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Introduction- Current track.. Raman is leaving for Singapore handing over divorce papers to Neil Pathak.
Raman- Acha ma.. Chalta hu.. Ap khayal rakhiyega apna aur papa ka.. (towards Simi) Aur tu.. Dhyan rakhna sabka.. Ishita ka bhi.
(Ishita does not come downstairs and is sobbing bitterly in her room)
Raman(towards Ruhi)- Ruhi beta.. Papa ko ek kiss bhi nai doge( meanwhile Ruhi comes and gives his dad a goodbye kiss) Beta ap ache bache ban ke rehna aur sabka khayal rakhna (his heart sinking and voice choking as he proceeds) Dadu.. Dadi.. Bua.. Chachu aur( drops a tear) Ishima ka..
Ruhi (wipes his tears)- Ohho phitte muh.. Papa ap ro mat.. Ab mai big girl ho gyi hu na.
( Meanwhile Pathak intervenes)
Pathak- Bhai time ho gya.. Bahar ghadi aa gyi h.
Raman bids farewell to his in-laws too and leaves without meeting Ishita
Raman( in the car.. In his thoughts)- Ishita mai tumse bina mile hi aagya.. Tumhe dekhkar shayad mujse ek kadam bhi nahi badaya jata.. Parr ye sab tumhari zindagi se sari manhoosiyat door karne ke liye hi toh karr rha hu.
In Bhalla house
Pathak- Aunty ji. Ishita bhabhi kaha hai?
Toshi- Puttar vo toh apne kamre se bahar hi nahi ayi hai. Ja uper kamre Wich hi hai
( Neil goes upstairs)
Neil- Ishita bhabhi.
Ishita(realizing someone has come wipes her tears)- Han bolo.
Neil- Bhabhi. Vo mai..vo
Ishita- Raman gaye.
Neil- Ji
Ishita- Bolo.
Neil- Bhabhi vo mai..mai vo
Ishita- Bolo Neil kya baat hai
( Meanwhile he hands over the divorce papers in her hand)
Ishita(suprised)- kya hai iss envelope mein?
Neil remains unanswered.
Ishita opens the envelope and remains dumbstruck. All she can utter is the word "DIVORCE".
Ishita cannot control herself and rushes out sobbing. While she rushes down the stairs, her leg slips and she falls down leaving her head injured.
She is rushed to hospital immediately.. While others try contacting Raman.. Raman cannot be contacted as his phone went unreachable..
Toshi- Romi laga Raman ka phone..
Romi- Nai mummy Ji.. Kitni baar try kar chuka hu
Toshi- Hey Mata Rani. Meri bachchi ko bacha lo.
Romi- ( realizing that Raman's phone ringed) Mummy Ji.. Lag Gya.. Lag gya phone bhai ka..
Raman disconnects the phone deliberately. Romi calls him again but he disconnects again. Romi asks Neil to try. Raman picks up the call.
Neil- Hello. Raman bhai.. Bhai.
(meanwhile Raman interrupts)
Raman- Pathak papers de diye tune.. Kya kaha usne??
Neil- Bhai.. Bhai bhabhi stairs se neeche gir gyi h..
Raman( astounded)- What?
Neil- Bhai jaise hi maine papers diye unhe vo bhagi aur stairs se neeche
Raman- Mai... Mai aa rha hun
PS- So guys this was the first part. If you would like me to continue only then I shall continue. Hope you guys like my attempt. Criticisms accepted.
Hie guys here I present the second part of the OS. Hope you feel the same whateva I felt while writing. Happy reading.
Hospital-
Doctor comes out of Ishita's ward.
Toshi- Doctor..Doctor meri bachchi kaisi hai??
Mr. Bhalla- Doctor kaisi hai Ishita?
Romi- Sir bhabhi kaisi hain?
Doctor- (towards Mr. Bhalla) Ap mere sath aayiye.
( They both head towards his cabin)
Mr. Bhalla- Doctor Sahab. Kya baat hai? Kya hua hai Ishita ko? Thik toh hai na vo.
Doctor- Dekhiye Mr. Bhalla. Patient ki halat bohot critical hai.. Blood loss kafi ho chuka hai.. Abb hume inka ek major operation karna padega par..
Mr. Bhalla(in tears)- Parr kya doctor?
Doctor- Parr uske baad bhi inke bachne ki guarantee hum nahi le sakte. I mean patient ki zindagi iss operation ki success par hi depend karti hai.
Mr. Bhalla chokes and comes out and narrates the whole matter to his family.
Toshi- Hey mata Rani.. Mair karo.
Raksha karo meri bachi ki.. Kya muh dikhaungi madrasan ko mai..
