SS: Kabhi Nahi Chodungi Tumare Saath..!!! updated part 11 page 30 - Page 7

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thanks for PM
Nice update
Ruhi & Shravu rocksss, very nicely written👏

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Part 5:

Raman was the first one to wake up. He felt something heavy on his arms. He opened his eyes with the brightest smile on his face seeing the divine scene in front of him. Ishita was hugging him tightly and was sleeping with a content smile on her face. He was mesmerised with her innocent and beautiful face. His view was blocked by her hairs that were falling on her face.

"yeh jkr kitna beautiful aur innocent hai... sherni bhi bacchii lagsakthi hai kya..." due to his intense gaze on her she slowly stirred in sleep and snuggled more close to him and hugged him more tightly. He looked lovingly at her child like face during sleep and thought in frustration "agar yeh madrasan har roz mere ithne karib soyege, tho bedse nahe mein vutungi ya isko vutenae dungi" "agar isse tara chalta rahana tho zaroor mein iss madrasanke izzat loot kaehi rahunga.. haye rabba... bacchalo iss madrasanko aur mujhe bhi" thinking so he was about to kiss on her forehead, but he stopped abruptly "kya kar raha hai raman tu.. agar yeh jkr ko patha chalana tu isko kiss karne walae the tho yeh tumari vo haal kardege jo tum sapne mein bhi nahi soccha voga.." "tume yaad nahi hai kya pichle baar jab tum sirf uske paas soyethe yeh chi chi karke kithne badi lecture dedi. Yaad haina.." "raman iss problem keliye jalde kuch solution nikkalna hoga" "par kyun tab hum dono mein koi feelings nahi hai, but now we both love each other.. phir problem kya hai" "mm.. problem yeh hai ki yeh jkr hai, hum dono ke beech kithna bhi equation change hogaho, par iske dimag mein kya chaltha rehata hai vo bhagwan bhi nahi samaj saktha hai.. tho mein kya cheez hun" thinking so he looked at her face. "arre bhagwan please mera kanon ka raksha karna" "if she screams the same way like before.. den surely i would become deaf" when he was engrossed in his thoughts she stirred in sleep, out of fear he tightly closed his eyes waiting for her reaction.

Ishita slowly opened her eyes, she was initially shocked, seeing herself literally hugging him in the sleep. Though raman's eyes were closed, he could clearly see her expression, he controlled very hard not to laugh at her shocked face, but with her next action it was his turn to get shocked. She snuggled more closer to him. Her breathe was fanning in the crook of his neck, her hands around his waist and her soft legs on his. The feeling of her tender skin on his body was mindblowing, it was having havoc in his senses.

"yeh bhagwan!! Yeh jkr subah subah mujhe maarna chathe hai kya..!!"

After some seconds, he felt her body moving on him, he thought she was about to get up and heaved a heavy sigh not aware of the sweet torture she was going to give him. Ishitha thought raman was in his deep slumber, she moved her legs little upwards to his knee level drawing a line on his legs with her fingers, her knee just few inches away from from his part, as she moved further, he could feel her soft breast on his chest, his hand slid along her back and settled on her curvaceous waist. He was mentally taking a note of all her curves. He felt a tension arouse within him. With one hand she caressed his cheeks and placed a soft kiss on his forehead. He was amusedly shocked. Then she rested her chin on his chest with the support of her hands, pressing herself hard on him. Out of anticipation he held tightly to the blanket. She started to voice out her feelings thinking that he was in sleep.

"raman.. aapko patha ha ii have daily dreamt of waking up in your arms" "aapko patha hena mein aapse bahut pyaar kartha hun, and even i know you too love me" hearing those words from her, he was so happy, he was about to open his eyes, but he felt the tears from her eyes making its way towards his neck. He was confused, "why is she crying now", so he remained silent as if he was really sleeping. He very well knows that if he opens his eyes she wont let her feelings out. After a minute or two she again started "par mujhe dar lagtha hai.. koi ajeebsa dar" "mein jantha hun ki aap bhi mujhse pyaar karthae ho... meine aapki aankhon mein pyaar dekha hai" "but am afraid to say my love to you raman, if you just say that those feelings that i see for me in your eyes was just of care and concern and not love then i cant bear that raman... not a heart break again raman" "mein marjavungi raman, zinda nahi rehapaavungi sacch mein raman" " i am just happy to see those feelings for me in ur eyes raman" giving a feather like kiss on his cheeks she got up to get freshed.

He opened his eyes after she left, even tears started flowing from his eyes, he could understand the depth of the pain in her words, he thought was he so confusing that she couldn't even clearly recognise that those feelings are love only. Then he thought about her words, "no, she is afraid like the same way i was" "even i love her, i cant afford to lose her or see her hurt at any cost" " today i ll surely confess my love to her,make her realise that she is the most ever special thing happened to me in my life" "ll surely get her out of all the insecurities and fears" he was closing his eyes and was thinking how to confess and slowly sleep evaded his eyes. After sometime, he felt some tiny water droplets on his face, he opened his eyes and was mesmerised. Ishita had just come from bath and was waking him. Her wet hair, soft fresh and glowing face urged him to hug her. Her feminine scent and the shampoo smell were creating havoc in his senses, but he controlled himself and thought whatever happens he ll proceed after confessing his feelings. So just to divert his mind, he turned around and said

"jao aur apni kaam karo, mujhe patha hai kab office jana hai" " aur haan plss thodi dher keliye mujhe disturb math karo.. sonedo yaar"

"khadoos kahinka"

Raman didn't notice that she was just wearing her bathrobe. He was still lying in the bed sleeping. Without thinking twice she started changing her dress in the same room. He heard some strange sound. "mein jaantha hun, yeh jkr mujhe vutne keliye zaroor kuch na kuch drama karegi" he muttered under his breathe and turned toard the source of sound. He was left open mouthed at which his eyes were looking. Ishita was standing in front of the mirror in just her blouse and inskirt. Her milky white skin was making him lose his control. He felt jealous of all those clothes that were clinging tightly to her curves.

