FF || Tu Hai Ke Nahi || Chapter 5 on page 33

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Anu

@RomComFan

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#21

Quel Surprise!

Wow...seriously if i didn't have the habit of randomly skimming pages I would have missed this...😒

Regardless, this is a fantastic start, me likey.😆

If your other fic is a bit dark this is a lot lighter and brighter and more typical beginning... I am seriously intrigued.

Love the idea of them being colleagues ... love the yearning and the apparent obliviousness of it.

Can't wait for the next part!XX

Edited by RomComFan - 10 years ago

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..TeriDeewani..

@..TeriDeewani..

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#22

Tu hai ke nahi its superb don't change the title.
And contd soon
It was great.

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usaonly

@usaonly

Stunner

Posted: 10 years ago

#23

Another interesting start Amna I agree with our friends please atlease PM for new story so we all can follow you dear. Hope you are feeling better now.🤗🤗

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Swathi

@swathibalan

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#24

Interesting start👍🏼..excited to read the next part😊

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iyuvi

@iyuvi

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#25

Wohoo another story from you.Love the prologue and I'm sure I will love the story even more.

p.s:"Tu Hai ke Nahi" Im already in love with the song😛

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aaminah123

@aaminah123

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: Anum_says
interesting...pm me when u update

Thanks anum!

You know the drill, bookmary it please :)

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aaminah123

@aaminah123

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: rutu83
are wah- a new one?
yayay
intersting start
continue soon

Thanks for the review Rutu!

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aaminah123

@aaminah123

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: pomegranate
Yay another story from you! Raman is secretly crushing on ishita but she has a fiance already. So far it is good please continue.

Thank you for the input zara!

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aaminah123

@aaminah123

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: ankita_sidana
Girl you are giving ittu sa teaser and then asking if you should cont or not.
Just get ready with next part soon. Waiting eagerly.

Your update actually refresh the mind amni.

And cant you just pm.
if not for contntn..atleast for a new start
so that i dont miss it

Tumahra lakh lakh dhanyawad hoga..if u do😆

Cont soon now...all of them

Ankita, thank you for such lovely comments :)

Okay. I give in. I'll try my best to do so next time.