IshRa OS: Walking Away - Page 2

Originally posted by: .Rajji.

Every decision that you make is the right one because of our no regret policy !

And the song. You know it still haunts me. You, your songs, your pms and now your writing... you own me.

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Originally posted by: -Payal-

My forever sounding board. Thank you for...you. ❤️ (Yep. Just broke the no "thank you" policy. Deal with it.)

PS: I'm still working on that no regrets thing.

PSS: You own me too. (Wait til Kiara gets here, she'll have something to say about this.)

Originally posted by: .Rajji.

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Kiara! Poor baby, she's been working really hard on that Meherbaan update, when i see how much time and efforts she puts into each update, i totally get why they are so delayed.😲⭐️

Originally posted by: GanBarunFan

Payal ...this is so beautiful...heartbreaking but beautiful! You have written so well I could visualize and feel the emotions of the scenes...And this is your 1st OS...dear you should write more ...

this is my second read and still it pulls my heart..as the emotion in both is so raw...She's so anxious to let him know before he goes away to Singapore that he's the love of her life...and he knows that she wants to profess love and is trying his best to avoid that moment as he knows it might weaken his resolve of leaving her for her betterment...I love the fact you pointed out his guilt is two fold: one which is making him leave and one because he's leaving as he knows that would break her too...

Payal ...just beautiful!

no pressure but please write more OS.

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Originally posted by: Eyes-Wide-Shut

P you know how territorial I get about puttar and there are a very few who I trust with him, and you are one of those select few. Yes, I know I sound like a moron thinking I own puttar but that character is very close to my heart and he is equally close to yours & apparently also close to a few members of your family, 😆 anywho coming to the point, I knew you are one of the only few who can do justice to puttar's true character and I wasn't wrong!

I know the production house and the creative teams have money to make and TRP chart to climb so they must cater to all the audiences and hence we sometimes don't get what we would like to see on screen, so I try and make a story in my head and rewrite a scene as per my wishes. I say all of this because this is exactly what I would want to see transpire between Mr. & Mrs. Puttar on screen in that precap scene.

You have captured Ishita's vulnerability and Raman's hesitancy so well that I can touch their feelings, your description of missus' endearment brought a smile to my face and puttar's agony filled my eyes with tears. You missy must write more so I can get scenes that I would like to see on television.

Your brilliant writing reminded me of this scene 😭, you missy are way too good for not to be writing so after the exam, can you please indulge us. K...Thanks!

Originally posted by: .Rajji.

One moment. One single moment, that's all it takes for a life to turn around, for better or worse.

Chottu sa OS on a chottu sa moment. 5 minutes or less in the life of IshRa but the consequences of it could be written as a 1000 page long story. There was so much in those 5 minutes, Rajj...not just the consequences, the 5 minutes itself - the moment itself was a 1000 page novel...so much was conveyed without saying a word.

You captured Raman walking away perfectly Payal. The calm before the storm. The calm before the storm, yes, but ironically, they were both battling their own inner storms through the whole thing - her's one of eager desperation, his of guilt and heartbreak.

They're both in the same room, inches away from each other but so far at the same time (Ishita in love and Raman in distress - that you both captured wonderfully). He is already gone, but his love is outstretching itself to reach out one last time for her. @Bold - thank you, I'm glad it came across @Underlined: That's everything. I can't. You know.

You beautifully wrote the way Ishita is nothing but radiating love in this moment, I couldn't have felt it better if i had been in the room with them. This woman is love, pure love. She is warmth, care, softness and kindness. She is comfort and i can't imagine Raman ever wanting to leave her side. But he will, because if her love is the sun, his is the whole solar system. He won't put anything before her safety, not even his earth shattering love. I had to write that in because as I've watched the episodes of late, the way she looks at him, the amount of love that pours from her eyes for him baffles me every time. @Bold: so poetically beautiful, Rajj - this is why you're the writer and I'm not. Thank you for those lines.

The exchange of words they have is absolutely IshRa. It made me smile. Thank you, I tried to keep the characters as close as I could to what we see on screen. Those lines just seemed natural

"...tum wahan lecture dene nahi hogi na, issi liye abhi se aadat daal raha hoon tumhare lecture na sunne ki."

"Aur main lecture dena chahti hoon, taki aap aise hi ek do taane aur maar sako."

I came again and again to it because i didn't want to move to the next part that i knew was coming. Avoiding, just like Raman was avoiding hearing the words he couldn't bear to hear. Not right now, not now that he's finally strong enough to leave. His determination shielding him like a bubble of soap shields a bit of air, menacing to break at any moment. So he avoids her, her words and her eyes. Your insight into RKB...I'm not even surprised. You get him so well.

"Jaana padega" he says. JAANA. PADEGA. There is no "mujhko" because HE doesn't want to go. It's not "jaana HAI" because he wants to push it away for a few more minutes, let it sit a few more moments in the future. Jaana padega, as a chore, the worst duty he'll ever came across. Exactly! Thank you for picking up on this.

And then she cries as the words sink into her. He is going. For a few days, for a lifetime, for ever, it doesn't matter. He is going away from her and he won't even let her say the words that'll give her the strength to wait for his come back. So she cries in grief because her love is overwhelming and it's not finding its safe place yet. It's still in the air. Some words doesn't have to be said to be known -like thank you, or sorry or i missed you- but some don't find a meaning until they are spoken out - I love you. I'll wait for you. My heart breaks for her because she knows he knows what she's trying to say - she knows he feels it too, but he's not even giving her the opportunity. He's depriving her of saying the words she needs to say, to hear. That's where her frustration is coming from...his being aware and avoiding it all the same.

No matter how much he wanted to wipe every tear from eyes, it wouldn't be fair to her...for in the coming hours, he'd give her hundreds more to replace the ones he's wiped away.

and just like that, the moment is over. 5 minutes in the life of IshRa but a life time of pain. Could you imagine? I can't even fathom. I can't.

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I would not have run off

But i couldn't bear that it's me.

It's my fault

I should not be so lost

But i've got nothing left to love.

These lines could not be more perfect. PS: You're a few days behind on the music front...remember, you promised a few every day...just a friendly reminder. 😳

and i second Gan, you "should" write more (not that i'm in any position to tell you what you should and should not but... yeah).😳 Of course you are in that position - why would you even doubt that? BUT, if I am to do your bidding, you gotta help me deal with the feels first - cause u know I can't. Add this to the list of things you're coaching me on, K? ❤️

Originally posted by: s_kavya

Amazing... you know what after watching precap i was eagerly waiting for today's Epi... and after reading this Beautiful OS of yours my eagerness increasing more... what you written is i think it exactly going to happen in show..precap suggests that... i read your replies on Gan 's posts... you write beautifully... and this OS as i said in starting Amazing..loved it 👏 👏