"yeh jkr aaj mujhe maarne ki puri thayari mein hai.. rabba.." "paagal aurath diktha nahi yahan ek aadmi soraha hai aur yeh yahan dress change kar rahe hai.." he chided himself at his thought, " raman beta.. yeh tumari biwi hai aur yeh kamara isske bhi hai.. fool"

After changing completely, she left the room, raman immediately rushed to the bathroom to have the most most needed cold shower. He thought of making the day really special and memorable befor he confess. After breakfast ruhi and ishita left for school and clinic respectively.

When she entered her cabin, there was a bunch of red roses with a note

"Have a nice day MRS.BHALLA -MR.BHALLA J "

She was so surprised to see roses from raman

*beep

"phool accha laga"

"haan, ofcourse i love those flowers raman, but.."

"ok.. have to go.. imp meeting catch u later"

"uhh.. ravan kumar"

They both got along with their works. After completing all her appointment she was resting in her cabin. A person came with a gift packed and handed that to her.

*beep

"got the packet"

"ya.. but whats this raman??"

"gift tho tumare saamne haina, khud kholke dekho"

"raman.."

"spa voucher.. mere liye kyon??"

"kyon mathlab.."

"koi discussions nahi.. tum jaraheho n thats final"

"teeke mein chalunga par aaj kaise raman.. afternoon have 2 imp appointments hai"

"patha hai mujhe.. i haved informed the receptionist to transfer all your appointments in the afternoon to the other doctor. Don't worry"

"baap re.. pre-planning n all... mm good"

"ab bekarke baathaein band karo aur jaldi niklo"

"teeke baba.. jaa rahehun"

When she reached the parking lot there was another surprise for her. He has sent driver along with HIS CAR "aaj raman ko kya hogaya... how many surprises ll he give" thinking so she took her mobile to message him but before the she got his msg

*beep

"leave your car and go with the driver" he didn't wait for reply neither allowed her to reply

"i have kept a saree and jewellery for u in a bag wear that and get ready in the spa itself"

"we are going out for dinner ok.. so get ready in time"

"spa mein ready hokar wahanse directly aajao driverke saath"

"meine vandhita ko inform kardiya ruhiko pick up karneke"

"i have informed about our dinner plan to the family members also and they don't have any problem.. infact they are happy for us"

"is all your worries over now.. u go to spa and i have some work.. bye"

She smiled reading those messages and was excited for the evening and left to the spa. Here raman was also so excited for the evening. He was super excited to see her in the saree that he got it. He had dreamed her in the saree.

In tha spa, ishita got ready. She was wearing a smoky black saree with baby pink netted pallu saree. She was absolutely stunning and due to the spa treatment her skin was glowing. Any man who would see her in this saree would have fainted. She was waiting in the signal to go green. She was enjoying the wind and was dreaming of the evening.

*beep

"started to the restaurant"

"ya waiting in the signal"

"ok,, i will be there in 20 minutes.. take care and reach safely"

A small girl came with jasmine flower and asked her to buy it. She thought of getting it but she remembered that raman doesn't like it so she refused to get, the gal pleaded that if she gets it she could go home soon, as these are the last flowers that she had. Ishita got everything from the girl and paid more than the cost.

There were a pair of eyes watching the whole scene. A guy was watching this. He was so moved with her selflessness. Through the crowd he saw her eyes. Her dark kajol around her eyes and sharp eyebrows highlighted to the beauty of her eyes. Her eyes was the most beautiful one he had ever seen. Then he saw her luscious lips, the dark merun colour of her lips can tempt any guy towards her, but unfortunately he couldn't see her face as the signal change to green. He promised himself that at any cost he ll surely find her out.

Ishita reached the restaurant before raman's arrival and was waiting for him.
jiyaa02 thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
#63
Thanks for PM.
Nice update😊
New Entry or Raman is the guy?
eagerly waiting for nxt part..
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Posted: 10 years ago
#64
nw who is dis sudden entry...
loved the way ishra convrsng...
nd the wake up scene of ishra is so cute...loved it compltly...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#65
Superb update
Loved it
Who's d new guy waiting 4 next
oriyu24 thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
#66
superb update..
loved it..
continue soon..
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
#67
Hey..! just gone through ur SS..!!
really it's a fab one..!!
loved it..!!
Plz pm me when u update./.!! :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
#68
Great update .. It was just beautiful andesp their conversation in the morning was just awww..
You have brought about it beautifully
Now Who is the the entry 😡😡... Please let it be Raman
Continue soon

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Posted: 10 years ago
#69

Originally posted by: shavi2311

nw who is dis sudden entry...

loved the way ishra convrsng...
nd the wake up scene of ishra is so cute...loved it compltly...

thank you soo much... very glad dat you liked it... anyways shagun is there in the story na... so i hav got a guy for ishu... but who is he.. wat is his role... u ll have to wait for that..😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: arunabhi

Great update .. It was just beautiful andesp their conversation in the morning was just awww..

You have brought about it beautifully
Now Who is the the entry 😡😡... Please let it be Raman
Continue soon


am very glad that u loved it... ur comment makes my day dear.. but dats not raman.. but he is surely positive character and who is he.. you have to wait for that... 😉

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