IshRa OS: Walking Away - Page 4

Originally posted by: hemanshi

You know you really do sell yourself short..You are one hellva an amazing writer and I wish you would own up to the title..You know how we are in awe of the amazing writers present in this forum..take this as me being in awe of you!..👏 Don't embarrass me, please. The standard of writing that has been set by the incredible writers on this forum is so far out of my reach it's sad. But you and I have discussed this at great length so lets move on.

That being said, you captured the scene beautifully and since I read the OS before I watched the scene, i really enjoyed the scene more. In fact, every second of that scene, I was thinking of your OS and I was almost disappointed that they did'nt follow your script! Thank you my love, but I think the scene we got to see far exceeded anything I could have conjured up in my head. It was perfection.

The agony of unrequited love, can anything be so wonderfully poetic? But the thing here that really awakens the poetic side in all of us, is that this is not really unrequited love because of fate or destiny..this is because of a man's choice. To accept the pain, the agony of not being with woman you love, and actually take that step with a completely stable mind (his dufferness is debatable but for the sake of my essay here, lets call him stable)..Sigh..the CV's really know how to latch us in don't they? Do you have to go and get philosophical on me every time? You know, the more I think about it, I love the idea of sacrifice in the name of love, but it's like I said, he's not only depriving himself of the love he deserves, but he's depriving her too. Now that I've had time to ponder it, I think My RKB is being rather selfish (not that he means to be - he'd give his life for her, no questions asked, but he's just so stupid in his thought process). It's one thing to leave the one you love for their well-being, but in this case, he's leaving her in the ring to fight with the demons of his past alone, and that doesn't sit well with me. He's dumb. Sweet, but dumb.

But all that objectiveness put aside..Reading your OS before watching the episode made me enjoy the whole experience even more.. You're too nice to me. I love you. You know that.

In the words of RKB "i love you yaar" :) See above. 😳

Originally posted by: Eyes-Wide-Shut

P 🤗,

1) You are crazy to think that you can't put words to emotions, so stop it and 'don't angry me' 😡

2) I loved puttar's plight in your writing and there is no one that can do justice to puttar and Adi like you can! The reason I did not comment on his plight is because well you know what puttar's plight does to me, so I am playing the game of denial 😆

3)I said it before but i'll say it again, you need to write more and now that Adi is entering Raman's life...I would love to read an OS by you on that...I can't wait! 😃

Originally posted by: Veeann

Wow. This is beautifully written Payal. Please do write more

Originally posted by: rutu83

poignant

Originally posted by: .Rajji.

we shall write down a petition for her to write more. 😳