Agent RKB & Agent JKR! *COMPLETED* 12a &12b - pg46 & 47 IS - Page 27

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Posted: 10 years ago
firstly i am extremely sorry for not commenting before...its just i was little busy...and now about the parts..
wow...i am just loving this story...its getting interesting with each part...really mindblowing work...
please continue soon...i am eagerly waiting..
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Posted: 10 years ago
Thank you guys for all your fab comments. So sorry for delay but will defo update in next few days😊
Thanks again for reading and all your messages😉

Devani
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: arnavkidevani

Thank you guys for all your fab comments. So sorry for delay but will defo update in next few days😊

Thanks again for reading and all your messages😉

Devani


Will be eagerly waiting..!
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Posted: 10 years ago
RKB the young angry man back in action! lol
i guess he understood JKR is his wife!

cont soon! im waiting! :D
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice update.. waiting for the next :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
Loving the way how this story is progressing.
raman finally realised who jkr is
hope they save kids soon
am sure it will be really dramatic
waiting for next
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hey there my very patient friends😉
Thank you sooo much for all your comments! And I apologize profusely for the late update😕

But I hope you enjoy reading it!

Do comment and like at will!

Please excuse my errors and typos😊



PART 10

Somewhere in the building...

Agent JKR had a microphone on her watch, therefore Vandita had heard Surjwine's plans as he talked to his men. Romi, Mahir and Bala had also heard everything through RKB's button microphone while both of them had been unconscious. They were already on the move and putting their own plans into motion as RKB and JKR were inside.

A while later, with the promise of freedom and a ticket to his native Indonesia, Agent JKR had convinced the boy, Shin to help her and he in return informed her about the impending auction and that they didn't have much time.

On hearing this JKR quickly began recovering and assembling the parts of her mini bombs from her shoe heels and the platform soles and took out the tiny detonators from her jacket buttons. After showing Shin how to put them together she instructed the boy to stick the small yet effective bombs around the area of the auction and dance floor. He nodded and assured her it would be easy for him to do that as he had unrestricted access around the place as everyone considered him as just "one of the s**ts" and thought him to be insignificant. JKR also asked him to bring her bag to her if he could.

As Shin went off on his errand JKR sent a coded message and bomb triggering coordinates to Vandita and updated her. The sensors on the bombs would also scan the vicinity giving Agents V and M a map of the building and its layout.

Agent V informed JKR that she had also contacted Interpol who, she had discovered were looking for Surjwine for cruelly murdering 257 children and woman in an Afghani town. So the Slovakian branch of Interpol were on their way too. In the meantime JKR would have to play along so that all the crooks could be caught red handed!

Soon Shin returned, telling her he had planted the bombs. He also told her where RKB was being kept but that he hadn't been allowed in there. JKR kissed Shin with affection as she saw that he had also managed to discreetly bring her case, feigning that he needed it for the things to dress her for the auction.

Now Agent JKR prepared for action. She geared up in her full black leather jumpsuit, securing her 2 daggers in her boots and her pistols and guns in their harness, under her suit. 2 behind 2 in front.

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Meanwhile...

Vandita had made contact with Mahir, who had informed her that the kids were being kept at a chateau a few miles away. She in turn had assured him that she had two agents on standby who she would send over right away to rescue the children. She also advised him that another of her agents, M would join him soon with a detailed plan of the inside of the building making it easy for them to help to rescue both their agents RKB and JKR!

Then Vandita contacted Sarika and gave her the coordinates to the kids location, and instructed her to fly Simmie and Aaya to Surjwines villas as soon as possible. These two agents loved the kids so much and they were so disgusted with the whole kidnapping that Surjwines men stood no chance against their anger. In no time at all both agents managed to save the children and take them out of there safely.

As they were leaving Simmie vented out her anger at Surjwine by blowing up his whole villa with a few grenades she had picked up in JKRs jet! Then she and Aaya both hugged the kids as they settled down in the jet to watch some cartoons for entertainment and Sarika flew them home.

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Raman in the meantime had donned the disguise of an Arab who he had overtaken and knocked out and also secured two guns from the beaten up guards. Checking his watch was intact and his explosive pen safely in his pockets he took the explosive gum, which he stuck on different surfaces as he walked along towards the rotating dance floor where presumably the auction was due to take place. These would come in handy later. From the hustle bustle starting to take place around him he gauged that they must be be about to start. As the riff raff were moved aside by guards a plush sofa came into view where 4 Arabs were seated with Surgwine who was gushing excitedly! The guards didn't recognise RKB in his disguise and so also moved and seated him near the others. A skinny suited asian guy came to accompany him as he sat, presumably the secretary of the Arab RKB was impersonating.

"I want the woman, the agent! At any cost" RKB whispered to the guy in fluent Arabic.

"Very well your excellency!" The secretary whispered back not recognising him.

RKB contemplated the possibilities to escape with JKR making a note of the exits, number of guards and the height of the glass roof high above the dance platform. When the lights dimmed and music began to play RKB prepared himself for a quick and hasty getaway once JKR came out. His JKR!

JKR was dragged by two women through a corridor full of numerous girls swaying around intoxicated and who occasionally got pulled towards into different rooms by the punters.

The lights were dimmed and the some Arabian fusion music filled the hall. In the dim light the 3 women approached the dance floor, with the middle one also appearing to be drunk or drugged. As they came on to the centre stage a spot light came on. The middle women was dressed in black with her hair open and dishevelled. She was also wearing what looked like a veil on the bottom half of her face. The two other women left her swaying in the middle of the dance floor and moved away. Just then Surjwine stood up and with a sickening grin on his face; he announced that the auction for a secret agent was now open for bids!

RKBs heart leapt into his throat and he squirmed in his seat! He was shocked at the state JKR was in! What had they done to her? He looked around to see how he could take her out of here safely the only solution looking to be to bid through the idiot secretary, who still thought he was his sheikh, then somehow exit out quickly before anyone found out. Or...he looked at the glass roof above them, put his hand on his gun and looked at his watch! Or there could be another way! Hmmm

Edited by arnavkidevani - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice update ...waiting to know how does they save each other and how will raman get to know that his jkr and ishita are same and how will he react to it ohhh just can't wait update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice update Devani the execute plan from JKR was superb hope and the kids are save now. Hope next they can escape from the auction place. It is getting more excited now. Hope you will continue soon.👍🏼👍🏼
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Posted: 10 years ago
wow...awesome update...
ishita plan is plotted perfectly,
kiddos are saved...
but how RKB gone save JKR in this from this place...
hope everything sorts out soon...

eagerly waiting IshRa to safe from the bad people...
waiting for next update...
continue soon...
Edited by Akshatha19 - 10 years ago

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