On the other hand while returning from the airport Raman weeps bitterly-
Raman- Ishita.. Ye kya ho gya hai tumhe.. Phir meri hi galti ki vajah se tumhare sath ye hua hai..
( Meanwhile he gets a call from Romi narrating what the doctor says. Raman reaches hospital quickly)
For the next 03 hours the operation continued and doctors came out-
Raman- Doctor.. Doctor kaisi hai vo. Meri biwi hai vo usko kuch nahi hona chahiye.. Doctor thik toh hai na vo.
Toshi- (weeping bitterly) Kaisi hai meri bachi doctor. Boliye na.
Doctor(looked stressed)- Dekhiye aise case mein complications bohot badd jati hai. We tried our best but ye operation utna successful nahi tha jitna we expected. Abb toh sab upar wale ke hath me hai. Hume unke hosh me aane ka intezaar karna padega
Raman(getting angry)- Doctor.. Ishita ko kuch nahi hona chahiye.. Zindagi hai vo meri.. Agar usko kuch ho gya na toh..
(meanwhile nurse calls on doctor)
Nurse- Doctor! Patient is reacting.
Doctor- Whaat? Dekhte hain.
Nurse- Doctor ye kisi Raman ka naam continuously moan kar rahi hai.
Doctor- Inki family me pucho Raman kaun hai and unko yaha bulao.
( Nurse comes out and calls Raman inside)
Raman(holds Ishita's hand)- Ishita.. Ishita aankhen kholo.. Dekho mai aagya.. Kahin nahi gaya mai.. Tumhare paas hu.. Pass hu tumhare mai.. Dekho meri taraf.. Ishita Ruhi ke liye aankhen kholo..
Doctor- Mr. Raman.. Ap try kijiye.. She'll respond. She definitely will. Ap kuch aisa boliye jo inhe pasand ho.. Jo ye sunna chahti ho.
Raman- Ishita meri Jhansi Ki Rani.. Jeet ja ye ladai bhi.. Pagal madrasan ko sone ka bohot shauk aa rha hai.. Daant ukhadte huye thak gyi kya madrasan.. Aur haan doctor nahi dentist ho tum.. Ruhi ko bataunga ki uski Ishima kitni badi pagal hai.. ( Raman tried saying all these till morning but felt dejected now. He was about to leave when he heard her JKR uttering some words)
Guys suspense is on. Wait for the third part. Hope you are liking the attempt.
Criticism accepted.
Raman- Acha ma.. Chalta hu.. Ap khayal rakhiyega apna aur papa ka.. (towards Simi) Aur tu.. Dhyan rakhna sabka.. Ishita ka bhi.
(Ishita does not come downstairs and is sobbing bitterly in her room)
Raman(towards Ruhi)- Ruhi beta.. Papa ko ek kiss bhi nai doge( meanwhile Ruhi comes and gives his dad a goodbye kiss) Beta ap ache bache ban ke rehna aur sabka khayal rakhna (his heart sinking and voice choking as he proceeds) Dadu.. Dadi.. Bua.. Chachu aur( drops a tear) Ishima ka..
Ruhi (wipes his tears)- Ohho phitte muh.. Papa ap ro mat.. Ab mai big girl ho gyi hu na.
( Meanwhile Pathak intervenes)
Pathak- Bhai time ho gya.. Bahar ghadi aa gyi h.
Raman bids farewell to his in-laws too and leaves without meeting Ishita
Raman( in the car.. In his thoughts)- Ishita mai tumse bina mile hi aagya.. Tumhe dekhkar shayad mujse ek kadam bhi nahi badaya jata.. Parr ye sab tumhari zindagi se sari manhoosiyat door karne ke liye hi toh karr rha hu.
In Bhalla house
Pathak- Aunty ji. Ishita bhabhi kaha hai?
Toshi- Puttar vo toh apne kamre se bahar hi nahi ayi hai. Ja uper kamre Wich hi hai
( Neil goes upstairs)
Neil- Ishita bhabhi.
Ishita(realizing someone has come wipes her tears)- Han bolo.
Neil- Bhabhi. Vo mai..vo
Ishita- Raman gaye.
Neil- Ji
Ishita- Bolo.
Neil- Bhabhi vo mai..mai vo
Ishita- Bolo Neil kya baat hai
( Meanwhile he hands over the divorce papers in her hand)
Ishita(suprised)- kya hai iss envelope mein?
Neil remains unanswered.
Ishita opens the envelope and remains dumbstruck. All she can utter is the word "DIVORCE".
Ishita cannot control herself and rushes out sobbing. While she rushes down the stairs, her leg slips and she falls down leaving her head injured.
She is rushed to hospital immediately.. While others try contacting Raman.. Raman cannot be contacted as his phone went unreachable..
