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Let-It-Go

@Let-It-Go

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Posted: 10 years ago

#121

It seems I am reading something beautiful after ages !
And I am so glad that I didn't comment on first part and waited for you to update ghe second one.
Subbu ! You fav character and the best disguise ever.
I loved the setup and the claustrophobia which Subbu went through despite being admist all.
12 years is surely not a small time and I loved how he read her smiles and her eyes. Her loneliness made him feel guilty !
Karma is surely a bitch !

The most important document of IshRa's life in Subbu's hand - Irony of the situation ! I initially thought that maybe Raman will overhear or something of that sought but I loved Loved the casual talks between the former lovers. You need a thing to move on - Maybe this was the conversation for Subbu.
Everything was so Perfect ! And honestly I love you for writing this.

Lovely Update Aani ! 🤗

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meenakshi

@meenu_taarey

Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#122

both d parts r good

awesome concept

beautifully written

thanx for pm

do continue if u

take care...

Edited by meenu_taarey - 10 years ago

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Anu

@-HoneyDukes-

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Posted: 10 years ago

#123

What an absolutely beautiful update Aani..⭐️
This came as a pleasant surprise..never had imagined that it could be from a 3rd persons POV..That too Subbu! It was terrific Aani...
You certainly did what the writers haven't been able to achieve in the past one year of the show. Touch Subbu's character! 😃 Its always been Raman-Ishita and Shagun and Ashok but never have we seen the other side of the coin of Ishita's past. It may not be that prominent part of the story, however it was nice to read that side of the story too. His guilt, the emptiness in his life. the void of loosing a friend in her and not just a lover..his crumpling marriage and the efforts he wishes to make yet is pulled by the baggage of his past until she shows him the light to finally let go of it all and move on in all senses..You penned it all down so marvelously! ⭐️👏

Puttar surely is in for some intense grilling session from his JKR in that cabin of his! 😆 Loved how she knew him in and out and it didn't take her long to see through his intentions behind giving her the papers! 😳

Loved the update! Thanks for the awesome TS and the PM :)

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Priya_KABHI

@PriyaKABHI

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#124

Thanks for PM.

It was Just Awesome Part.😊

The whole part was so nicely explained.😊

Raman wanted to leave Ishita because he loves her,it was so nice.😊

I hope Ishita will stop him.😊

Please Update Next part soon,I am waiting here.

PriyaCherry.

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shreya

@Shre28

Navigator

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#125

A real heart touching piece.. Perfect!! Loved Subbu Ishu..

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shravani_2311

@shravani_2311

Rocker

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Posted: 10 years ago

#126

wow...very diffrnt nd very intrstng...

loved the way ishu nd subbu's talk...

the way ishu cleard all betwn her nd subbu...

hw he xpalined abt raman's nature to subbu...

pls pm me fr nxt...

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aashiqua

@aashiqua

Voyager

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Posted: 10 years ago

#127

No words...marvellous...that's all I have to say...

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VENBA

@VENBA

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#128

Awesome update...

Beautiful...👏👏👏

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Vedika211

@Vedika211

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#129

You are an excellent, excellent writer. Thank you for sharing that gift with us :)

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-Anku-

@-Anku-

Stunner

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Posted: 10 years ago

#130

Aani 😳 you surprise me with your skills. The understanding you have for a character that hasn't been showed more than two episodes in this show is appalling. I've not read all of your work but from what I have, the two you wrote from Subbu's POV are my most favourite now. The one where Vandu gives birth to a child, and now this. Only you could write a story from the POV of a third person not even an active part of IshRa's story and make it so alluring and brilliant to read.

I love how here, you make Subbu repent what he did, ponder over Ishita's life, how he got his closure, Ishita got her closure and what's more important is how you highlighted the understanding she has for Raman's feelings. Just like how we saw in the show, she knows he's guilty.

BRILLIANT. My most fav work of yours Aani 👏

BTW a suggestion? Once you should write an OS from Shagun's POV, of what she feels on seeing IshRa.