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Posted: 10 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: shravsss

10 mins all upto read...
thnkyu...

love yu...


updated with OS: BUDDIES FOR LIFE...pm will be in a while...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#82
ggod update and welll progress of the story..just love it to core... on the subjects u choose and the intense story line u choose ...its just superb ... and also a difficult taks to showcase the feelings and emotions of ishita's character well define... pooor raman lecture biwi se bhi milta hain aur ab uski jijuse bhi...pls pls continue😆😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
#83

Originally posted by: agneeputra

ggod update and welll progress of the story..just love it to core... on the subjects u choose and the intense story line u choose ...its just superb ... and also a difficult taks to showcase the feelings and emotions of ishita's character well define... pooor raman lecture biwi se bhi milta hain aur ab uski jijuse bhi...pls pls continue😆😆



thank u so much...
ishu's feelings are really hard to express...i have to work on it...

ab lecturer se lecutre nahi milega tho kya milega...😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
#84
OOhhh wowww!! this is awesumm.. beautifullyy written!
i so want this to happen in the serial.. something very real..kash cvs notice this piece of work! its soo emotional yet beautiful!

cont soon.. cant wait to knw hw raman is gonna solve ishu's pain n insecurities.. :D

loved what all bala said!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#85

Originally posted by: avni_19

OOhhh wowww!! this is awesumm.. beautifullyy written!

i so want this to happen in the serial.. something very real..kash cvs notice this piece of work! its soo emotional yet beautiful!

cont soon.. cant wait to knw hw raman is gonna solve ishu's pain n insecurities.. :D

loved what all bala said!


the compliments are more take yar...
even you are an amazng writer...

i didnt plan anything about ishu's POV and raman's dealing...

i really want bala and raman to talk abt ishu's past...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#86
Awsm part dr.
Bala and his talk with raman is superb.
Cont sn. Tnx 4 pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
#87

Originally posted by: RMGT

Awsm part dr.
Bala and his talk with raman is superb.
Cont sn. Tnx 4 pm


thanks...

i write another OS..check it out when u have time..
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Posted: 10 years ago
#88
omg wow shravi what an updt yaar awesome from me love full bala convo with raman the way he explain him well done you potrait bala very well love it let hope we could get thing like this in show soon n ishita reply wow too shagun is a hopeless case sorry for late comment yaar well dont thx for pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: pretty_h

omg wow shravi what an updt yaar awesome from me love full bala convo with raman the way he explain him well done you potrait bala very well love it let hope we could get thing like this in show soon n ishita reply wow too shagun is a hopeless case sorry for late comment yaar well dont thx for pm


thank u so much...
glad u liked it...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#90

PART-3

NOTE: i dont it will reach your expectations or not... not proof read...ignore mistakes...

Raman tells bala that he will talk to her and about to move but shagun comes and starts her drama by saying...see ishita doesn't love ruhi...she has a wish to become mother...she wont love ruhi...she married you for just money...this is enough for raman and raises his hand on her but stops and says if you a speak a word against my ishita then I will not think to change this into action... better stay away from me and my wife... you are just satying here as adi's mom and don't cross your limits...I wont spare you to throw out if you speak a word against my ishita...

He moves to his room where ishu is crying continuously... she is on floor with legs folded and kept her hands around her legs bent her and soobing... raman can clearly her sobs... he slowly moves to her and keeps his hand on her...before who hand it is she says jiju... raman gets sad but keeps quiet... she slowly realises it is raman hand and stiffens herself and becomes DR.Ishita again... she gets up and says iam going to amma's house by wiping her tears but raman tries to stop her...she is admant goes to rest room and washes her face...applies make up and about to go but raman says your eyes cant hide any thing ishita... so you better stay here I wont ask you any thing... ishu don't want to stay infront raman so she says I am going and leaves room...

She goes to amma's house and raman is behind her so that no one can question her on any thing...raman made ruhi to play with shravu so that ishu cant face any questions from her...

Ishu takes vandu to room and amma joins but vandu signals her to go so that she can talk to her... bala sees raman and understands that ishu did not say anything to him...bala comes to raman and says bangayi na Dr.ishita( I said you na she will become Dr.ishita)... he nods in yes and says I cant see her like that... why cant she trust me to share her pain... its not about trust on you its about her insecurity and weakness... just keep and calm listen to sister's talk ishu wont say anything to vandu also...

Vandu asks ishu to sit beside her... she obliges and knows what coming in her way but she is became that stubborn in these years that even she cant share this with vandu... vandu asks ishu are you okay... she nods and smiles by saying she is morethan okay... to which vandu says don't act infront of me... to which ishu says I just trough my past that's it and this insecurity and weakness will stay with for life time and this is my problem and I have to deal with it so I can manage myself... you don't bother about it...vandu interrupts and says don't act stupid... you can share with me and dont you dare to distance youself from me but ishu says this is not good for your health and baby's too so keep calm and take rest... I will get back to normal with an hour or by night... and makes vandu sleep as you starined yourself from morning... she makes her sleep and moves out... she see ramana nd bala but moves out...

