SS: Kabhi Nahi Chodungi Tumare Saath..!!! updated part 11 page 30 - Page 8

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Posted: 10 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: desire_nikki

Hey..! just gone through ur SS..!!

really it's a fab one..!!
loved it..!!
Plz pm me when u update./.!! :)

hey nikki thanks a lottt am happy that u liked it... ya ll surely pm u..
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Posted: 10 years ago
#72
awesome update
now who this new entry??
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Posted: 10 years ago
#73
Lovely update- thanks so much for the PM!😆

Can't wait to see what RKB has planned for his JKR.😉

Wonder who is looking @ Ishu- hope it's Raman and not another person to introduce a jealousy track... we've had enough of that on our screen!😕
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Posted: 10 years ago
#74
Aww...that was beautiful
thid story is getting more n more interesting with every update...loving it yrrr
awesum ishra moments
waking up, saree changing
raman planning to confess
spa dinner
wonderful buddy
but who is dis kabab me haddi now
kya hone vala hai
update soon
will be waiting for next
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Posted: 10 years ago
#75
Beautiful update! Waiting for the next part!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#76
Very Nice. I read the 2 to till 5 parts today. Loved it. Who is the guy? J track is going to start?
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Posted: 10 years ago
#77
i read all the 5 now... its really good and scenes are really awesoon...update it soon. waiting
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Posted: 10 years ago
#78
Awsm update dr.
Raman's self talk is so funny.
He want 2 confess his feelings.Love the surprises and their convo.
Who the hell is this new guy?Is it new entry or raman?
I hate new entries now.
Plz dr, 1 req 'plz let the confess happen.Don't push it far like the show.'
waiting 4 know hw raman confess his love.
Update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#79
wowww!! awesumm updatee!! loved how ishita confessed her feelings to raman and hw sweet of raman to make it up for her.. the perfect evng plus confession!!!
awesumm cont soon!! <3
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Posted: 10 years ago
#80

hii guys.. am here with the next part. sorry for the delay. enjoy reading and please do comment


Part 6:

When Raman reached the venue, he was searching for her, soon their eyes met and they had a brief eyelock. Their eyelock was disturbed by a stranger. He asked her for a dance, raman saw the uncomfortableness in her face. He felt like punching his face for asking his wife for a dance. Within two strodes, he came near her and stood in between the stranger and her.

" I am sorry yaar!! I don't allow my wife to dance with anyother person than myself" ishita smiled at her husband's antics. The dinner was a silent affair with few eyelocks. Ishita broke the silence,

" raman aaj achanak yeh dinner kyon"

"kyon koi problem hai tume.. accha nahi laga kya "

"aise kuch nahi hai...but the whole day you have been surprising me to the core , u really made my day" "kuch tho reason hoga na"

"are you really happy ishita"

"ofcourse raman, what kind of ques is this"

"then, as you are already happy I want to make you more happy, make this day special for you, special for us, ahh actually.."

Their conversation was disturbed by the manager of the restaurant and they specially invited the CEO of the year and the asia head mr.raman kumar bhalla and mrs.raman kumar bhalla. With no option left, they both moved to the dance floor. He was frustrated for not being able to confess his love to her. He murmured to himself "god... sometimes i feel that why the hell did i come to such a big position, privacy naam ki cheez hai he nahi"

The song was sensuous romantic number. They both were looking deep into each others eyes that were speaking volumes and both were merely swaying to the song slowly. Ishita broke their eyelock and called him "raman" and with the same husky tone he replied "kya". Her cheeks turned crimson red instantly.

"raman kya hogaya aapko aaj"

"kyon mujhe kya hogaya"

"vahi tho mein poochrahi hun.. aapko kya hogaya.. thabeth tho teek haina" saying so she raised her hand to check his temperature. But he held her hand, kissed on her knuckles, placed her hand on his shoulder and pulled her closer towards him by her waist. She turned a deeper shade of red, he enjoyed the effect he was having on her.

