#12
nice
loved it
continue soon
thanks for the PM
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Posted: 10 years ago
#13
thats so sweet...
loved it...

ishu giving her treatment loved it...

apshagun ki plans flop...suprb...

adi u cant wen raman considers ishu...

waiting fr nxt...

thanks fr pm...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#14
Both the parts were awesome dear
Pls continue soon
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Read both parts n it was simly amazing.update soon n pm me if u can.
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Read both parts n it was simply amazing.update soon n pm me if u can.
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Nice one!! Please continue and pm me if you can...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#18
👏👏👏
Was very happy to read this... Pls continue..
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hey awesome story yar
awww raman n appa's convo was nice
ab pata chala jkr kyun kehta hu was so cute
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Here comes the next chapter. hope you will all like it.

Chapter 3

Ishita ignores the comment and bends down to give kiss to Ruhi. She straightens her hair and says " Enjoy karne. Jhagda mat karna. Yaad hai na, Vandu chitti ke pet mein baby hai. Unhe bilkul takleef mat dena. Room clean kar lena khelne ke baad. Aur main jaldi aaongi. Aaj prncesswali story sunani hai na?"

Ruhi nods to everything and replies " Ha Ishima. Main bilkul tang nahi karungi. Aap enjoy karo. Bye."

As Raman was taking Ruhi to Vandu akka's place, it made her feel calm. She had all the confidence in her sister that she will take care of both of them. She quickly says bye to everyone and goes out with appa. Raman soon follows them after ordering pizza which will be delivered directly at Vandita's place. The moment he enters, Shravan and Ruhi immediately makes plans on what all their plans are for tonight. Watching them, Raman feels a pang and wishes even Ruhi and Adi could be same. Ruhi is still quite uncomfortable sharing her room with Adi and joins them in their room since Adi is home. His thoughts were disturbed by the delivery guy. He collected the pizzas as Vandita asked the children to join and set the table. All during their dinner, Raman and Vandita could not speak a single word as the conversation was dominated by Ruhi and Shravan. As soon as their dinner was ending, Vandita decides to prepare coffee for her and Raman while children helped cleaning the table. After completing their work, they ran to Shravan's room before Vandita could give any more instructions. Taking the coffee mug, both settle on the sofa in the drawing room.

Vandita takes a sip and starts, "Toh Raman, this is first time tum aye ho help mangne. Kya hua? Sab thik hai na?"

Raman is hesitant where to start as he understands Ishita is not telling her anything due to pregnancy. He still takes efforts and explains the situation. "pata nahi Vandita kab khushi dunga use. Lekin pehle use normal pe to leke aau. Help me Vandita, I am desperate. Mere sare plans flop ho gaye hain."

Vandita is smiling looking at Raman's condition. "Patience, Raman. Ishu ko khushi dene ke liye pehle tumhe use samajhna padega. Ishu is not at all materialistic. She always hated them. Pata hai bachpan mein meri sab lists aur demands hoti thi. Aur Ishu mere second hand cheezon pe khush rehti thi. Isiliye appa ki favourite thi. Aaj bhi dekho mujhe chodke ke kaise chale gaye hain. Aane do unhe amma ko bataungi."

Raman slapping his forehead."I understand your jealousy par kya hum meri problem pe concentrate kar sakte hain. Tell me main kya karu ki wo mujhe maaf karegi and we are back to normal. Pehle thode nok jhok se baat vapas banti thi. Lekin is baar, she is not even replying. You have to help me."

Vandita realizing her mistake decides to help him "Raman, you will have to make some gesture like tumne name plate banaya tha ya jaise apni presidentship se resign kiya tha. She will never leave you, thanks to Ruhi par apne relation ko aage badhane ke liye use ehsaas dilana hoga ki uski kya importance hai tumhare life mein. She matters to you."

Raman stops her and tells "You think I don't know that? Itna bewakoof samjha hain kya mujhe? Par kaise, ye batao na. Tum Iyer family ko lecture dene ki bimari hai kya? Sab ke sab shuru ho jaate ho."

