A Glimpse Of Paradise - IshRa OS - Page 7

Originally posted by: Jenny..

What a fab OS it was! ...the way you started the OS was beautiful, and the way whole room was described with so much detailing was gorgeous...then raman came, each and every touch by him was so electrifying, she had this feeling for the first time.feeling of being loved by someone😳

And then their conversation...raman was in full flirty mood,and all those cute talks they had...then he puts her hand on his heart...for the first time got to see the bold ishita.😳 All those cuddling moments were damn adorable❤️ raman getting naughty,pulling her so close that there is no gap left between them☺️and the way they were talking...i didnt felt that there was need of any action,as they almost had evrything through their conversation☺️

And in the midst of the beautiful date,there comes adi the name on the cell is enough for feeling his presence🥱.

Anywz the whole OS was beautifully written😃 thanks alot for the pm🤗

Originally posted by: remya1990

Beautiful Aani...

The scene of your imagination took my heart dear...awesome...

Reading your OS, my mind could only think about Raman admiring his wife, along their talks...may be because I loved that scene on screen too, and i could imagine a lot more reading your OS. And after reading your OS Aani, i could only remember Lord Byron's lines from the poem "There be none of Beauty's daughters"

"There be none of Beauty's daughters

With a magic like Thee;

And like music on the waters

Is thy sweet voice to me:

When, as if its sound were causing

The charmed ocean's pausing,

The waves lie still and gleaming,

And the lull'd winds seem dreaming:

And the midnight moon is weaving

Her bright chain o'er the deep,

Whose breast is gently heaving

As an infant's asleep:

So the spirit bows before thee

To listen and adore thee;

With a full but soft emotion,

Like the swell of Summer's ocean."

Your writings are so poetical Aani, such that they always makes me remind of verses which

I have read and long forgotten.

This was a wonderful piece of work Aani

Lovely.

Originally posted by: Anuhyaa

This is so beautifully written...Thank you...
You know in your world you don't need to accommodate Adi & Shagun..😛

I wish you have completed the entire date night...The settings and everything were so perfect to waste it...

But...its ok...May be someother time with someother setting...

I seriously don't know what the Cvs have in their mind for the confession...since they let go of the beautiful mood...

Originally posted by: s_kavya

Awww that was lovely... we didn't get much in the show... ishra didn't even talked properly and phone rang... but this OS wow loved it... 😳 😊

Originally posted by: RomComFan

WOW! 👏

Love this- both the way you went into detail about the scene we saw and the way you altered it.
The 'verbal foreplay' is amazing- I can so see them doing this, I wish they had done this. It's simply perfect for ISHRA.

Hope to see you writing again more often!😊

Originally posted by: appuss

there is no need for me to say it is awesome... whatever you write is awesome😳

wish it was just not a glimpse... thanks aani😳👏😃

Originally posted by: sweety2585

It is actually an Paradise..loved it so much..😳

Beautifully written..👏👏

Originally posted by: whitelily

lovely os 🤗

Originally posted by: Eyes-Wide-Shut

Aani so nice to have you back in the make belief world of YHM, I hope all is well and life is sorted for you now. 😊

Thank you for this, it was a scintillating read. I loved the quote and everything that followed, I absolutely loved the conversational nature of your OS and it was so very Ishra like. The subtlety in your writing is my favorite part and the best part of this OS for me is when he places her hand on his chest because when the heart speaks then who needs words. Truly beautiful and a treat to read but then again anything from you is a treat so this isn't a surprise. 😃

Originally posted by: Nikki_Titli

lovely OS...the title is so apt for this OS...😊