FF || Tu Hai Ke Nahi || Chapter 5 on page 33

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Why, hello!

Since a little blabbering is customary when it comes to my notes-
This one was running in my mind for a while but since 'way back into love' had me down in the dumps due to its dark theme I decided to give myself a break and you all too. Don't frown, it's for a day only. Perhaps I'll run both in parallel if I get enough time that is.

Let me know what you think and if I should continue this.

The title is subject to change, until I find a better and an apt song. This one is from Roy. An amazing composition.

Love,
Amna

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Teaser

"What's the matter?" He asked as he sat across from her and placed an order for a club sandwich for himself.

"Nothing.." She replied trying to smile. A smile that didn't reach her eyes, he noticed.

"He didn't come?" He asked and cursed himself mentally for broaching this topic. Her fiance. Somebody she was engaged to. Somebody claiming her as his. Somebody not him.

"He can't come." She replied, wondering for the hundredth time why did she feel the need to defend him in front of her colleague. Or was she just pacifying herself trying to make an excuse on his behalf?

"I guess you'll have to make do with my company for now then." He shrugged as he suggested.

"I guess." She smiled. This time a genuine one.

She picked her orange juice and started drinking, looking beyond the glass windows of the cafeteria. Trying to figure out if all her life was going to be about waiting. While he looked at her and wondered if he could ever be lucky enough to have her just for himself.

"What are you looking at?" She asked, bringing him out of his reverie.

"I'm wondering if you've always had such big nose."

She touched the tip of her nose and scrunched it, "its too big, isn't it?"

He shook his head and bit his sandwich. "Not really.." He looked closely. "Its not as thick as your skull."

Main aas pass tere
Aur mere pass
Tu hai ke nahi

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Reserved

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Wow are you treating us with two stories at the same time? I guess for your own good it's better if you don't write on the other one everyday until the dark days go by.

Once again a very mysterious beginning. Who was Ishita waiting for? Subbu?

Ishita and Raman are work colleagues?

As you know this pankha of yours -me- will read everything you give us either it makes me smile or cry!
Edited by -Srishty- - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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I'm typing this again coz IF is a bitch.

I'm gonna go all psychotic girlfriend on you.

DO YOU KNOW HOW HARD IT IS? HOW HARD IT IS TO (YOU'RE SUCH A PERVERT, #JUDGINGYOU) 😆 AS I WAS SAYING, HOW HARD IT IS TO LEAVE YOU BEHIND WITH TWO UNREAD STORIES, AND NOW YOU ADD ANOTHER ONE?

HOW DARE YOU?

😲

GREAT. HOLD ME BACK. HOLD ME NOW. HOLD ME HERE. #DRAMA

#GETTINGRIDOFCAPSLOCK #DON'TWANNASCAREYOU

I have a question though. Serious types. How do you do it? Come up with so many premises, never the same, and stay dedicated to updating them. How?

It's done. Kissed and sealed.

When I come back in April we're setting a Wattpad account for you. So that my little fashion designer can have a part time or better yet, full time author.

Keep spinning the yarns of fantasy.


I love you.

And I'm gonna miss you so much.

You know I love you so much that I creep you out with all the excessive PDA

#MISSINGYOUALREADY

#IDONTWANNAGO
Edited by AraBearxx - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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interesting...pm me when u update
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Posted: 10 years ago
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are wah- a new one?
yayay
intersting start
continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Yay another story from you! Raman is secretly crushing on ishita but she has a fiance already. So far it is good please continue.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Girl you are giving ittu sa teaser and then asking if you should cont or not.
Just get ready with next part soon. Waiting eagerly.

Your update actually refresh the mind amni.

And cant you just pm.
if not for contntn..atleast for a new start
so that i dont miss it

Tumahra lakh lakh dhanyawad hoga..if u do😆

Cont soon now...all of them
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Posted: 10 years ago
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sounds bery interesting
update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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hey update soon...
its treat to read ur writings...


waiting waiting...
do pm plss...

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