Originally posted by: prachi_vrushan
this was awesome
omg this was beautiful
hayee u just made my day
I'm in ishra land now
Lovely...I liked your version of their first date !😳
Originally posted by: RomComFan
What a lovely OS! 👏
Thanks so much for the PM and for writing this so we can see what might have been.😃
Sweet, romantic and absolutely adorable- I love it!
Hope to see more from you i the future.😊
Originally posted by: ATTITUDEBABY
Hayye.. Ravan kumar is so romantic.. Awesome!!
Originally posted by: yhmmylife
Loved it...too good..very sensuous...
beautiful...and ishralicious...👏
Originally posted by: SanayaBarun
Romantic os loved it! Thanks for the pm
Originally posted by: ishra123
Awesome! !!!!!
Beautifully written! !!!!!!
Loved it!!!!!!
Romantic! !!!!!!
Perfect! !!!!!!
Thanks For pm
Originally posted by: harichandana
Loved it totally kash this happens in show evry enotion is perfectly portrayed
Originally posted by: JniISHRA83
Superb superb superb...Romantic Bhallas
Originally posted by: Theresa.KP
Brilliantly written, Can express in words. And it will for sure take a long time for it to be shown onscreen. Thank you for giving us those precious moment now ❤️
Awesome...!!!
Originally posted by: sweety2585
OMG..its mind blowing..😳
It just gave me goosebumps..😉😉Just loved this OS..👏👏
Originally posted by: .Jayashree.
awesome os 👏
loved it
thanks for pm
superb OS👍🏼
awesome..
loved it..!!
I love this ending of thw date way better than the one in the show! Amazing OS!
Originally posted by: omshreejaanu
Drool worthy!! 😳
OMG! What an OS dr.
Better than show I think.
Y can't CV's get such ideas?
U r awsm.
Do write more and update ur story soon plz.
Tnx 4 pm.
Originally posted by: whitelily
awesome os
Originally posted by: -Mrinalini-
I just loved it so much that I wish something like this could happen! 😳 ❤️
OMGG!!!! wowww!! kash iska adha mile aaj ke episode mein! u hv written it soo beautifully!
inka romance shuru and either someone's phone will ring and the plan will get spoiled in the serial!but ur updatee... eekss..i was smiling n blushing!! awesummm updatee!! <3
Originally posted by: manjusha7
woww.it was beautiful
Originally posted by: N.R.Rona
It was amazing mrsrakhra..eventhough you dont wrote the most obvious part..uski kami mehsoos nahin huva..jitna hain vahi kaphi thi...loved it to the core..the passion was unbearable... Do write more..u r really brilliant..
Originally posted by: exploringmyself
aweesome!!!
Originally posted by: -AmalAziz-
Wow.. Its Mind blowing OS & Very well Written .. Loved it .
Thanks for PM !
Originally posted by: sweet_menu
its really awesome... loved each n every line of thiss os...u r brilliant writer...
Originally posted by: sahibasharma
oh my my ..
beautiful date...cud imagine ishra all thru the way,,,sweet update
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