Ek 'OS-Thon' Thread YHMians Ke Naam- THE LAST UPDATE PG 70

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oriyu

@oriyu24

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Posted: 11 years ago

#581

Originally posted by: -IshRaDivAn-
@iluvuzaya : That was HOT and VERY bold I must say ! Wish I could find a word better than HOT to describe that one! ☺️☺️ ^ infinity! That should say it all..😳

Lovely OS :)

thansk u so much😳

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oriyu

@oriyu24

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Posted: 11 years ago

#582

Originally posted by: yhmmylife
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@ankita : too many references to sherbet...hotel romance ke bad jodi can;t wait to reach home also...

@iluvuzaya : very hot ...

@OSJ : it was beautiful..

thanks u so much

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Soul_Stirrer

@Soul_Stirrer

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#583

Oju that was sensuous to the core. Loved it. You described it sooo perfectly. And an angry wife is a wild wife in bed😉 loved ur collage too. It was the perfect dessert for this thread. The way they surrendered to each other and the way they were each other's undoing. Love u OJu🤗 and please write more once u get through ur busy schedule.😳

Edited by Scribble_Tweety - 11 years ago

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blue24

@blue24

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#584

NO LONGER A BORING RIDE

It was a cold winter night and ishra were going out of town to attend some conference by raman.. They both were getting bored on the ride.raman ans ishu had a fight they were not talking.. This empty road were irritating ishu.. Raman to was silent . It was late in night and ishu was feeling very horny.she was very stressed from many days.. So ishu spread her legs apart and reached down and slid a finger into her moist c**t. She wanted a real good orgasm, one that would give her body some much-needed relief.

Spreading her pussy lips apart, she started lightly circling her tingling c*** with her ring finger, "mmm...that's nice". She licked the fingers of her other hand, and started fondling and pinching the large hardening nipple of her left breast. Raman was driving the car.. He got aroused watching ishu do that never in his dirty imagination he thot ishu would do this.. Ishu was all lost in herself.. She didnt care if raman was watching her .. All she wanted was to feel a cock in her.. She was super horny now.. She saw raman He was erect.. She could see it through his pants.. She slid her hands and opened his pants and gave him oral.fast and then slow.she ate it..put it deep inside her throat

Raman was still driving.. He was about to burst.. He pulled over the car near an empty forest type area.. Ishu smiled..They came out of the car..raman made ishu sit on the bonut of car and with a shift moment enter her..aaahhh more raman ishu shouted panting.her hands on his sholder.. His hands in her blouse..their lips smashing ly kissing.. Raman had lost all his control.. He was rocking faster and faster..so was ishita moving according his speed..finally he filled her with all his juice.. Both were panting they kissed each other madly

Ishu finally told him that their car ride was best and now she knows how to make a boring ride interesting...

The end

M an amateur writer

Sorry for mistakes

I don't know if i was allowed to post it here sorry if i break rules

I know my exam is on 7 th but reading this thread i could not stop

Thanks for reading

Edited by blue24 - 11 years ago

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omshreejaanu

@omshreejaanu

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#585

Originally posted by: sara926
Very beautifully written
Loved their desire for each other

thank u sara😃

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omshreejaanu

@omshreejaanu

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#586

Originally posted by: OfTheHeart
OSJ... OSJ...!!!!

OMG!!!! It was Amazing!!!!!!!!!👏
I mean... It was such a treat... and there you say all the time that you write light Romantic OSs... I mean... what was it then?? A religious Piece😈

I read it last night at around 2 AM, and so wanted to reply but was so lost in your letters that I thought to Comment after re-reading it in morning... and here I am!😛

Gosh You are terrific when It(Writing) come to you... I have already told you that, now, hadn't I?

P.S. Thanks for making me Blush!!! I was grinning like idiot, and my Dadi just thought that I was some insane!😆

Finally I am here Priya😃

Religious piece!! 🤣 No no that's the most unholy stuff I wrote to b termed this!! 😳😳

Thank u so much! U have no idea how happy n embarrassed at the same time I feel when my readers tell me that I made them blush n that my writing was maha hot!!

@ your p.s

U r too cute! It really means a lot for a bedroom writer like me seriously! Once again sorry for my late reply. Had a way too hectic day!!

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omshreejaanu

@omshreejaanu

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#587

Originally posted by: ABBY92
Awesome last OS !! I liked how Ishita was mad at Raman cause he was flirting with some other girl and how he took control later on to show that the only person he will ever want is her, that was beautiful.

Thanks Abby!

One honest confession from me- his telling her that he wants only her n she is the only one affecting him so much is my fav too in the OS. 😳

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omshreejaanu

@omshreejaanu

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#588

Originally posted by: N.R.Rona

heyy even though you are slow in actions but your words and emotions are compensating for it more than needed..and thereby changing it to a hottish work..
have always admired your stories..its a beautiful treat to the readers eyes,heart and feelings..you are a great writer..we are able to feel n visualise through your words and even cant stop blushing either..
you have such an amazing talent OSJ..

Oh I was just pulling ur leg with that slow in action comment! 😳😆

Thank u very much for ur appreciation n encouragement.

I love it when I manage to make ppl blush with my words!! 😈

😆😆

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omshreejaanu

@omshreejaanu

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#589

Originally posted by: Scribble_Tweety
Oju that was sensuous to the core. Loved it. You described it sooo perfectly. And an angry wife is a wild wife in bed😉 loved ur collage too. It was the perfect dessert for this thread. The way they surrendered to each other and the way they were each other's undoing. Love u OJu🤗 and please write more once u get through ur busy schedule.😳

Thank u tweety. That's a huge compliment coming from the queen of sensuous stories.

Yup I guess jealous wife n manaofying hubby can turn quite hot n sensuous. 😳

Love u too young girl. I will definitely write. Next week end may b. Definitely something different.

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Gollums Precious

@OfTheHeart

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 11 years ago

#590

Originally posted by: omshreejaanu

Finally I am here Priya😃
Religious piece!! 🤣 No no that's the most unholy stuff I wrote to b termed this!! 😳😳
Thank u so much! U have no idea how happy n embarrassed at the same time I feel when my readers tell me that I made them blush n that my writing was maha hot!!

@ your p.s
U r too cute! It really means a lot for a bedroom writer like me seriously! Once again sorry for my late reply. Had a way too hectic day!!

@bold That's okay... I never mind when it comes to my friends... I understand, other wise nothing can stop anyone from the addiction to read comments/appreciation/critics on one's stuff!😉

That bug has bitten me too...😆

P.S. Why everyone has to say I am cute? (It sounds childish!) I want to be hot! I love KP, And when I am gonna do My Pyaar ka Izhaar to him, I have to look hot... u see..?☺️

P.S.S. The above statement was Spam!😆

Thankyou🤗... I love when people call me cute... But I don't know what cuteness I have... I mean when They read me they say I am mature but same people when they chat with me they assume me to be naughty and childish!😆

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