Bala says I said you na... raman asks for solution...to which he says only I can do it but I want you to assure her and take out the pain from her...accepting life's truth is one thing and not coming out from that pain is another thing so make her to come out from that pain...

Raman goes to his home and finds ishita in their room... she is on the couch and having night clothes in her hand... raman notices her and her eyes are still moist so she sits beside her and keeps arm around her takes her into a side hug... She wants to be in her bubble but raman holds her tight and says I wont ask you any thing but allow me to be with you as your support...I cant see my strength like this... (mein apni takat ko toothe hua nahi dek sakta...) she finds some solace in his words and rests her head on him... they stay for some time and raman protectively holds her... they did not talk with each other but ishu can see raman's concern and protectiveness...

After some time raman asks ishu to change...meanwhile he goes to bring food... when she comes back she sees food on table and looks at him...he says I don't know how you are feeling...what is going on in your mind...our family wont ask you any questions but I don't you to look their silent faces and questions eyes... so I brought food here have it and hands it to her... she suprisngly asks him to feed her and asks him to share the food with her... raman happily feeds her and eats himself too...

Raman asks for a walk as he ate all masala food due to function and want to have a walk outside... she agrees for it as she don't want to suffocate in this room and needs some fresh air too...

Ishra are their compound and walking with silence... raman want to ask,assure and make her talk but he don't know how to start and what to say her... they walk for sometime... raman finally breaks the silence and asks ishu that she trust him...?? To which she says yes and raman asks then what is stopping her to share the problem with him... she says I don't want to share this with anyone... I have be with it till end of my life... raman asks her to stop and says each and every time you cant fight alone sometimes we need others to fight as I need you always... if you don't want to say its okay I will call bala share with him atleast I can satisfy that you open up with some other... ishu stops him and says no don't call anyone... they are already disturbed with morning issue I don't want to trouble them more... he says fine and they continue walking... when they are about to return to their home raman says I will wait for the day ishita when you youself share your problems, pain and insecurity with me...

Ishu holds raman hands and asks him to come with her...ishra both sits on the bench and ishu starts speaking with him and says what came into your mind when you saw me crying this morning...don't lie me... and your answer depends to continue my convo or not... raman directly says I felt bad for you when bala's mom said you cant experience these phase and these feelings...I tought you will again gone into past of the day where you known this fact of life that's it... she says you didn't think that I was remembering subbu or time spent with him... he says no...I know you wont think about him the same way you think before... I know you this much ishita that you don't have place for him and the presence of him not matter to you... you have moved on and I always think to move on like you but I cant do it...

Ishu says frankly I never tought about subbu after his decision... that only children will be reason to stay together not love... It became difficult but I composed myself... when I seen him first at shrvu's function of upnayanam...I felt bad seeing because his mother taunted on my state and remembered his words of child and tought of my relationship ended and its good that ended... because if he comes to know after marriage then he would have left me... so I felt happy at that moment and ruhi... she came to my life like an angel... she always took away my pain with her talk and with her gestures... I married to you because I want to become her mom and protect from you... how foolishly I tought of you like that and she smiled saying that after a long time in the day... then I understood you and your love towards ruhi and family... our equations changed... I did not even realise when our equations changed frankly I forgot about everything that happened in my life...I don't even remembered that incidents... once I felt bad when subbu's mom taunted during pooja's pregnancy but ruhi answered her... from that moment I never tought my problem raman... iam happy being ruhi's ishimaa but today feeling akka's child kick iam back to dream of woman who desired to have a child... I couldnot control at that point of time... I never wished for a child after having ruhi as child but today i just remembered it... and I cant run away any more and starts crying... raman takes her into embrace and says dont be sad... I know how much you love ruhi and what can you do for her...I know every woman completes becoming mother and you are complete by becoming ruhi's mom... I never doubt you on love you shower on ruhi... but iam jealous because I cant shower my love on ruhi like you... she says you too love her and I know that...

Raman asks seriously to ishita that do you want our child...?? To which she never in her dreams think of that... but raman asks again to which she says I don't know... raman takes her hands into his and says for me you are ruhi's mother... and I always want to support you, be with you and grow old only with you... so I want you to keep trust on me and share all your pain, problems and insecurities... Don't think if its correct time or not just share when you feel to share it... ishu naughtily asks at mid nights tooo...he smiles and says yes you can wake up me at any time and you can share it with me... she nods and smiles at him... raman says when think of having our child I will be with you and I don't want to talk about this but ishita medical technology have improved very much and we can talk about your case if you wish... ishita says nothing but raman says I really want our child ishita but when you will be ready for it not for my wish... ishu speaks by saying for that fisrt we have to do other things in a bold manner... raman suprisngly looks at her...she change her say by saying first you have to tell me those three magical words... and then I can think what to answer for it and winks at him...

He smiles at her and says I know many tricks to hear YES from you and you don't challenge your ravan kumar...mehange apdega challenge...(may you have to pay for the challenge...) and says I promise you to that I wont make you let down for anything and I want a promise from you that what ever happen in our lives from now on WE WILL FACE IT TOGETHER...

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Edited by shavi2311 - 10 years ago

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