OS: it's hard to face....

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Posted: 10 years ago
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hello guys...
after knowing on going crap i cant stop myself from writing this... this will hav only ishu's frastiuations... no other POV's are concentrated... only ishu's feelings and her point of view is taken...

Note: not proof read...ignore mistakes...

Ishu is completely shattered after listening her mummy ji and papaji's and decided to take her life major dcecision...

she immediately went to ruhi's room...she took her in her arms... and immediately took her into hug and kissing her cheeks at it may be her last time... ruhi who innocently asked her ishimaa what is bothering her... to which says she is going to chennai for some days and iam alreday missing you... to which ruhi says becomes pale and says i will come with you...i cant stay here without you... please take me with you... to which she composes heself and says ruhi will be missing school and this will disturb ruhi's studies so ru will come when holidays will be there... ishimaa will talk to ru daily... and ru have to take care papa also... as ishimaa will not be there... she some how make ruhi understand and comes to her room... she calls neil and says about her decision... and asks him to start making divorce papers and ruhi's custody papers...


she packs her bags and completely takes her belongings which she brought with her and leaves all the other which was given by thier in laws and raman...


she tells everyone that she is going her amma's house for sleeping... ruhi says she will sleep with her ishimaa... everyone tought she just want to stay with her parents or she want some time to her for recent turn of events... so anyone didnt say anything but two very happy with this and are enjoying...


ishu makes ruhi sleep and tells her decision to her parents...even they are supporting her and told that they will be staying with her only and they cant stay here anymore... she didnot say anything and want to her room... she spent her night by admiring ru... and cuddled her protectively and making her night most wonderful that she can remember life time...


ishu didnt slept for a minute... she woke up ru at her regular time and took her to home... mrs.bhalla and raman seen her and asked her is she is fyn... she says she is fine and took ru to bath room and mede her bath... she made ru ready for school and comes with her to break fast... she is feeding ru and saying her to take care, complete her home work, project on time and not to bother anyone and behave like a good girl...


all are gathered for break fast and listening to ishu nd ru's talk all are getting many doubts but they tought of keeping quiet and talk to ishu after ru leaves for school...


ru went to bring her books and project from room... and she says i will miss you and kisses her on cheek and says happy journey... while leaving to school...


everyone doubts are reaching to new heights and they cant wait anymore as ru went to get her books and project... raman starts asking questions where are you going... no actually why are you going...??


she keeps calm and didnt bother to answer any of his questions... raman anger raeching his new heights due to her silent behaviour...


raman holds her hand tos top her but she jerks off but raman is admant of not leaving her... she asks to leave her in loud voice... which very new to everyone... becuase ishu never behaved like this... she jerks off his hand with her other hand...


mr&mrs iyer arrives and asks is she ready... she says yes and im waitng for neil... after meeting him we can leave... raman shouts out of his voice asks why neil is coming and what you are upto... why amma nd appa brought their laguage... and what ruhi is saying... she keeps calm and not answer him any thing... asks romi to get her bags from room...


neil arrives with mihir... neil handover papers to her...s he signs them and gives it to raman... romi brings bags of ishita... she gives some jewellery to her mummyji by saying thees are some jewellery which you gave after marriage and im returning to you... as iam leaving this house permenently and i dont have right on this... before toshiji can say anything raman how dare you to do this... she just shouts by saying you dont have any right on me... better be in your limits with me...


she gives divorce papers and ruhi's custdy papers to raman by saying iam giving ruhi's custody to you and i can take it any time if i feel ruhi is not safe here... and i never want to your majboori so iam moving from your life... ru comes in mean time but ishu takes neelu to take her inside...


raman says why are you doing this... i know i shouted on you without your mistake but iam sorry for that... she cuts him and says iam not a small girl to leave you becuase you are shouting on me... i really cant take this any more raman... i comprimised on many things after marrying you... but now i cant compromise... i know you love adi alot and even i tried my best to keep him happy but iam failed in it... but you all never seen my efforts towards adi and blamed me for every thing... i kept silent without any mistake of mine... to just keep peace in home... but you always made me culprit... today i wont be quiet and i didnt do any mistake till now... adi wantedly took wrong medicine just to take revenge on me and make low in our eyes... even i took that blame without a word... i didnt a spoke rude to shagun for a single time too... but again you belived adi in that and didnt even bothered to lsiten to me once... i had ennough raman... i cant die every day by killing my self respect without my mistake...


so i decided to walk out from this marriage... and i dont any proceedings further i made sure every thing will go without any problems... and i dont need any alumini from you... iam a doctor and i can take care of my family with my earnings... i transferd some property to ruhi,,, and i t will be only her's... and i jsut need a favour from you... he without saying a word nods... i need ruhi only once in my life... please bring her when i want her because my last rights will be performed my daughter only not by some else ... she is not less than a son to me...only she ahs rights to perform my last rituals...


shagun and adi are very happy... and raman need not to guess any thing as every word spoke by ishita are true and he indeed didnt try to understand her...


romi comes to her and says bhabhi... this cant be any reason to leave bhabhi... please say me why you are doing this with us... she keeps calm and gives some cheques to romi and says these for you, simmi and rinki as my token of love... you get new bike with this... romi asks her not leave but she says i cant help this time...and take care of my ruhi...


