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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hello guys...thanks for ur valuable comments which encouraged me to continue the story...Here we go with the next part...
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Part 2

"Stop acting Mom" was all adi cud say...

Adi beta what happened to u...why are u talking to me like this...i know some body would have bothered u na ill talk to ur papa wait...shagun was really confused by adi's gestures towards her bcoz he was never so reluctant towards her infact he was showing her same attitude which he used to show to raman thats why she was getting more tensed as she was afraid that did raman showed him the real face of his mom but he wont believe him which made her relaxed and thought may be some school tension or he is anger on ishita...Adi tell me na beta what happend...

"Stop acting mom...just stop acting...dont u dare to think that u can fool me evrytime by your fake love and care for me" said adi on the top of his voice which made everybody startled including shagun in the living room of bhalla house...shagun was now really tensed by his behaviour towards her and want to save herself by cooking some story..."adi beta i don't know why are u talking to me like that but yeah i can understand that this lady have poisoned ur brain..beta i m not ishita i m ur mom...shagun...

Yeah mom ur not ishita aunty but yeah i wish now that u were ishita aunty or atleast u wud have got atleast one bit of her then i wud have really admired u...but u are not the same person whom i have admired these many years since i m born...pls leave me and go mom...i don't wanna talk to u...

Adi...whats wrong with u...u r comparing with this behenji...now shagun came to self as her trump card was turning against her and she have to make him on his side as she was thinking that somebody has manipulated adi against her as he gets easily manipulated so she was just using her last plans to get back her son...her trump card...

Adi come to ur sense beta i m ur mom not ishita...she is just a step mom a wicked step mom...i told u na that she is the one who snatched everything from ur mom...how can u be like this...wont u remember how she behaved with me and sent us from the house and then it was me who adjusted for u so that u can come back to ur dad and have secured life...and now u r talking to me like this...shagun was so lost in pacifying adi that she forgot that she is standing in the living room of bhallas...and everyone are listening to her crap but she was not affected by it as all she wanted was adi by her side her trump card to make raman dance on her tunes so she was blabbering all non sense which will make adi to come back to his mom...but adi was determinedthis time as whatever he saw or heard was the bitter truth of his life which he has to accept it even if he cant do it...

Mom pls stop it i don't wanna listen to u pls go..."adi what happened beta why are u talking to ur mom in this way" enquired raman as he was also surprised with his cold behaviour towards his mom which he used to give to ishita once but today he was giving the same reaction to shagun..."Dad i fine but i don't wanna talk to mom...pls ask her to leave me alone"...but adi whats wrong with u why are talking like that to me beta tell what did i do that u r behaving like this...the last line was a bit louder as she was annoyed by now with her sons behaviour...

U really wanna know mom...ok listen its bcoz today i have seen my mom's true face...

Shagun was confused...what r talking beta...

Mom today i saw u with nani and i have even heard every word u and nani spoke in the cafe...

Adi's statement left shgun numb and shocked...


Thats it for today guys...

To be continued...

Hope u all like it...sorry if i dint reach ur expectations...love u all...

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Posted: 10 years ago
#42
That was a short update! 🤔 But a brilliant one.

Waiting to know about Shagun's convo with her Mom~! 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
#43
finally adi's cold behaviour fr shagun...

yippie im so happy...
he spoke to raman nicely...nd made her mom shut nd truth out...


updte nxt soon...with long updte...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#44
nice update...
got relief after reading the update...
i felt it was short...anyway we got update that's imp...
Shagun started her game again, she is so disgusting, she is
saying the truth (plans done against ishita) wow, she totally lost...
i liked adi that determination that stand his took to himself was awesome👏...
this line was i have seen my mom's true face by adi bravo👏👏 just loved it,
hope soon in show also we can see this...

well written...
waiting for next update...
hope little longer next time...
continue soon...



Edited by Akshatha19 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#45
Wow..finally adi realized shagun's truth.
Superb Update
pls continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#46

Originally posted by: -Mrinalini-

That was a short update! 🤔 But a brilliant one.


Waiting to know about Shagun's convo with her Mom~! 😃


Thanks dear...😊
Yeah saturday na so busy so updated a short one and next update ll hae the convo thats why completed this update in a short way...😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#47

Originally posted by: shavi2311

finally adi's cold behaviour fr shagun...

yippie im so happy...
he spoke to raman nicely...nd made her mom shut nd truth out...


updte nxt soon...with long updte...


Thanks dear...😊
One day pakka shaun will get the cold behaviour from adi for sure in the show too...waiting for that day...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#48
I feel sad when Adi always mu Ishita listening 2 Shagun.Loving ur ss as at least here Adi understands d truth.hats off 2 u.plz made Adi accept Ishita as his mom like Ruhi
Edited by jasminerahul - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#49

Originally posted by: Akshatha19

nice update...

got relief after reading the update...
i felt it was short...anyway we got update that's imp...
Shagun started her game again, she is so disgusting, she is
saying the truth (plans done against ishita) wow, she totally lost...
i liked adi that determination that stand his took to himself was awesome👏...
this line was i have seen my mom's true face by adi bravo👏👏 just loved it,
hope soon in show also we can see this...

well written...
waiting for next update...
hope little longer next time...
continue soon...




Thanks akshata...😊
Shagun is gonna loss then obviously she blurt all her plans in tension...hope we can see such sscene in the show too soon...
Yeah actually weekend na so a short update as i was busy but cant stop myself with out updating...next part will be longer...Ruhi promise...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#50

Originally posted by: Lucky.13

Wow..finally adi realized shagun's truth.

Superb Update
pls continue soon


Thanks dear...😊

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