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Posted: 10 years ago
Beautiful update..
waiting for next part..😊😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome
please update the next part soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
part 9

Scene starts with Ishita and Raman coming inside house.

Ishita "Raman kya huan ghar mey saarey lights bandh hain."

Ishita "Mihika ko kitney baar bola thaa bahaar key lights on rakhnaa.Koi aarahen hon tho kitnaa problem hogee andherey mey."

Raman "Chodo yaar.Aathey hee complaint shuru.Tumhaarey awaaj sunkey bachon uthgayen tho fir sey soyengey nahen."

Ishita nods silently while Raman was smiling walking behind as Ishita walking in front.

Ishita "Raman darwaaja locked hain.Aapkey pass chaabi hain."

Raman acts as if searching it to balance the time needed.

Raman "Yeh lo." Raman was counting down the time in his mind 10,9,8,7,

Ishita opens the door and switches on the lights.She is shocked to see the scenario.

There is no one in hall but she could see her pictures all over walls starting from her child hood.Her eyes fall on a black and white photo of a small kid and she is sure it is her.Then photos from every birth day since then.Arranged sideward to trace a path and both Ishita and Raman follow the path.Ishita was surprised and tears flowing in her eyes looking at house decorated for her birth day al in the way she would dream.

Ishita "Raman yeh sabh aapka plan thaa."

Raman "Chup move."

Then finally they reach to garden where there was a huge mirror on length of a room wall.Before it was a table placed with cake over it.

Raman "Happy birthday my special one.I wish you get many more of these for ever." Hugging her.

Ishita "Yeh sabh aapney plan kiyya.But kaisey aap tho merey saath they.Main tho bhool he gayee the."

Same time Ruhi and her brothers come along with others and Ruhi and twins hug Ishita and wish her birthday.

Ishita "Tho merey peet peechey planning chal rahen thee.Tum log papa sey milkey."hugging them harder.

Ishita's eyes has tears in her eyes.hen slowly every one else wishes her and Ishita was shocked by surprise.

Then Raman breaking crowd calls her to cut the cake.

Aayu "Mama aapka fav cake.Mainey hee banaya wahee rehkar."

Ishita smiles at her eldest son.

Aarav "Main bhee wahen thaa.Yeh nahen bolna."

Raman "Cake khaaney key baad discuss karnaa abh cake kaatney ka time hain."

Ishita cuts the cake and feeds Raman first followed by Ruhi and Aayu and Aarav.

Then celebrations continue ad everyone are giving gifts for Ishita.

First kids give her their pendent and Ishita loves it to see her world represented in it.She knew her kids well.

Ruhi "Ishima aapko accha laga.Hum teenon ney kiyan."

Ishita hugging three of them tightly "Issey accha gift merey liyen kyaa hoga."

Ruhi "Papa aapney kyaa gift laaya ?"

Raman "Merey waala special hain main baad mey doonga."

Ishita looks smiling at him and then othes approach.

Kids stick with Ishita as Raman went on to meet others.

Finally Subbu's family comes to greet him.Instantly instigating the twins.

Subbu giving her some gift "Happy birthday Ishu."

IShita just gives a brief smile as Subbu's mom was about to wish.

Aayu "Aunty aap jyaada menath math keejiyen.Hum boldengey aapkey liyen."

Ishita "Aayu ?"

Subbu's mom "Happy bday."

While going "Apny bachon ko control mey rakhon nahen tho patha nahen kahan bhaag jaayengey."

Aayu is irritated "Aarav tum papa ko bulaavo main inko dekhloonga."

Ishita "Aayu silent badon sey aisey baath karthey hain kyaa."

Aayu "Main insey tho aisey hee karoonga."

Ruhi "Jab sey aaye hain.Ek minute bhee chup nahen bhaithee.Hum sab arrange kar rahen hain tho humpar chillarahen hain."

Aayu "Aur nahen tho kyaa. Papa ko daant rahen thee.Uss time bhee silent tha."

