ISHRA SS- You .. Me ..ALways... part 3 on page 4 - Page 2

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Posted: 10 years ago
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awesumm update! loved it! cont soon! <3
pls pm me! thnkuu!
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will continue soon !!!
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A very nice start .. plz update soon n also PM me .. 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thank You all for your kind words of encouragement ! Here's the second part! :)


Part 2:

Ishita was angry, just when she needed her sister, she doesn't answer. Mihika was battling her own battles, she couldn't be blamed.

"Should I call Mihir... "The thought went fast as it came. No one the family knew, they all thought Raman was on a business trip. Pathak had met her only and handed her the divorce paper sharing Raman agony. Ishita looked up at the officer who was surprisingly patient and very helpful, as if he understood her pain. She let out "sigh*.

"Listen bhai...I need to go home and come back"

The officer smiled " I'll be waiting right here mam, ask for Rahul when you come back...next flight is in 2 hours ..."

"Thank you so much..." with that Ishita left the airport.

She was driving, to her benefit there were no traffic and in 15 minutes she was home. She went inside her room and started packing whatever clothes that caught her hand, along with her travel documents. She wasted no time and went out straight to leave again.

" Ishimaaa..." a small voice brought her back to her senses.

Ishita turned and found her daughter with Mummyji looking confused at Ishita.

" Ishita Puthar...what happened, where you going with your bag" Mrs.Bhalla asked with a concern clearly evident in her voice.

Ishita kneeled down to Ruhi, stared at her for few minutes before she spoke " Ruhi...Ishima will be back with Papa" saying that she kissed Ruhi's forehead. She looked at her mummyji and said " and mummyji... I will answer all questions when I come back but I have to go now..." she said with her half-baked smile. Ishita left the Bhalla residence not letting anymore questions coming her way.

Ishita drove back to the airport. She parked her car and came around to take her luggage when something caught her attention. It was the folder Pathak had handed to her, she took that with her luggage ad went to meet Rahul.

She called Mihir asking Raman's Singapore address. He teased her asking of she started to miss him already, Ishita could only let out cold laugh. Mihir asked if everything was okay sensing something was off in his Bhabi tone, Ishita brushed aside all questions saying she will answer them later.

Just like that Ishita was on her way to Singapore. She had a lot to say to Raman but more importantly a LOT to ask him.

Meanwhile in Singapore.

Raman unlocked the door to his room. It was dark and Raman didn't want to turn on the lights either. He managed to find his way to the bed and sat in the complete darkness, to him it depict his life at the moment, dark and alone. Tears seemed to not leave Raman, he thought what was he exactly trying to do. When he was in India, this decision to leave her seemed so right, the pain she was going through cause of his past was too much to bare, and he wanted to set her free. But now that he was far from her, he felt alone! He needed to argue with her to keep his sanity, to remind himself he too was a human. He needed her to confort him and remind him that he is not alone. He took out his phone to look at her picture again.'' Ishitaa...My Jhansi Ki Rani...I MISS YOU'' he said as tears rolled down his cheeks. He had a lot to say to her. He let out a small chuckle laughing at life's cruelty. Initially when he married her, he hated her! His daughter needed a mother and he needed his daughter. It was simple, like a business deal, no emotions and no hurt. Love was foreign word for him, he didn't have room for it in his life and to his benefit love took least interest in him too. His past had sucked every little joy in his life. When she entered his life, he wasn't ready for Ishita, more like he underestimated her power. Without ever letting him know she had somehow managed to take all his broken pieces and gently put them back together. He had changed...no was a NEW man. Even though he never thanked her nor did she expect a thank, both had understood that it was god's little magical game. Raman felt maybe the past he had only turn out the way it did just so she can enter his life. Undeniably Ruhi was from his past, but she was needed for his future with the great Jhansi Ki Rani, without Ruhi, Ishita would of never came in. Naturally he fell in love with Ishita without any effort and against much resistance. He had learned to love and had accepted that she was his wife, he couldn't ever thank god enough for his generosity, how lucky he was in getting her, how all the pain in his life was worth for getting HER! And just when He wanted to give back Ishita all the joys and happiness she was giving him and more. He wanted was to keep her happy and take the relationship further and truly claim her as a husband in every sense. But the Shagun's wedding fiasco shaked him up. Ishita is always smiling putting up an act like nothing is hurting her, so Raman never worried before but when she broke down after the bachelor party incident had woken Raman up from the illusion of Ishita's smile. She was getting wounded for him and that too because of him. He realised while Ishita was busy taking his pains and sorrows away, that's all he has been giving her. The mere thought of his absence is the only solution to her worries was hard to digest but he loved her, it was his turn to give back to her for all that she has given him. He had to take all the pain form her even if it meant paining himself. To think He has done it, made him smile, with that Raman fell down on his bed and closed his eyes.




How was that?? Criticism welcomed !

Edited by Viji15 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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grt piece👏👏 but a short one 😆😆 pls continue soon waiting for jkr reaction in your ss...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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wow nice ... JKR going to Singapore..liked it...
eagerly waiting for nxt update ...
thanks
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: agneeputra

grt piece👏👏 but a short one 😆😆 pls continue soon waiting for jkr reaction in your ss...


Lol 😳 sorry, I write thenm on my mobile usually at work and dont't realise how short till i log on the computer, will make sure the next one is a proper one 😊
Edited by Viji15 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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suprb...
eagrly waitng wht ishu vl do...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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awesome
nicely written👏
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its superb..good story..👏

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