"arre mujhe kya hogaya... am completely fine, har ladki ko accha lagtha haina, uske husband usko pamper karo aur etc etc"

"haan.. par mujhe pasand nahi hai"

"pasand nahi hai.. kyon.. tum ladki nahi ho kya.."

"raman.. i completely enjoyed this side of yours.." saying so she pulled his nose lovingly

"par mujhe ravan kumar he bahut pasand hai"

"acchaa.. aise kyon"

"kyon ki mein tho meri ravan kumarse pya.." she stopped abruptly knowing what she was about to spill out but immediately changed as "kyon ki mujhe ravan kumar ki aadath haina isliye"

"yeh jkr bahut smart aur ziddi bhi hai" he thought

"ishita, tum sacch mein bahut khush haina"

"haan raman i am so happy today, you made me feel so special raman"

"ishita i mean to ask.. that.. are you happy in this relation"

Ishita is shocked to hear such a question, but she calmly replied "haan raman i am very very happy.. and all this because of you, because of you i ..."

"uff... because of me you got ruhi and such a beautiful family. And i know all this"

"haan... absolutely and.." he didn't allow her to completely

"ishita am asking you whether.. mm aur you happy in this relation as my wife" she could see the guilt and pain in his eyes. He continued

"tumare aur tumare family ke saath job hi huva recently.." he paused. She understood whats going on in his mind, she stopped him,

"raman, why are you blaming yourself. I accept that all those people came into my life along with you, but raman they are your past, how are you responsible for their fault acts"

"raman, yes i was sad and so worried for those incidents, but more than that your care concern and support made me feel blessed to have you as my husband raman"

"raman, ab aapki zindagiki aaj mein hun raman and meri life aapki aur aapki life meri, yeh humare life hai raman"

"i know you want to share your happiness with me raman but ill be soo glad to share your sorrows and difficulties that come in our way raman"

Raman was shocked rather amused, he knew ishita as well she.. she can see through him, see through the walls around his heart, but how can she be so exact"

"raman don't be shocked, i think now more than you, i know you too well"

"accha, you think you know me betrer than myself"

"ofcourse, do you have any doubt"

"so you mean to say that you exactly know whats in my mind and heart"

"100% i know exactly"

"tho phir, by now you should have known who is in my heart" there was excitement as well as some kind of fear. She bent her head down in shyness. He tightened his grip on her waist"

"look at me ishita, please"

"don't you want to know who is in my heart, ishita"

She nodded in negative, but he was adamant to tell her that it is she who is in her heart

"ishita, agar mein yeh kahungi mere dil mein ..." his conversation was disturbed by the sound claps across the hall. Thats when both realised they were on the dance floor. She excused herself saying the need to go to washroom.

He was waiting impatiently for her in the lane outside the restaurant. He felt its very difficult to breathe for him, without letting out his feelings to her. Suddenly he felt somebody sitting beside him. He turned to her. She was looking divine in the dim light. He got hold of her hand and made her face him

"ishita I cant afford to wait anymore"

" I want to say you that you are in my heart"

"i want to say you that, that i really really love you so much" Tears of joy flowed from her eyes. "I know I cant change anything that has happened but please give me a chance, I ll keep you in my heart like a princess" " I love you, ishita" "i cant imagine a life without you ishita" even tears fell from his eyes. She hugged him tightly and merely said but audible to him "i love you too raman". He embraced her more tightly. They both had an intense and brief eyelock. He gazed at her lips and then again looked back at her eyes as if asking permission to kiss her. She smiled back at him. He took her smile a signal and moved closer to her. Both their breathe was fanning on each others face, he slowly moved closer to her lips, he slowly captured her shivering lips. When he was about to deepen the kiss, he felt someone shaking him vigourously. Frustrated he turned around to see who was that. As he saw that person who was shaking him, his eyes widened in shock.

Edited by yazhi - 10 years ago

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