My original scene after Lohri part 3 page 5 - Page 3

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Posted: 10 years ago
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i couldnt stop myself from writing...u and ur tracks really!!

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Posted: 10 years ago
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nice one Leo.😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: dsgirl

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i couldnt stop myself from writing...u and ur tracks really!!




Thanks


Well you know me well

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice but Mihir ko kya pata chala. 😲😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: mnr123

Nice but Mihir ko kya pata chala.😲😛

pata nahi
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Posted: 10 years ago
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excellent piece of writing Leo👏👏 us mein suspence hai drama hai tragedy haisab kuch aik sath wow
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: ...EhSaas...

I know it who did that😉




Maybe not haha
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Posted: 10 years ago
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read 2 parts...

brilliantly written...

i never tought mihir vl complain...suprb twst...

nw i want to see wht shagun vl do...


ishu pls mak diffcult fr raman...

pm me fr nxt...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Part 3

Mihir goes outside the house

And gives a sad smile

He remembers the slap and rAman decision to end the relationship with him and ishita disappointment

Mihir sighs

But then

Mihir to himself "koi gaal nahi par mujhe ye to karna hi tha "

Mihir to himself "mujhe yeh Saab pata lagne ke baad main chup kaise reh sakta tha "

Mihir remembers a flashback

Mihir few days had come to meet Raman

And he had spotted Ruhi crying on the sofa in the lobby

On asking numerous times

Ruhi had told him how she had heard airhead and adi plotting to throw ishita out "

Ruhi had told him " how she had heard adi gloating about how he had taken wrong medicines to trap ishita "

Ruhi had told him "how adi bhaiya had told her papa will choose airhead over ishita "

Mihir "mujhe ye Ruhi ke liye karna hi tha "



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