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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: sakshi.ekansh

Nice one.. Ru the little one is not to b blamed. kids are like that only. They flow according to the happiness they are getting presently but that doesn't means their love for the parents or any one has decreased...

Just think about our childhood. When some guests uses to arrive at our place, we almost use to forget our parents and use to get along with them spending most of the time with them but later after their departure we use fo be back to ourselves... Here to Ruhi has got her Papa after long and she doesn't want him to be away from her vision that's pretty natural according to child psychology.

Just my POV.

And i know we will surely let Ishima meet her daughter with the same love. coz love isn't lost but situation is different...

Great work... Loved RuMan...

P.S- sorry if anybody disagrees with the lecture I gave above.



Thanks a lot.. That exactly what i wanted to convey. He has taken care of her entirely being a single parent. She gets lost and then Ishitha has filled that role that does not mean she will take time to warm up her dad. Even now we tend to get attached to our parents if they have been away for long. She is a three year old kid.

I badly needed someone understanding my story to this extent and your thoughts made me feel good. Thanks a ton 😃

Glad you liked my part of the story for this reason. I totally agree 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
for part 1
i knw i am super late...but i was busy...
well it was really awsumm part..
start is superb...
keep it up...
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: desire_nikki

for part 1
i knw i am super late...but i was busy...
well it was really awsumm part..
start is superb...
keep it up...

now it is your turn to make update.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: sakshi.ekansh

Nice one.. Ru the little one is not to b blamed. kids are like that only. They flow according to the happiness they are getting presently but that doesn't means their love for the parents or any one has decreased...

Just think about our childhood. When some guests uses to arrive at our place, we almost use to forget our parents and use to get along with them spending most of the time with them but later after their departure we use fo be back to ourselves... Here to Ruhi has got her Papa after long and she doesn't want him to be away from her vision that's pretty natural according to child psychology.

Just my POV.

And i know we will surely let Ishima meet her daughter with the same love. coz love isn't lost but situation is different...

Great work... Loved RuMan...

P.S- sorry if anybody disagrees with the lecture I gave above.

perfect sakshi...well explained
and I loved that line
love isnt lost but situation is different
it has made the update all the more beautiful
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Posted: 10 years ago
for part 2
wow shavi...u unfolded the story well...
ruhi's bday...aww poor raman missing her...loved it...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Frst of all you know di...no thanking is our rule...so better keep it off
aww..so glad you took a new point...ruman bond..perfect...we know story can move forward in next parts also..but some emotions must be displayed on perfect timings..you chose this part for ruman and you did an awesum job with them.
aww...ruhi wanted to see her ishima but ofcourse that fear of losing her papa again...well portrayed...she has lived without him for a whole year..ofcourse there must be something in her heart wanting her to stay with her dad as long as possible. M sure she will miss ishima also and poor kid wants her both parents.

Nikki will surely do an awesum job with it. Ofcourse we trust her. And as I said it will be fun continuing each other's work. Lets c wat she has in store for us
All the best darling
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice one ruman connection was well portrayed how their lifes depended on each other ihad tears literally evry girl wishes to hav such relation with her father bt ruhi n ishita were also interdependent so I hope in nxt update they focus this n well this was a quick update dint expect this early
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Posted: 10 years ago
for part 3
wow...wonderful part...raman got a glimpse of ruhi...
mr.bhalla too found the voice familiar...loved it...
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: SAKIV-RAM


now it is your turn to make update.


yeah i knw...m just preparing for that...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Totally loved How you explored the bond between Raman and Ruhi. It was beautiful, and needed to be told as you said after one whole year how the reunion between a father who has been the mother and father for his daughter and a daughter who only knew one person who can give her all the love she needed.
This doesn't undermine Ruhi and Ishita's bond, but her bond with her father is totally different.

Anyway good job Aruna, and as you said Ankita prepered a good platform for you, loved how you just took events smoothly to the next stage.

Waiting eagerly for the next update..

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