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Neha

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Posted: 10 years ago

#51

Originally posted by: desikalakaar
This was beautiful!!!

Thank you! <3

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Neha

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Posted: 10 years ago

#52

Originally posted by: Blue2020
Wow, loved it! 😃

Thank a lot!

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ABI

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Posted: 10 years ago

#53

Pure Bliss. That is what this OS gave me. Sometimes the simplest way to say something is the most beautiful way to say it. IshRa have always been one such couple. Though Raman wanted to confess to Ishita in a grand manner, I think having him say those words in that exact moment was perfect and like Ishita said, what matters most is that he loves her and she loves him too. As long as you have your loved one with you, any simple moment can turn magical and you portrayed that beautifully in this OS.

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Neha

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Posted: 10 years ago

#54

Originally posted by: RomComFan
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This is so beautiful Neha! Very well done, seriously.

I love the 'extraordinary in the ordinary ' kind of deal you have here. Very beautiful. Very realistic.

I appreciate him talking it all out and asking her directly and not letting her void it. We nneed that directness and understanding on screen.. not just the constant praising- hat's just a copout.

And the moment about Subbu- perfect- love. Because even after everything that feeling of ' thank you for your stupidity now you have 10 seconds before I break ur kneecaps' is still there. Some fans think Subbu is a nonentity now... I disagree and I appreciate that inclusion here.

The ILYs simple, poignant and just perfect. Love the way it came out- love their reaction, love his fumbling explanations of wanting the perfect 'moment' and her dismissal of same.

Love the little moment of affection, not much rally but for them, in their frame of mind, after everything they've been though- beautiful.

and i appreciate Raman's retrospective about his worthiness- you know that's always something that I adore about them both the sense of awe and unworthiness in this this love , in this person... and you described it so beautifully.

And finally , finally- Ru- my perfect princess. Loved his grumblings about her as well as her little moment at the end. I read that and immediately thought of her comment the other day about what Papa does with Ishimaa... 🤣

All in all a terrific job. With a beautiful title... had the song playing while i read this BTW- mood music was perfect!😉

I bow to your awesomeness!

Anuuu 🤗

Made me blush.

People in my stories always talk it out. A result of the frustrating non-talks they have on screen. 😆

I really wanted to keep them in character - hence the Ishita is my savior thoughts by RKB. But seriously, it's time Shagun's residence in their house is discussed. It is frankly weird to see her roaming around the house as if she owns it. These two NEED to address the elephant in the room instead of ignoring her and taking the high way.

Subbu is by far one of the most important yet not discussed character in the show. If they gave even five percent of the story's plot to him, I'd be so happy. He was Ishita's past and he remains there - cool. Then, can you please throw away Shagun into the past too?

Also, on a shallow note, possessiveness is hot in alpha men.☺️🤣

Ruhi is the binding force for these two. I included her only because she gets the entire credit for this love story and at this juncture, she'd personally love to witness her efforts making a difference this big.

Collide is one of the most played songs on my playlist. And to think it came out about twelve years ago.😳 I wasn't even eight then!

I love how you play the songs I base my titles on. Makes me proud for some reason. #iamweird #dealwithit

As for the confession part - I've already written this about a hundred times, but I really feel as though if it's not planned prior and just said to the other person in a fit of passion or just in a little moment you share, it makes a much romantic impact. Which is why, when Raman just watches Missus giggling and being immature, he blurts the first and only thing in his mind. That's <3

Thank you so much for the comment.

I love you. #putting it out there

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Neha

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Posted: 10 years ago

#55

Originally posted by: -Srishty-
This OS took me to a dreamy world. It was mindblowing.

Just what I needed before going to bed, I'm sure I'll have sweet dreams now.

The confession was so simple but yet meaningful and it just felt right.

It was PERFECT👏

Thank you Srishty :)

Simple things are sometimes much more effective than grand ones! Wonder when the CVs will get that memo...😆

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Neha

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Posted: 10 years ago

#56

Originally posted by: Wela
Awesome!! Here's too your muse coming true!!
One of the best confessions I have read 👏

Thank you :)

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Neha

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Posted: 10 years ago

#57

Originally posted by: Veeann
Perfect. Just perfect. This is the confession OS I wish I had written. Loved it.

👏

*Blush*

I just read your confession OS, and I can tell you for sure that it was better. #nokidding

Thanks so much, V! <3

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Neha

@SurrealFantasy

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Posted: 10 years ago

#58

Originally posted by: yhmmylife
This is so romantic...👏👏

loved ti this how it should be ..i don't want any grand gestures for confession..but simply suttle way too good..

i like it that you had ruhi also with them their Raman's anchor in life.
loved the frustration and Raman saying ruhi is not sleeping with her parents tomorrow 😆

and in the end choti mirchi..taking a pic😆..too cute😊

Thanks so much.

Subtlety is something YHM is not good at nowadays. Stolen glances and forehead and cheek kisses...much better than OTT dances and coffee dates with violinists!😳

I'm sure after seven years of celibacy, Raman would be quite frustrated!😆

Ruhi WOULD TOTALLY do that if given a chance. I can see it!

Thanks again :)

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Neha

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Posted: 10 years ago

#59

Originally posted by: yshu8
Surely so surreal,
That theme of mohabbatein ,Raman's love for adi, guilt abt how he cud never give back wat his little angel ruhi gave to him, how he is one lucky man to have ishita in his life ,all just in one go
Take a bow
Its novel to see that part of Raman ,which concerned more abt ishita's insecurity of having shagun around, a much needed convo, that was

The mere thought of his ,to make the moment special for her, thinking to himself ' for once it has to be abt her ,not him' ,somehow tugs at my heart ,more than anything
Again that was so ishra ,to have those coy talks amidst the most sensible talk

Loved it

YHM is based on Raman, Ishita and Ruhi. The others just take up the screen space for no reason. I really felt for Ruhi during the beginning episodes, hence the introspection of Raman into how much the kid has suffered.

I'm really happy that you felt it was in character.

Thank you so much!