MY DREAM TRACK FF.UNDEAD(part 23added)28/01/2015

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SAKIV

@SAKIVIAM

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Posted: 10 years ago

#351

Daiary is brought particulary to bring story in old Ishita's POV.

Which is major part no one can explain her POV except herself so A diary is brought

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aarti hari chandana

@Ishradivani

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Posted: 10 years ago

#352

Totally loved both the updates vikas

The total kiss sequence both new n old ishita was amazing n in last part ruhi nautanki n ramans response to it despite knowing truth was was excellent loved the bond ruman share.sry for late reply busy with exams so cudn't rply .n plzzz update soonish cant wait last was a cliffhanger tat photo n dairy so much suspense n in nxt update if possible write how old ishita n raman fell in love would love to see it.

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SAKIV

@SAKIVIAM

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Posted: 10 years ago

#353

Yup next part ebters to the story of their old love story in Ishita's POV.

Raman's POV is little difficult to bring and complex too.

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Nisha

@Nichuss

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Posted: 10 years ago

#354

super updt...

temple idea was rocking...

ashok-shagun...always ready to get insulted by raman...

it was fun...

big surpise was old ishu know abt ishita... and

planned for this marriage from that day

destiny of ishu was meant to b with rkb...

special thanks for ishraru shopping...

its my first fav epsd of yhm...

i really enjoyed the threesome shopping...

tey looked so perfect from that day...

zor lagake dhakka... :v 🤣

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SAKIV

@SAKIVIAM

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Posted: 10 years ago

#355

Originally posted by: Nichuss
super updt...
temple idea was rocking...
ashok-shagun...always ready to get insulted by raman...
it was fun...

big surpise was old ishu know abt ishita... and
planned for this marriage from that day

destiny of ishu was meant to b with rkb...

special thanks for ishraru shopping...
its my first fav epsd of yhm...

i really enjoyed the threesome shopping...

tey looked so perfect from that day...

zor lagake dhakka... :v 🤣

here dhakka din't happen.But yes it was my fav too.

here all cars are branded .

I mean she just knew about Ishita.She din't share with anyone.She would have kepr demmand in some way that Raman goes to Delhi and will elaborate in diary.

OLD ISHITA's POV is very important for story so has to bring diary as she is no more

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PRAVEENDM

@PRAVEENDM

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#356

I must admit you are "KING OF STORY TWISTER".What a twist man,loved it.Plz PM me your next update.

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VENBA

@VENBA

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#357

Amazing update yaar..

You are a such a beautiful creator of stories...

No one would have expected this twist in the story..

Brilliant..👏👏

Waiting for the next part..😊😊

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neha

@Iloveishra

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#358

Great going vikas...loved the twist...waiting for love to bloom in their lives. ..can't believe that its just been 4days since the last update...feels like it was ages ago...I know its not quite easy..but please update soon...