Invitation to a different writing challenge (Part 22/page 82)

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Anum_says

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Posted: 10 years ago

#491

read all parts in one go...
And Loved each and every part...
A big Round of applause for all of u ...

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999180

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Posted: 10 years ago

#492

superb update dear

wow...the story is moving ahead towards their marriage

looking forward for next update

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Sakshi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#493

Nivi.. Thats a sweet update... Raman trying to pataofy Ishu's family.. Good for him.. 5 din hai bhai.. Mrs Iyer reluctant.. lets see how Raman breaks the ice between Punjabis and Madrasis.. The coffee making scene was so cute..

At this time all Ishita needs is Raman's support and all Raman needs is her trust. Its wonderful to see them supporting and trusting each other.. Lets see how they take their next step towards the perfect family..

Loved it Nivi.. Great job

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adlin1784

@adlin1784

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Posted: 10 years ago

#494

Great update.👏 It will be interesting to read how Raman will convince Amma.😉

Thank you very very very much for the English translations.
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Sakshi

@sakshi.ekansh

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Posted: 10 years ago

#495

Originally posted by: SAKIV-RAM
nice one buddy.
Ishita's emotional part well writen.

Raman finally convinced her for maarriage.
Mrs Chandran who ayee hee apney insult karwaaney jyada naehn chahiyen.

Abh ussney ghar mey bhee bolkar ramanaur ishita ka kaam aasan kardiyan.

waiting for next part

Thanks a lot buddy. Mrs Chandran is going to regret her panga from RKB. Lets see how Raman tackles the Iyers and Bhallas...😉

Originally posted by: shavi2311
Sakshi yar... Worth wait...
You potrayed ishu's part very well...

Nd i loved hw raman defended ishu's condition nd answer mrs.chandran...

She is already a mother to my daughter...and worlds best mother.. Heart touching dialouge...

Nd hw ishu shared her pain nd raman confidently said you accepted me trough your heart so you shared your past with me... This is suprb moment for me...

Nivi pls update fast yar...

Even i couldnt wait for the next part Shravani.. Nivi did update on time.. Thanks to her.. Thank you so much for calling it a worth wait.. I am glad it could touch your heart..

Thanks a lot 😊

Originally posted by: sulochana90
amazing update waiting for the next

Thank you so much 😊

Originally posted by: nagsuma
too good buddy..i want to press like button more than once..but it can't possible na..😭..but superb yaar...i like this line specially.."Thoughts are from brain but relations are from heart and your heart has accepted me.. "..👏👏

Like button more than once.. Thats a big compliment.. Thank you so much for the comment.. It made me smile.. Yup Ishu has accepted Raman from her heart.. Lets see how he manages to convince the family..

Thanks again..😊

Originally posted by: ankita_sidana
I hope u r better now sakshi
wishing u a speedy recovery

Wonderful update yrrr
loved every bit of It
must say...you are an amazing writer
iishita's past...good twist...she had told but subbu cheated
aww...raman comforted her
rkb reaction on knwng truth...spot on...too gud
ishita poured her heart out to him...wow
and he comforted her
now 5 day challenge...manaofying parents
am sure somw sweet part and romantic moments are waiting next
am just loving this story yrr...its just so beautiful

Wish it goes on n on...vese bhi each writer has to write once a month approx...we can continue it for long..right?

Good job dear
all the best nivi

Thank you so much for the wishes Ankita.. i am feeling much better now.

Haina?? Our story has turned out to be so interesting and so beautiful.. Thanks to the amazing writers, writing wonderfully... Yup lets hope our story keeps moving on.. Its so much fun to write for the story you know what has happened but you dont know what is next going to happen..

Thanks deariee..😳

Originally posted by: nividances
Sakshi that was just beautiful! 👏
Truly I was speechless the first time I read it. You portrayed Ishita's pain so well and Raman's unconditional support for her was amazing!
Loved the twist of this 5 day challenge. Chalo ab mission on...parents ko patana.

Hope I do justice to follow up your beautiful part.
Will try my best to update fast but my college just started so I will most likely only have time to post over the weekend.
Pressure's on

Writers like you never come in pressure buddy.. I was confident you'll do it wonderfully and you proved me right.. I am glad i could give you a base to continue. Thank you so much😊

Originally posted by: prachi_vrushan
wow sakshi awesome update
woth waiting
i so loved whenever rkb scolds subbu's mom
yeee finally ishu agree to marry him
5days challenge
n thier cute nokjhok
wohhh...what a twist superb

Thank you so much Prachi for callling it worth waiting.. I am happy you liked it.. 😊 Lets hope for more twists and turns but sweet ones..

