Strangers Once Again - IshRa Two-Shot | Part 2 Page 17

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PRACHI

@prachi_vrushan

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#111

wow awesome update
I really loved subbu's POV
n ishu subbu's convo was awesome

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Anju.s

@Anju.s

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#112

beautiful Aani..,,

now i know the reason of your last line just before the update...

here i am sure everybody thought that the words were being said by Raman but it turned put to be Subbu..it is good that subbu realized the even he need to work on his marriage.

showed very well that subbu lost a best friend also when i\he lost Ishita.

how Is Ishita caught on that the papers were not signed.

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mandu

@mandu

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#113

I totally wasn't expecting it to be subbu...in fact I was procrastinating reading this because I didn't want it to be raman and ishita separating and I knew that when you write it it just seems so true...I'm mangling this here ,what I mean to say is that you would have written even the separation so beautifully that it would seem the most natural thing that could have occurred...and though on the surface it is subbu thinking of and then talking to ishita, it is raman who looms large for me and I get a wonderful glimpse of raman and ishita's love for each other and Raman trying to free ishita of the demons from his past.

I can actually picture this happening

Thank you Aani if I may call you by your name for this wonderful story that has brought a smile to my face

In fact could I be hopeful that you would write another OS on how JKR brought RKB/Raman to his knees ????

Mandu

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Rumaisa

@Rozy77

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#114

aha i had an inkling it was about subbu but just waited for you to post the part to see if im correct...😊

it was a wonderful part👏

i would really like to see subbu one more time in the show, maybe not for jealousy or anything but a closure would be nice. 👍🏼

again, i would say, great to have you back🤗
hope inspiration strikes soon and you write something completely mushy and romantic, even passionate...

take care

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Megan

@incendio

Navigator

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#115

That was simply beautiful...👏👏

Totally loved it...

Thanks for the PM...

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Nee28

@Nee28

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#116

Brilliant work Aani 👏
SUBU was a surprise, i thought that was Raman's POV😳 , but Subu was excellent work.👏⭐️
Loved it ...

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Bhuvana

@Ohgod!

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#117

Good morning gorgeous! :*

Updated on page 17!!

Aaj phir tumpe pyaar aaya hai ❤️

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rutu83

@rutu83

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#118

kya sixer maara- it was subbu! it's funny how quickly all that sorry feeling from first chapter vanished :P
fantastic update...but lalchi dil mange more - i was wanting to see that office scene with ishra 😉

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cool_arpana

@cool_arpana

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#119

Ahaa Aani...why do I feel ur fav muse is Subbu😆...its good 'cos there's no expectation in this regard from the show but its amazing to see depth you've put in to the closure of this whole thing ...

I remember a previous writing of yours where too you'd mentioned Subbu and his marriage falling apart...similar time like this of vandita's delivery and IshRa very much together...there you had left Subbu at a failure's end...but here you've ended on a hope for his marriage which is better...all grudges n unsaid words clear...its a closure then right!

Well it is always awesomely written👏