OS - O Saiyyan - Page 4

Originally posted by: MysticRiver

good one-shot..👍🏼

Originally posted by: N.R.Rona

Woww..that was superb n awesome..ishu initiated the kiss..bechara..control hi nahi ho paya..kya karein..

needs more shopping..huh..zara blouse ko baksh dete to bechara bach jate..donon hain hi itna hot tho aisa hi hogana..

nice one aaminaa

Originally posted by: aishu_divan

OMG this was amazing yaar😃😃 So damn hawt and romantic at the same time so beautiful..😃

Please write more..Im laready in luv with your Abhi-Simmi OS..😃❤️ You are an amazing writer👏

Originally posted by: OfTheHeart

How Do you show, when you scream??? Is it what is the use of Caps? Okay then I must do it...

AMNAAA!!!!!!!!!!!

I THOUGHT U DON'T WRITE SUCHFICs!!!!!!😲😲

Gosh! And was I just biting my nails??? My whole, a week old manicure got bloody wasted reading this shot!!! Gosh It was terrific girl!!!!

I mean... I mean!!! I mean I just fell in love with it... and I was bloody blushing all the shades of scarlet... And my Sister just taunted me that I am one mad woman, (While I was reading, and now as am typing this reply)

Can you make me look any more stupid? Gosh... These are the after effects after reading you, you know!!!

But please I beg you... Keep Me insane!!!!☺️

Originally posted by: prachi_vrushan

amazing n romantic os

Beautiful and romantic Amna...

Originally posted by: remya1990

Beautiful and romantic Amna...

Its really poetical...

A freshness in your writing, in each and every writings of yours.

Loved it Amna...

Hey aaminah! That was so romantic. I've read all your stories and I'm a big fan of yours. You're my favourite story writer on this forum. This is the first time I'm saying this because I'm not an active member of the forum as regards commenting, but I frequent the forum every day. I always look forward to your stories. They're so differently romantic than the others. Perhaps it's the way you write it. You add mystery to romance and keep us wanting for more. The dialogues are so impressive and very witty. This one's great!!! Waiting for more of these😊

Originally posted by: paru_rox

Perfect ... absolutely perfect !!!

I had kept this bookmarked to read when I have some good time on my hands & glad I did that. Enjoyed every word of it Amzz.