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It Refuses To Fade Away

She stood at the entrance of the garden which was so beautifully lit, so beautifully preserved of its nature, the trees stood on either way of the path from the entrance welcoming the guests with dangling lights elegantly draped upon the branches. She was the reason for all the hush-hush whispers that grew louder as she neared the crowd, some were about her, and the others were about her life, her new life.

On such group of people thought that the party-host's wife's life was a suitable subject to start from, "She's the one who dumped him standing over there." The woman pointed towards a man dressed in black not standing very far away from them, his eyes still twitching from the endless alcohol he had been drowning himself in for what seemed like forever, yet he appeared just as ravishing as the guests present. He appeared presentable maybe because no one could see his inner trembles, no one ever could, he had only let out his deepest, darkest feelings to only one person his whole life, and it was her. How could he forget about how he loved her with all his heart and how she mercilessly threw those feelings into a never ending well? How could he forget about the beautiful moments they shared? How could he forget about how protectively he used to bring her hand into his? It was the salt to his wounds to see that woman's hand in someone else's.

The second her husband saw her, he was stunned, stunned at how lucky he was. The man he detested the most made his way across the crowd to place a hand on her waist before he pecked her cheek. He was a little disgusted at the action of public affection and that too in front of his clients. Then, he remembered, he would also do the same, how he would boast about the irresistible qualities of her awaiting her presence in any common party. When she would enter, he would do the same. The couple stood together as numerous flashing lights of the paparazzi' cameras took photos of the newlywed couple.

He couldn't help but think about how good both of them looked together, he at a proper height a little taller than her, he managed to stifle a laugh when he remembered how she would giggle behind his back of his comparatively short height with her, and how he would retort back saying that they were equal in height after hovering his hand above their heads to find the exact measurements.

Even though he was called to the party just for the reason that her husband be able to show off that when this woman was once his was now resting in his arms. Even though he didn't want to stay there anymore, there was a sort of force that pulled him towards the venue every time, whenever he set out in the direction of the exit; he never had the wish to do so. She was the reason. Now that he was nowhere in the place to be in contact with her, he wished to steal a few glances of her mesmerizing face, her melodious voice and her sweet gestures before he were to leave, forever. And whatever the public said, he was always beside her, the only thing that irked him was why didn't she? Yes, she had committed lots of mistakes in the past and he had forgiven her too, but why didn't she do the same for when he had doubted her? Yes, he doubted her, but that was too in the influence of what people had been stuffing inside his ears.

He somehow had found the strength to sustain staying at the venue; it was almost time to leave when the guests started to walk out the door. He was stationed at the rooftop of the building gazing at the moon whispering, "My love will never fade away, Mihika."

"Neither will mine." She responded as she remembered a photo of them resting on what once was her study, which now only existed in her memory.

Edited by yhmmylife - 10 years ago
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Very nicely written😃 i was actually wondering for whom it was all about,then in the end got to know:)...i really want to see something like this in the show😃whole situation was beautifully described,they are not together but their love will never fade away😳
Thanks for pm🤗
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Thank You😊😊
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Thank Youu
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wow...awsm
beautifully written👏

thank u
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Originally posted by: Jenny..

Very nicely written😃 i was actually wondering for whom it was all about,then in the end got to know:)...i really want to see something like this in the show😃whole situation was beautifully described,they are not together but their love will never fade away😳

Thanks for pm🤗


Thanks Jenny
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Poor Mihir n not so poor Mihika ( sorry I can't sympathize with her anymore now)
But Iove ur take. Very nicely written Anjali
Edited by omshreejaanu - 10 years ago
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So touching!
I thought was abt Shagun bt nice surprise in the end :)
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Nice one again dear..
Loved Mihir's thoughts and how well you have related them to the moments he had shared with her.
The last line was kinda emotional !
A nice feel good one ..Thanks for the PM 😃

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