Originally posted by: rnarayan
Nice update

Thank you😊

Originally posted by: usaonly
Thanks for update Sakshi and hope you are feeling better now.Wonderful update the must talk for Ishu and Raman was well portray and good that Ishu tell him everything so make Raman had more love and respect to her and Ishu pain had been heal and taking care by Raman.The last part was good for Nivi to continue for the twist Subu mom is really full with poison she never leave chance to ruin their life. And lucky Raman know all the truth now. Hope next part he convince both family and ask for Ishu hand for marriage.😊

Jum 🤗

I am much better.. Thank you😊

yup all i want in YHM since start was an heart to heart talk of IshRa.. I wanted to include that.I feel truth should always be the base of any relationship.. you'll never have to live with guilt and fear. The relations on the pillars of truth trust love and respect last long. Thank you for liking it buddy..

Originally posted by: crazy_neha
Hi new here really luv.ur concept zami.di.sakshi.it was.superb as always

Waitin for.the next updt frm Nivi

Hey neha... Welcome to our journey..Glad you liked the concept.. Its because of all the writers present here. Nivi did the update.. sh might be waiting for your reviews.. Keep enjoying the journey with us..😊

Originally posted by: RomComFan
What a beautiful update... I love it!

The way RKB handled Mrs. Chadran and Ishu was just beautiful... so nice to see the ISHRA flirting.

As for the last scene... what a way to end!😲

Can't wait for the next update- terrific job here.

Thank you so much for loving it.. Ishra flirting has just started.. there is a long way to go.. Right now tension is around.. lets hope to see more of IshRa romance coming up officially.. Last scene was set to make a plot for my frnd Nivi to continue.. Glad you liked it.. Thanks a ton for lovely comment..

Originally posted by: AllezJustine
Great update yaar, truly unexpected. Lovedthe challenge. Now that Subbu's Mom has told Mr. Iyer about the secret engagement curious on what will happen.
Looking forward for the next update

Hey Zami..

I followed you buddy.. 😉 Even i am curious to know how Raman handles the entire situation. Lets wait together..Thank you so much for liking it..

Originally posted by: harichandana
Awesome update sakshi the entire way you took confession is absolutely amazing.how raman listened to her n how he made subbus mom shut her mouth superb yaar. n when he told u already accepted me in ur heart I was feeling so peaceful lovely work n d last part u brought a excellent continuation for story sry for late reply

Thank you so much dear.. I hope the actual confession is on the way..😉. i want Raman to be a strong and supporting person rather than a person who silently watches the scene and cribs when alone. He was this strong initially and i want him to return the same way in the show.. Thank you so much you liked it.. Your reply means alot dear.. late or early isnt important.. lets enjoy the journey together.. 😊

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Shravs

@shravsss

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#496

madhvi ji jee against it... omg...

raman n ishita 's bench scenes are always heartfelt moments yaar... (in d show n in many of d oses sses ffes) ... they convey everything in such scene...

raman boosting her confidance, ishita's affirmation... both needed tat frm each other... raman needed her affirmation n ishu needed his confidance...

appa aggreed... appas are always cutie pies... bhalla clan cmng to iyer's house... n raman had explained ishu his plan...

bang on sakshi...

waiting fr d nxt yaar...
fr a chng i would say... i love that chandran clan too... jo ishra ko jod diya... ishita ke muah se haan kehalva diya...

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..TeriDeewani..

@..TeriDeewani..

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+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#497

Nivi Di it was superb
Waitin for ankita Di's updt
It will be interesting to see how Ishu impresses the Bhalla family

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Nivi ;)

@nividances

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#498

Originally posted by: shavi2311
wow...such an amzng updte...
i loved raman's confdnce nd assuring ishu...

its very beautiful...

Thanks Shavi! Glad you liked it. 😊

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Nivi ;)

@nividances

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#499

Originally posted by: usaonly
Beautiful update Nivi love the confident Raman had for this marriage and he alredy convince Ishu's dad so next target is her Amma.Hope Raman can wrap everything up in 5 days. He alredy start caring and concern for Ishu was grate sign. Thank you for the update story.Have a grate week ahead dear.😊

Thank you! 😊

It's up to Ankita how she will continue. I'm excited to read what she comes up with.