Subbu understood situation and tries to control "Amma aap bhee bachon sey kyaa ."

Subbu's mom "Tum bhee un bachon ko support kar rahen hon.Dekhon kaisey baath karthey hain.Bachon ko tameeez nahen sikha saktey tho paidha kyon karthey hain."

Raman "Main bhee aapsey yahen sawaal karnaa chahtha thaa aapkey parents sey but bakkismathee main unsey kabhee mil nahen paaya.Who aapko sikha paathey thoaaj yeh problem nahen hothee."

She instantly gets silent hearing Raman's voice.Subbu takes her aways from there .

Ishita was angry hearing her words but Raman was there to take care of her.

Raman "Ruhi tumhey kyaa hogayan aaj ussko bolney kaisey diyan tumney.Sab kuch bichaara Aayu ko karna pad rahan hain."Taking angry Aayu in arms.

Ruhi "Papa main busy thee naa.Mujhey kaam tha ishima key liyen mujhey hee tho karna padega."

Aarav "Papa who achaanak silent kaisey hogayen aur bhag gayee."

Ishita "Raman aap bhee na bachon ko kyaa kyaa sikhtaathey hon.Jaanthey hun usske galthee huin hogee.But badon par chillaney key liyen bol rahen hon."

Raman "Kisska sawaal ka pehley jawaab doo?"

Ishita "Raman mazaak suujh rahan hain aapko."

Aayu "Papa pehley mama ko hee bathadoo .Aaj birthday hain unkaa."

Ishita looks at his son as he is trying to hide behind.

Raman "Mujhey sikhaana kyaa padega .Who tho hain hee Raman Bhalla key beta.Attitude tho by birth hoga.Aur who tumhaarey taraha chp nahen bhithengey.Jho karna hain karkey rahengey."

Ishita "Raman.Aap aisey?"

Raman "Chod do uss baath ko.Uss aurath key wajaha sey hum jhagada kyon karey."

Ishita accepts it ."Raman bahuth raath ho rahan hain.Bachon ko soney deejiyen na."

Aayu "No ways.Aaj tho masthee karnee hain mujhye.Aur papa aapney bathaaya nahen who bhag kyon gayee."

Ruhi "Mainey aur Papa ney unkey waath lagadee thee.Uss time sey who papa key saamney kuch bolthee nahen."

Ishita "Ruhi!language."

Ruhi "Sorry."

Then kids leave from there while others were busy.Raman and Ishita were standing together.Being noticed from couple of eyes from distance.

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Posted: 10 years ago
wow lovely
such a nice surprise...
such a cute family
always there for one another
loved that attitude wala dialogue
thanx for the update
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Posted: 10 years ago
That was a lovely surprise by the family ..
The whole sequence played out well. Subbu's mom 🤣🤣..
I loved RuMan they know the best to deal with her...
Subbu.. Abh hui na jalan 😆😆😆..
Continue soon..
Thanks for the update
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Posted: 10 years ago
now who s that evil eyes
lovely surprise for ishu

im so eager to knw raman's special gift...
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Posted: 10 years ago
wow...beautiful update...
full of surprise...
loved it...
Such a sweet family...
awesomely written...

subbu's mom ko sharam nahi hai, kahi bi tapka gathi hai...
this convo(insulting) was brilliant...
continue soon...
if possible plz PM me...

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Posted: 10 years ago
nice update
I loved Raman's reply for subbu's mom
adi ka gift nhi diya?? I want to know what he gifted her
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Posted: 10 years ago
lovely update. I have to say this when I am reading your stories, I can really picturize it and it is just amazing. After reading these post I really hope they bring this track to the show. It would be really interesting to see how Raman and Ishita manages the twins. Good work
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Posted: 10 years ago
The last lyn stuck me
couple of eyes????
Fab update vikas
beautiful surprise
raman spcl gift haan...waiting to c
update sooner now
wanna see the new twist
and adi??
vo khan hai

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