Toshi- Romi laga Raman ka phone..
Romi- Nai mummy Ji.. Kitni baar try kar chuka hu
Toshi- Hey Mata Rani. Meri bachchi ko bacha lo.
Romi- ( realizing that Raman's phone ringed) Mummy Ji.. Lag Gya.. Lag gya phone bhai ka..
Raman disconnects the phone deliberately. Romi calls him again but he disconnects again. Romi asks Neil to try. Raman picks up the call.
Neil- Hello. Raman bhai.. Bhai.
(meanwhile Raman interrupts)
Raman- Pathak papers de diye tune.. Kya kaha usne??
Neil- Bhai.. Bhai bhabhi stairs se neeche gir gyi h..
Raman( astounded)- What?
Neil- Bhai jaise hi maine papers diye unhe vo bhagi aur stairs se neeche
Raman- Mai... Mai aa rha hun
PS- So guys this was the first part. If you would like me to continue only then I shall continue. Hope you guys like my attempt. Criticisms accepted.
Hie guys here I present the second part of the OS. Hope you feel the same whateva I felt while writing. Happy reading.
Hospital-
Doctor comes out of Ishita's ward.
Toshi- Doctor..Doctor meri bachchi kaisi hai??
Mr. Bhalla- Doctor kaisi hai Ishita?
Romi- Sir bhabhi kaisi hain?
Doctor- (towards Mr. Bhalla) Ap mere sath aayiye.
( They both head towards his cabin)
Mr. Bhalla- Doctor Sahab. Kya baat hai? Kya hua hai Ishita ko? Thik toh hai na vo.
Doctor- Dekhiye Mr. Bhalla. Patient ki halat bohot critical hai.. Blood loss kafi ho chuka hai.. Abb hume inka ek major operation karna padega par..
Mr. Bhalla(in tears)- Parr kya doctor?
Doctor- Parr uske baad bhi inke bachne ki guarantee hum nahi le sakte. I mean patient ki zindagi iss operation ki success par hi depend karti hai.
Mr. Bhalla chokes and comes out and narrates the whole matter to his family.
Toshi- Hey mata Rani.. Mair karo.
Raksha karo meri bachi ki.. Kya muh dikhaungi madrasan ko mai..
On the other hand while returning from the airport Raman weeps bitterly-
Raman- Ishita.. Ye kya ho gya hai tumhe.. Phir meri hi galti ki vajah se tumhare sath ye hua hai..
( Meanwhile he gets a call from Romi narrating what the doctor says. Raman reaches hospital quickly)
For the next 03 hours the operation continued and doctors came out-
Raman- Doctor.. Doctor kaisi hai vo. Meri biwi hai vo usko kuch nahi hona chahiye.. Doctor thik toh hai na vo.
Toshi- (weeping bitterly) Kaisi hai meri bachi doctor. Boliye na.
Doctor(looked stressed)- Dekhiye aise case mein complications bohot badd jati hai. We tried our best but ye operation utna successful nahi tha jitna we expected. Abb toh sab upar wale ke hath me hai. Hume unke hosh me aane ka intezaar karna padega
Raman(getting angry)- Doctor.. Ishita ko kuch nahi hona chahiye.. Zindagi hai vo meri.. Agar usko kuch ho gya na toh..
(meanwhile nurse calls on doctor)
Nurse- Doctor! Patient is reacting.
Doctor- Whaat? Dekhte hain.
Nurse- Doctor ye kisi Raman ka naam continuously moan kar rahi hai.
Doctor- Inki family me pucho Raman kaun hai and unko yaha bulao.
( Nurse comes out and calls Raman inside)
Raman(holds Ishita's hand)- Ishita.. Ishita aankhen kholo.. Dekho mai aagya.. Kahin nahi gaya mai.. Tumhare paas hu.. Pass hu tumhare mai.. Dekho meri taraf.. Ishita Ruhi ke liye aankhen kholo..
Doctor- Mr. Raman.. Ap try kijiye.. She'll respond. She definitely will. Ap kuch aisa boliye jo inhe pasand ho.. Jo ye sunna chahti ho.
Raman- Ishita meri Jhansi Ki Rani.. Jeet ja ye ladai bhi.. Pagal madrasan ko sone ka bohot shauk aa rha hai.. Daant ukhadte huye thak gyi kya madrasan.. Aur haan doctor nahi dentist ho tum.. Ruhi ko bataunga ki uski Ishima kitni badi pagal hai.. ( Raman tried saying all these till morning but felt dejected now. He was about to leave when he heard her JKR uttering some words)
Guys suspense is on. Wait for the third part. Hope you are liking the attempt.
Criticism accepted.
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