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Posted: 10 years ago
please update the next part soon (:
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nice update
loved it
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superb update
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n bathtub part
ishu was too cute
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Loved it.Aww!how cud Raman ignore such a sweet apology n now will know the consequences toošŸ˜† .precap was interesting.
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Luvly update! Ishu's soul is very funny!
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N plz update nxt part sooon dear!
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waiting for your update dear... please do soon...
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I read all parts in one go.\
Very very nice one buddy.
unique and classic way of writting filled with every aspect.
sorry not for commenting previously.
waiting for next update.

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iam extremely sorry for not updating yesterday,i hope u may like this part

part-34:(a)
in mumbai:
vandu:amma aaj appa ka bd hi na?appa kidhar hi?did he went to temple?
amman:no vandu,he went to office
vandu:why he went to office in early morning,kuch jagada hogaya kya thumhara beech me?
amma:ha i scolded him,yesterday ishu called him but he scolded her rashly,till now i kept quiet but i was unable to control my anger listening his words to ishu in phone,everyone commits mistakes ,she too did a mistake,but she realised her mistake and apologized him many times,he has to forgive her,but he is hurting himself and ishu,so i scolded him yesterday he is not talking with me
vandu:ayyo amma why u did this,we decided to sort out this by bringing ishu to our house,but he made his precious day into worst day
amma:but i was totally out of my control,so u think he will celebrate his bd without ishu?from the day ishu left him his life became worst,not today,u leave about him i have lots of work to do
vandu:what is ur intention appa,u made this house into hell
in US:
raman reaches home to get an imp file which he forgot to carry in the morning
entering into the house his eyes searches for ishu,not noticing her in the hall,he walks to the garden and then to her room (st):where she went,i searched in kitchen,hall,garden in her room,by thinking he marches to his room and notices her sleeping on his bed covering herself with duvet,walking to his wardrobe"see again she started new drama,he starts searching his file,getting the file no where he thinks ishu might hided the file,walking to the bed he shouts"ishitha where is my file,dont waste my time give it fast"
ishu:she gets disturbed by his shout,opening her eyes she looks at raman
raman:where is my file,why u are playing games with my things,why u r sleeping here?give the file fast
ishu:she silently gets down from the bed,and takes out the file from the place where he searched before,by placing it aside she walks to her room
raman:why she was so silent,it is not her habbit to be silent,by coming to he hall he walks to the dining table and opens the lids of the dishes(st):very stubborn woman she didnt ate anything from morning,"raman dont u think that u r acting too smart,chalo aab games katham karo ,he opens the door of her room,seeing ishu lying on the floor in an unconscious state he rushes to her,sitting on the knees he takes her into his lap"her body was burning with fever ,she has a very high temperature,shit what i did without knowing anything i bursted on her,he immediately takes her into his arms and walks to the bed placing her comfortably on the bed he rushes to hall and gets a glass of water,sitting beside her he sprinkles water on her face,keeping the glass aside he pats on her cheeks calling her"what happened yaar get up ,please ishitha"
ishu:she wakes up by his touch and moves away from him
raman:holding her hand "ishitha u r suffering with high fever,come with me we will go to hospital
ishu:she takes away her hand from him
raman:sitting beside her,he turns her face towards him holding her chin"ishitha dont be stubborn ,see once urself ur body was burning with fever
ishu:thumko kya farak hi,i always plays games and commits mistakes,why u r talking to me now,u didnt forgiven me na?and it is also a game na?u just move away from me how many times i pleaded u to forgive me,but u left me in the morning as an heartless man,everyone are aware of my weakness so u all people are playing games with my emotions,u r similar to my appa,u both doesnt think about me,how i feel with ur ignorance,yesterday night u said that u forgiven me but today u started a game,is iam or u playing games ,no one cares about me,everyone enjoys seeing my pain,go and do ur work why u r wasting time by staying here,outing her grief collapsing on the bed she starts crying vigorously
raman:ishitha iam sorry yaar,i didnt thought that u will be hurted by my actions,now u come with me please
ishu:nahi aavungi mi thumhara sath,i was habituated to a lonely life,u dont show any sympathy on me,my appa made me strong with his bitter words and actions
raman:yeh saab voh bewakoof adhmi se huva,i dont know why i followed his words
ishu:what u r saying my appa as bewakoof
raman:nahi thumhara appa nahi
ishu:lekin voh koun hi,voh kya bola?
