SS: When reality hits.....Part 5 on Pg 19

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hi YHMians...here is another Story from my side on the current track...but yeah its not that torturous like the track right now...i got the idea today so penned it down...and i really hope that something like this should happen in the show too soon...Not a proofread...so here we go...
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He lashed into the house like a quick wind and just entered into his room without even seeing anyone at home and just closed the door of his room and collapsed on the bed...he was crying profusely looking at the photo on the side table like anything and between his cries he was just saying one thing..."why did u do this to me...why did u do this to me...i loved u...but u dint...u only love urself...u cant love anyone else...u can use anyone to get whatever u want...but why the hell u used me mom...u claimed that only u loved me and dad never loved me but u were wrong it was dad who loved me unconditionally but u only loved me bcoz i was the mode to get whatever u want in ur life...now i understood why u were showering so much money on me and why u left ruhi with dad bcoz i was dad's weakness thats why u ashok wanna use me to instigate dad and to bother him...u have just used to get luxuries in ur life thats it..."

Everybody outside were banging the door with tension because the way he went to his room was fishy as he looked upset..."Adi...Adi...open the door beta...i m tensed beta what happened pls open the door beta papa is really very tensed..." everybody were shouting on the top of their voice so that atleast bcoz of the noise he may open the door but they were unsuccessful in doing that...then came a voice "Adi pls beta open door na...we ll sit and talk see everybody are tensed na" it was ishita who spoke and to everybody's surprise adi opened the door and came out...

Everybody started enquiring Adi that why was he so upset...did anything happened in the school...did anybody said anything in the society...did anybody scolded him at home...but adi was not even listening them he was just staring at Raman and ishita...Ishra both were confused by his look bcoz this look was different form the earlier looks...his eyes were showing a diff emotions this time but not anger or disgust...toshiji asked adi that did ishita said anything wrong and started scolding ishu for that but was stopped by adi saying "ishita aunty ne kuch nahi kah mujhe baat kuch aur hai dadi"...he voice was more matured than usual it was like a the kid inside him was not there at all it was matured person speaking who saw the truth of his life...

Shagun entered the house and was confused by the scenario at the bhalla house...she understood that there's something serious going on at the house...when she saw adi's face she got to know that it was something realated to adi and she rana to him saying..."Adi beta are u alright...u look upset...what happened beta did anyone said anything to u...pls beta tell something to mamma...i m tensed now pls tell me na..." Adi was silent all the time when shagun was questioning him...he just uttered..."Stop acting mom"...leaving everyone confused their including shagun...


Hows it guys...do let me know...will continue if u all like it...pls do comment if u want me to continue as based on ur feedback i ll writ the net part...

Love u all...

Part 2-Pg 7

Part 3-Pg 11

Part 4-Pg 16

Part 5-Pg 19

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Aru.Divan thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Lovely start ...
I am glad to see Adi like this in your story in the beginning !..
Much needed ..
Continue soon 😃
Edited by arunabhi - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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lovely start do continue soon will love to watch adi as a mature person
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Posted: 10 years ago
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suprb...
adi crying...nd realised good fr him...


atleast som sort of realisatn u made nd penned it dwn...
i want to see adi bashing shagun...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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plz continue...n continue soon... we need sanity n positivity,...
PS: have read ur other os...n loved it...so sorry didnt comment...😕🤔 but u write well...😃 👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
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nice start
looking 4ward 2 read more
continue soon
if possible pm me
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice start so adi got a reality check brilliant hope it happens soon 👏 tired of this drama now . Plz continue
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: arunabhi

Lovely start ...
I am glad to see Adi like this in your story in the beginning !..
Much needed ..
Continue soon 😃


Thanks aruna...
i m fed up of this track ya...so thought of giving my own thought to this...thanks for liking it ya...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: ybarfa

lovely start do continue soon will love to watch adi as a mature person


Thanks dear...😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: shavi2311

suprb...

adi crying...nd realised good fr him...


atleast som sort of realisatn u made nd penned it dwn...
i want to see adi bashing shagun...


Thanks dear...😊
u ll have that treat too...😉

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