Vandita after finishing her coffee says," Ab koi bhi baat tumhe lecture lage toh isme Iyer family kuch nahi kar sakte hain. Anyways, start by including her in all your plans. Kuch bhi karne se pehle use consult karo, opinions le lo. She knows importance of Adi in your life, isiliye Shagun ko tolerate kar rahi hai woh. Ruhi ke homework mein uski madad karo aur school projects to rehte hi hai."

The doorbell rings and Bala enters looking tired. He had to go to Agra to be guest lecturer and had dinner there. He quickly changes and joins them in the conversation. Listening to all this he had a small smile and asked Vandita to prepare coffee for him. As soon as Vandita leaves he speaks with Raman , "Kis ko pooch rahe the help ke liye Raman? Woh ab bohut emotional hai, thanks to pregnancy. Look Raman, kal lohri hai na to use importance dikhane ka achcha mauka hai. Kuch aisa karo jaise tumne temple mein kiya tha. And for once jo Ishu chahti hai waise hi hone do sab kuch. Why don't you invite Adi's friends over? Isme Adi busy rahega aur tumhe bhi pata chalega uska peer kaisa hai. It's high time you realize ki everytime Ishita adjust nahi karegi, Adi aur Shagun ko bhi karna padega.

Raman ponders on the thought, "you are right Bala par Adi ki already psychologist ke pass jar aha hai. Wo bachcha hai aur kitna adjust karega. I know Shagun is not helping lekin abhi use stability chahiye. Shayad Adi ek baar thik ho jaaye fir mein use samjhaunga."

Bala tries to think from his point of view. He thinks and then says, "as far as I know Raman, doctor hamesha healthy environment ki baat karte hai. Wo tum already de rahe ho. Tume har relation ko sambhalna hai not single relation. Agar Ishita is not happy, how can you be stable to provide any kind of environment to Adi? Aur Adi ke harkaton se bachcha nahi lagta. I know you don't want to listen to this and I also know ki Shagun is using him. Par use realities face karni hogi. Jaise Ruhi ne face ki thi. Ruhi ko bhi aasan nahi tha without parents rehana, ya uska custody case. Lekin sab ne usse sach bataya and she was strong. Adi bhi strong hai. Let him the know the importance of Ishita in your life. Kal achcha chance hai, Raman. Sari rasme karo, uske saath raho."

Raman gets all emotional and says "you are right, Bala. i will make her day special tomorrow. Tum bhi raho, Bala. I really need somebody by my side."

In the meantime, Ruhi comes all sleepy. "papa, ghar chale. Neend aa rahi hai."

Raman immediately picks her up. "Ha chalo beta. Late ho gaya hai. Tumhari Ishima bhi aa gai hogi."

After quickly saying his goodbyes, he leaves for home. Thinking about Bala's comments, how strong Ruhi was. Atleast Adi always had his mother by his side, Ruhi was alone. Thank god for Ishita!! Well he will make sure Ishita is happy. Soon he reached home and realizes, Ishita is still not home. After changing Ruhi in her night clothes, he hears the door and realizes Ishita's entry. As soon as she enters, she takes over Ruhi and does everything including brushing teeth quite efficiently. Knowing, she is again ignoring him, he decides to put Ruhi in between them so that Ishita has no option but to sleep on bed. Realizing what Raman is up to, she goes to the bathroom to change herself. While she is in the bathroom, he quickly writes a note and keeps at her dressing table and feigns sleep.

Once Ishita is back, she quickly goes to the dressing table to apply moisturizing cream. She looks at the note and reads it. It said

"You've always been the mature one between us two. I hope you'll forgive me like you always do."

Reading this, she smiles a little and proceeds towards bed. Seeing the slight smile, Raman sleeps peacefully at night.

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Criticism and compliments are welcome. Thanks in advance 😊😊

Edited by sumamagal - 10 years ago

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