Invitation to a different writing challenge (Part 22/page 82)

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SAKIV

@SAKIVIAM

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Posted: 10 years ago

#471

nice one buddy.

Ishita's emotional part well writen.

Raman finally convinced her for maarriage.

Mrs Chandran who ayee hee apney insult karwaaney jyada naehn chahiyen.

Abh ussney ghar mey bhee bolkar ramanaur ishita ka kaam aasan kardiyan.

waiting for next part

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shravani_2311

@shravani_2311

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Posted: 10 years ago

#472

Sakshi yar... Worth wait...
You potrayed ishu's part very well...

Nd i loved hw raman defended ishu's condition nd answer mrs.chandran...

She is already a mother to my daughter...and worlds best mother.. Heart touching dialouge...

Nd hw ishu shared her pain nd raman confidently said you accepted me trough your heart so you shared your past with me... This is suprb moment for me...

Nivi pls update fast yar...

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aarti hari chandana

@Ishradivani

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Posted: 10 years ago

#473

Loved how raman imitated ruhi n ruhi she is such a dramebaaz .totally loved how baap beti convinced ishima n raman was staring at ishu in d mrng n told her bahut achi lag rahi ho omg I was blushing thr n I had goosebumps at tat sentence. Finally raman packed up performance to shut up subbus mom I m ruhis father n ishitas fiancee loved it totally. cant wait for next part update soonish n really sry for the very late reply kaan pakad ke sry

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Sakshi

@sakshi.ekansh

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Posted: 10 years ago

#474

So Sorry for the late update.. Updated on page 64.. Kaan pakad ke sorry deariees..

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sulochana90

@sulochana90

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Posted: 10 years ago

#475

amazing update waiting for the next

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nagsuma

@nagsuma

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Posted: 10 years ago

#476

too good buddy..i want to press like button more than once..but it can't possible na..😭..but superb yaar...i like this line specially.."Thoughts are from brain but relations are from heart and your heart has accepted me.. "..👏👏

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ankita sidana

@ankita_sidana

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#477

I hope u r better now sakshi

wishing u a speedy recovery

Wonderful update yrrr

loved every bit of It

must say...you are an amazing writer

iishita's past...good twist...she had told but subbu cheated

aww...raman comforted her

rkb reaction on knwng truth...spot on...too gud

ishita poured her heart out to him...wow

and he comforted her

now 5 day challenge...manaofying parents

am sure somw sweet part and romantic moments are waiting next

am just loving this story yrr...its just so beautiful

Wish it goes on n on...vese bhi each writer has to write once a month approx...we can continue it for long..right?

Good job dear

all the best nivi

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Nivi ;)

@nividances

Inactive

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Posted: 10 years ago

#478

Sakshi that was just beautiful! 👏

Truly I was speechless the first time I read it. You portrayed Ishita's pain so well and Raman's unconditional support for her was amazing!

Loved the twist of this 5 day challenge. Chalo ab mission on...parents ko patana.

Hope I do justice to follow up your beautiful part.

Will try my best to update fast but my college just started so I will most likely only have time to post over the weekend.

Pressure's on

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agneeputra

@agneeputra

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Posted: 10 years ago

#479

wow thats a nice and emotional update..ishra scenes were superb...take care and will eagerly wait for your next update

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PRACHI

@prachi_vrushan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#480

wow sakshi awesome update
woth waiting
i so loved whenever rkb scolds subbu's mom
yeee finally ishu agree to marry him
5days challenge
n thier cute nokjhok
wohhh...what a twist superb

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