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Posted: 10 years ago
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Okay Nish, that was outright brilliant. Haldi stains and wedding NOON.😳
I can see him taking his revenge. Removing her gajra and spreading those flowers on her☺️
I can imagine at a later stage when athim n akka invite them for dinner, they r busy in the car or they get busy during the dinner, under the table☺️ or worse they lash out at each other in the empty conference hall at work and R&B ends up taking her on the long oval shaped table top, then and there☺️
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Wings-of-Fire

Are we gonna get anymore updates soonish?


In an hour max?
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: hemanshi

Dear Nisha,

So I have glanced through your story frequently in the forum but just never gotten around to read it. Maybe because I knew what would happen to me if I did. But yesterday, I was almost forced to read this by someone who is equally obsessed with your story and I decided that I have nothing to lose..Let me just say, i did lose something- a lot of sleep!
Once I started, I could not help but go on to the next update! Like honestly..you are awesome!! how? how did you do this? I mean i LOVE ishita! a beautiful woman who is smart, intelligent, career orientated, wants something in life more then getting married! I mean holy cow, that's a real woman right there and not a freaking Acchai ki devi that we see on every tv show. (sorry but ishita's niceness is now borderline annoying)

And R&B, wowww can i just tell you after a long long long time, has a man, any man real or fictional made me feel like such a puddle (except for RKB who does so on a regular basis but we are not counting him here)

I mean your description of the kissing scenes were beautiful. They were sensual but not at all vulgar. Trust me, that's an art because most times sensual scenes come across as vulgar and I loose interest in continuing further

You are really talented and I cannot wait to read more. But a tiny little request if you can incorporate this, if not then its totally fine. I do not want to interrupt your creative process. But I really want to know how R&B feels about his regular encounters, how he likes how his smirks affect her and how little does she know, that when she is in the room- he really has to fight against himself to not just stare at her..
Or whatever you feel is best for your story..because i know more then us, this is your creative baby, create it whatever way you feel is right..

Once again, thank you for sharing this brilliant piece, Can't wait to read more..

PS- is this your first time writing or have you written stuff before? I already lost one night's worth of sleep just reading, i think i can afford to lose some more sleep..:P



Thanks so much for such a glowing compliment

I hope to do a good job until the story ends😃
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ashu9

Omg! even she is dreaming of him..Nishu pls di 😭 get them married...i want to see alls he has imagines now...

Ragasiyama is a wonderful song di...ur choice is awesome 😳

HOW CAN I GET THEM MARRIED ABRUPTLY?

It will give a KEKTA VIBE🤢

I HATE THAT considering what Ive been through with YHM😭

I LOVEEE All Maddy's movies' songs😃
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Nisha0604


😃

Hey Ranu

Many Iyer customs are goddamn sexy

Oonjal and nalangu are my favorite

HOT AS HELL

If I get them married and write a Wedding trilogy trilogy kya 100 parts hoga just on the wedding...I will describe OONJAL in detail
P.S. OONJAL is the swing

R&B on a oonjal with his bare feet upto his ankle in a panchakajam/trad dhoti showing☺️
The tall ansd slender II on his side

Ranu podavai select pannanum... pick sarees😆

And of course when he puts the metti on her ...toe rings😃

True oonjal and Nelangu .. Please write the trilogy , please write anything I will read.
Ok sarees for the Iyer wedding have to be kanchivaram , maroon nine yards, mustard or yellow saree , and a nice classy reception on a lawn . We also need Punjabi style rituals too . What fun it will be .
I am Anu btw live in the east coast , with 2 kids
I know C has banned this but right now I can't get myself to read even the WU,s😆😆
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Ad_Mumbai_Girl

I am really enjoying this mismatching, day-dreaming, goofy, broken record type girl who is stuck on thoughts abt R&B.


but what is her man thinking yaar? kuchh to zalak de; apart from his eye language, half smiles n Google updates 😆

ya bright spot is change in srikanth's itinerary. That incident better push the man in action- logical / illogical, passive/active does not matter.



Hey ADG

I can have every misunderstanding resolve in one art and wrap up too

Or go for another 100

This is NOT my day job, tho it seems like it sometimes... errmmm last weekish😆😆

I have a logical plot in mind...


