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rutu83

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Posted: 10 years ago

nicely done- raman finally took the right call

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Lata_ishra

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Posted: 10 years ago

Wow...superb twist...and shagun and her selfishness ...she crosses all liits in being selfish...

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Mrinalini

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Posted: 10 years ago

Wow! Well done! 😃 That was brilliantly handled~! 👏

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Anu

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Posted: 10 years ago

What a lovely story... it's so nice of you to send Shagun to a totally different continent- what a lovely idea!

Thanks so much for including Raman's bow in the second part... takes the sting out of the one from the last episode a little bit.

Wonderful story, terrific writing- thank you so much for sharing.

Hope to read more from you again.😊

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Nivriti

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Posted: 10 years ago

The ending was quite unexpected. And I am glad that things turned the way they turned out.

Your pen skills are truly commendable. You write very crisp and to the point.

Enjoyed reading this piece. :)

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ankita sidana

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Posted: 10 years ago

Only if...we could get such sensible Rman in show too

but i liked that part...raman went to schol subconsciously...wow

gud job dear

lovely ts

keep writing

and pming too if possible

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