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Ishrafanno1

@Ishrafanno1

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#11

Awesome! Enjoyed reading it. How I wish I saw this onscreen.

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N.R.Rona

@N.R.Rona

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#12

Y this much sadness Nene...it was a superb one..beautifully written..its the first time am reading a story from shaguns pov n i must say that was awesome... Pls pm me when you write further

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arshi21

@arshi21

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#13

Not your best work? I dont know about the rest but for me, its by far one of the best ishra OSes i hae ever read on this forum.

I am amazed at how you have captured every small detail which matters to an outsider which can make them think of them as a family.

I wish CVs can show this in the show. This...THIS is shagun's downfall in real.

I think it was amazing. And the last line for ishita in his interview? Adorable.

You have described it so realisitcally that its tough to not feel its a written update of the show itself. I wish this somehow..even half of this could get projected in the show.

I loved it.

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--Nargis--

@--Nargis--

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#14

Phenomenal!! Shagun so needs a rude awakening!! 👏

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Nivi ;)

@nividances

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#15

That was absolutely beautiful! Would love to read more from you.

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Swathi

@swathibalan

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#16

This is a stunning piece of work..simply awesome

Once you create you index please do pm it to me. Would love to read more of your work

Superb again👏

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Soul_Stirrer

@Soul_Stirrer

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#17

That was so amazing...this is how shagun should actually feel. You are marvellous with words. Love your stories.

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mandu

@mandu

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#18

Very very well written...I totally enjoyed reading it

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ABI

@ABBY92

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#19

This was beautiful. I really liked the fact that it was all about Shagun realising what she has truly lost when she left Raman and how try as she might, she will never get them back.

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pomegranate

@pomegranate

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#20

Wow you are a such a talented writer. I always wanted to see something along these lines on the show but I guess that is too much that to hope for. Shagun realized what a misfit she is in the family that once used to be hers, her realization of what she destroyed with her own hands was so well described. I only wished we would get to see something similar on the show, but I guess not.

Edited by pomegranate - 10 years ago

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