mrs.bhalla who was silent till now says you cant go ishita... we wont allow you to go... to whcig sorry mummyji but i wont listen to you... and dont make me rude to answer you... toshiji is admant and stops her but she says i cant be here because i cant give a child to your family and raman... i cant fulfill your wishes of child and who ever comes to my life have to accept this... i tought you all are accpeted but when i heard yours talk with papaji last night i decided to leavr from here at that moment only...


toshiji its not what you are thinking ishu... i just said casually to him that adi is only hier of this house and i cant have anyother and stops but ishu continues and says because i cant become mother and if by chance i will get pregnant u cant say it will be a boy... hain na mummyji...???


everyone are shut and mr.bhalla speaks... i always supported against family but not today ishita... ishu says okay papaji i wil just ask one ques you answer me... then i will stay here...

ishu says if simmi or rinki will be in my position will allow them to stay in their sasuraal or will u allow them to make apologise with out hearing them...evry one has no answer for this... she leave this papaji if adi's medicine and shagun's isnsult which actually didnt happend but if it happend by other members of family will ask them to apologise without hearing them...??? again every one are silent... you never gave me a place of daughter in your house... iam just daughter in law or betteer iam care taker of raman's family and raman's children...



she is about to leave but romi stops her by saying iam coming with you... i wont stay in this house where you get respect... she stops him but he says if you wont allow me to come with you its okay but iam not staying here... he packs his bags and holds ishu's hand but simmi and rinki stops by saying we are coming with you and ruhi is also coming with us... we dont ruhi to be grown in environment like this...?? where only son gets priorty...



simmi, rinki gets ruhi and gets their bags and says to ruhi that they are going with her ishimaa and we are leaving this house... she smiles nad hugs her ishimaa... by saying i love you and thanks for taking me with you...


romi asks mihir why he was here to which he says i know about this yesterday only...when bhabhi called neil iam with him... and i came here to tell raman that iam resigning job and taking my sister with me... and holds ishita's hand... and says i left my family because they cheated raman and his family... and today im leaving raman and his family because they never bothered to know the truth...


romi too says iam leaving the job and we never fill ruhi with poision so never think she will hate you... me and mihir are their to take care bhabhi and ishita will remain as my bhabhi and me and mihir will sure that ishita and her family, simmi, rinki and ruhi dont face any troubles and we will keep them happy...


P.S: i dont want to hurt anyone but this ghar ka chirag irks me...

P.S.S: coments and critsisim are accepted... i really wish this happens in the show...

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Akshatha19 thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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wow... perfect...
awesome OS...
Ishita very well done, just loved her yaar, the pain the emotions she wwas going through, without any mistake he has been listening scolding...
seriously very good step taken by ishita i liked the fact that
Raman was always thinking he has taken her for granted, reality check was very much needed for him...
i loved when Ishita shouted on raman, the line ishita made me feel ver bad- i want her because my last rights will be performed my daughter only not by some else ... she is not less than a son to me...only she has rights to perform my last rituals...
what an question asked by ishita to papaji, uske toh baad bhaja gayi...
romi was too good 👏,mihir simi,rinki 👏👏well done...


good job...
hope some similar will happen in show too...
Edited by Akshatha19 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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They won't show anything like this Shavi, but I wish they would. It would be a fitting reply to the Green Lantern's disciples/slaves.
Good story. 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
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All I can say is I completely understand your frustration and why you took your story in this route... good job.

This will never happen on the show... but we need something.

At this point the show is becoming intolerable- no balance, intelligence or respect... ridiculous!
Edited by RomComFan - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Shavi love u dear...its amzing...
i had tears in my eyes while reading this...u r right ishu is treated as DIL only not as a duaghter...and i m telling u if i were in her place na even i wud have done the same now wonder how much ever i love my husband but i ll never keep my self respect on stake...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Superb OS. Considering the current state I can understand your conclusion as well.

As far as the show is concerned, Ishita is equally to blame, same as Raman. She gave false hopes to both Raman and Adi. Ishita first encouraged Adi to think his parents as a couple again which NO Bhallas told her to do. She again gave false hopes to Raman this time by saying that Adi's changing and sooner or later he would get close to Raman. But she clearly knows that it's not the case. Not only she is giving false hopes to Raman but she herself is living on a dream that some miracle will happen. Can she afford to do that?

She very well knows the result, it will destroy her marriage, most importantly her daughter's mental peace and stability. Yet she is preferring to keep her mouth shout. Raman is thinking Adi's changing for good but he couldn't fathom why once again destiny is drifting him away from his son. If Ishita hadn't created this illusion, the water wouldn't have risen this far. We may call Raman blind for his first born or Bhallas are sexists but the fact remains that if Ishita had told them the truth, they all would have undoubtedly sided with her.



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Posted: 10 years ago
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ghar ka iriks me too
beautiful part .
loved it.
heir n that adi . i am not able to bear the words .
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Posted: 10 years ago
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SUPERP UPDATE
this is the reaction i expect from ISHITA , because there is a limit for a person tolerence and if Raman and his mother react like today ,that day is not far .Like in your update i want Romi , Simmi ,Rinki and Mihir support & stand for their Bhabhi and go against their own family.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thanks for writing...really wanted to read something like this..current track in the show is very disgusting
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Loved it..
Specially that how romi Mihir Simi nd rinki supports her...
"we never fill ruhi with poision so never think she will hate you... me and mihir are their to take care bhabhi and ishita will remain as my bhabhi"[B][/B]
Wonderful updt..
All d latest updates r much better den ongoing track

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