Her opinion of him, he is an uneducated, albeit sophisticated😉😉 loser
His opinion of his Dad's scandal will they ever get closure?
Srikanth
Appa's opinion of the family in general
The AGM
His Chacha;'s family trying to buy R&B out for majority stake
R&B's complete disinterest in his Dad's biz...will he or wont he care for losing the company?
Vandu discovering II's obsession

IN BETWEEN ALL LAYERED WITH LOTS OF R&B and II moments... and workplace interactions

I am hoping to do a good job

Lets see😃

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Scribble_Tweety

☺️

Okay Nish, that was outright brilliant. Haldi stains and wedding NOON.😳
I can see him taking his revenge. Removing her gajra and spreading those flowers on her☺️
I can imagine at a later stage when athim n akka invite them for dinner, they r busy in the car or they get busy during the dinner, under the table☺️ or worse they lash out at each other in the empty conference hall at work and R&B ends up taking her on the long oval shaped table top, then and there☺️


THANKS SO VERY MUCH TWEETS
This is a mighty big compliment
I ABSOLUTELY ENJOY WRITING

Cooking and Writing I will say define me...
I will definitely spice it up... 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Scribble_Tweety

☺️

Okay Nish, that was outright brilliant. Haldi stains and wedding NOON.😳
I can see him taking his revenge. Removing her gajra and spreading those flowers on her☺️
I can imagine at a later stage when athim n akka invite them for dinner, they r busy in the car or they get busy during the dinner, under the table☺️ or worse they lash out at each other in the empty conference hall at work and R&B ends up taking her on the long oval shaped table top, then and there☺️


My thoughts were something along these lines but you worded them soo aptly Tweety!!!☺️

Nisha!! Darling to to humari jaan lay gi aisi updates de kay! We are simply going to DIE fantasizing and reading your story!!☺️
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: -Payal-



OMGGG She sent him a RAZOR!!!!! Thank you thank you thank you!!!

I repeat: He is the devil. 🤣

I am in love (with HER, with HIM, with THEM, with this glimpse into THEIR [Fatal?😉] Attraction...that will slowly, beautifully progress to SO MUCH MORE.). ☺️

Her leaving the receipt in the box cannot go overlooked. Almost double her current debt? Master Stroke. I can only imagine how he will repay her! ☺️

***

This is NOT the 1st time SHE has imagined being MARRIED - to HIM. This girl is so far gone. I am too. ☺️

Forgot to mention before, I LOVE that HE speaks FRENCH.😳


I THINK SO TOO PAYAL

THANKS FOR THE PM AGAIN
Sorry my laptop keeps crashing strangely so I am posting on supersonic speed😲😭
Sorry my PM was one word long😭

I like him being this way...
ADG, if u read the posts... this is another note for u...

I WANT TO KEEP HIM KINDA MYSTERIOUS AND INTRIGUING😳
I DONT LIKE PUPPY DOG KINDA GUSHY MEN😭
They kind a bore me... if he told her he digs her shows up with flowers and takes her out on a date and buys her a Ferrari it would kill all the anticipation, nahi?
HE IS EXTREMELY WEALTHY...
I kept him brooding... not depressed, suicidal or down and out... just brooding with a very dry sense of humor... totally healthy emotionally...




If u all KNEW HOW MUCH he loves her and SHE LOVES HIM MORE OR as much, phir story mein kya maza reh jaayega?😉
They both must feel a SEARING ATTRACTION while holding ground because of their
egos,
prejudices,
culture,
upbringing,
career choice...
STRONG personalities😃

ONE OR THE OTHER WILL TAKE THE INITIATIVE and it will all reach crescendo😃




Edited by Nisha0604 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: -Payal-


@Bold: YESSS!!!
Nisha, the BEST part of any love is when you when you find yourself thinking about him/her at all odd times, smiling to yourself, feeling your heart swell at just the thought.

Forget overt declarations of love, the beauty of it is in the unspoken conversations, knowing nothing needs to be said...

I don't want these two getting 'together' in that sense for a LOOONG time. Let 'em continue this love to hate you, push and pull. It's fabulous. They are going to fall so madly, desperately, against their will - that too, only with clipped encounters as they learn one or two more things about each other every time. Despite their individual fight, the pull is undeniable. Let time run it's course...the 'relationship' will develop naturally. For now, I want no more than the stolen kisses and running tally of debt that is owed! 😳

Off to read all that I've missed! ❤️


I dont know how I missed this one... it was from before I quit for the morning

Sorry!!😕

I think so too

Unless IF is shutting down and moving to Bolivia or something😃
Jab tak Forum hai...

Just kidding... not for the next 5 or 10 years... I am not Kekta Kapoor🤢

Not even sure how many parts of the push pull... could be 5 could be 50... who knows... but will definitely make the story progress... I LOVE writing work based romance

It gives a BACKBONE to the story... I cannot write about aloo pyaaz all the time...😭

I LOVE TO COOK... but just cant write about saas bahu stuff... maybe because I dont enjoy watching it

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