FOOLS IN LOVE - An Ishra OS

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N.R.Rona

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Posted: 10 years ago

#11

Aww that was cute..i loved what raman said.. I suggest tum aksar bus mein jaaya karo yaar..aisi kuch humein bhi mile.. It was amazing...

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nidhi.b23

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Posted: 10 years ago

#12

that is so so so so so beautifulll...

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AdventureGirl14

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Posted: 10 years ago

#13

Beautifully written😊

Ishita's insecurities were really well portrayed. Her twinges of jealousy, hints of possession towards Raman were heartening to read about because no matter how selfless she is, she is bound to be affected by Shagun's presence in the same house!

Raman, as always, was to-die for. His gestures, especially the one at the end with the sindoor were so adorable..😳 It reminded me of this beautiful dialogue that Ishita said to Ruhi a few episodes back.. "Jab kisi se pyar hota hai na to wo kuch bhi pehene, kaisa bhi dikhe, use humesha acha lagta hai"😳

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sulochana90

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Posted: 10 years ago

#14

wow so sweet

loved the way Raman made ishita feel so nice and at the same time made Shagun realise her place

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pri12

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Posted: 10 years ago

#15

very well written...
*""Aur haan. Mujhe meri beewi har rang me achi lagti hai jab tak uski maang me ye laal rang hai, kyunki ye rang meri Ishita ka hai. Yaad rakhna, sirf Meri Ishita ka.""*
"Red is the color of her sindoor."
"Red is the color of her cheeks."
"The colour of love is red.""
these lines were just awsome 😊

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--Nargis--

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Posted: 10 years ago

#16

OMG what a beautiful scene!!...makes me long to see it rendered in the show. What a beautiful way to show the sanctity of the RED Maang...and to impart upon Shagun that whatever she may have, its one thing that she can never have...especially not Raman ke nam ka kumkum!! I loved how you built up her insecurities...its very real and relatable. No matter how confident and successful we women are, we somehow let other women be our downfall, and we allow them the power to impact us in such an elemental way!!

Brilliant writing and storytelling...i loved it!!👏

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prati_25

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Posted: 10 years ago

#17

Awesome story..👏

specially loved the last part..😳

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omshreejaanu

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Posted: 10 years ago

#18

Lovely

Especially the last three lines!

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rutu83

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Posted: 10 years ago

#19

thank you for realistic ishita- it is unbelievable what they're showing. i really do think that ishita would face this kashmekash with herself over adi-shagun stay
loved raman and his silent, and not so silent ;), gestures
beautiful as always but i have to confess the story of your teacher touched me more than the os. i think because with raman and ishita i expect romance but with a teacher you peg them in that hole so hard to see them as husband/wife to someone

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Anu

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Posted: 10 years ago

#20

Firstly, thanks for the PM!

Next, can I just tell you that i love your inspiration story as much as I do your story itself, very lovely to hear things like that.

As for the story- wonderful. Well written, very believable insecurities and I adore the way RKB dealt with it all.

That last scene reminded me of Ishu imagining Raman confessing his love after she worked with Mani to save his Asian head title- what a wonderful memory.

Great job, hope to read more from you soon!😊

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