raman:i met him in the bar,he suggested me that if i stop talking to u then u wont do such bloody things and u wont hurt me in future and u ...
ishu:cutting his words following some foolish person suggestions u r hurting ur wife,u have to get a worlds best ceo award,if he asks u to leave me then will u leave me?
raman:kya bakwas bath kar rahi hu thum,mi isa kisa kar saktha?
ishu:why cant u he became ur guide and u r following his words
raman:arey sorry merima galthi mera hi,aab maff kijiye,please u come with me
ishu:miney kaha tha na,aab thum javo yahase
raman:u r very stubborn,if u wont come with me then i will take u to the hospital forcefully
ishu:u know very well about me,if u try to force me,then i dont know what i will do?
raman(st):yeh pagal ko dekho,raman when the ball has changed to her court,till morning she was the one who was pleading u,but because of ur over smartness now ur position was changed,listening to her cough and sneezing he turns his attention towards her,touching her forehead,he speaks out"please ishitha listen to me u r burning with fever,but i cant understand why u r feverish suddenly
ishu:turning to other side of the bed,covering herself with the duvet,"its all because of u,i took bath 2times and again u made me to stay on the bath tub for a long time
raman:what is the need to provoke me,see now what was happened
ishU:u r the reason for it,yesterday night u were good but today u ignored me i did whatever idea came into my mind
raman:ok let it be,now u come with me before ur health getting to worse
ishu:u dont irritate me,i wont come with u and i wont talk to u
raman:angrily,again u came to the starting point,pulling her towards him,looking into her eyes "what should i do so that u will forgive me,thumhara halath dekho ekbar subah se kuch kaya bi nahi,zidh math karo
ishu:simply getting away from him adjusting herself on the bed ,she closes her eyes while tears are rushing out from her eyes which are noticed by raman
raman:he gets pissed off looking her in tears,holding her hands ishitha please forgive me,iam promising u from next time i wont play these type of tricks on u,give me whatever punishment i deserves for hurting u
ishu:opening her eyes "r u ready to accept the punishment
raman:ha bolo but u have to come with me
ishu:then u write 100times saying"ishitha iam very sorry i wont hurt u in future
raman:with shock listening to her punishment yeh sab kya hi,mujje se nahi hoga aur kuch punishment dedho
ishu:this is the correct punishment for u,if u are not ready then u can leave,i wont come with u
raman:if someone introduces a blackmail award u will get the best blackmail award
ishu:dont waste ur time by talking nonsense,it will be better if u go for ur work
raman:atleast u reduce the number,i cant write 100 times
ishu:no concession will be available to u
raman:ha ok i will do,by getting down from the bed he marches to dining table,he starts writing his imposition given by his beautiful wife
ishu(st):next time he wont get even a thought to hurt me,it became a habbit to everyone to make me cry,i think so i have to give this punishment to appa
yeh raman appa ka xerox copy hogaya
raman(st):daadi thum mujje kaisa halath me phas kiya dekho eh ladki mera saath kaisa games kel rahi hu,if she is a teacher then the orgainisation will close the school for her harsh punishments to the children,i dont know how my children has to face her punishments,sorry beta iam apologizing u in advance when i was unable to save myself then how can i save u,saab hamara fate hi
even in schools and colleges i didnt struggled like this ,how can i write 100 times,she is not smooth hearted but stone hearted,bewakoof aurath,how she can get these stupid ideas pagalse shaadi karke mi bhi pagal bangaya,i have to say hatsoff to appa for bearing her mental,by smacking his head its all my mistake,if i would have forgiven her in the morning then i wouldnt be strucked in this situation,even i didnt felt any tough in pursuing my MBA but this ridiculous punishment made my fingers to swollen,by completing his task within an hour forgetting about his office work he marches towards ishu and handovers the papers to her
meanwhile he gets a call from his association, attending the call "sorry mr.akash i cant come now i will mail the details "
akash:but u have to give the presentation to the association ,tomorrow is the final presentation and bidding day,u have to come now
raman:arey yaar now i have more imp work then that u dont worry about tomorrow everything goes well if u end this call then i have to be with someones duty otherwise i have to face more big punishment
he cuts the call without listening to that person and looks at ishu
ishu:she looks at him angrily after checking the papers
raman:what happened i written na?
ishu:where is the numbering should i count all these lines to know whether u have written 100times or not,i dont know how u completed ur double MBA,u tell me the truth it will be our secret,did u buyed ur MBA certificates
raman:pagal madrasan i wont do such cheap tricks i was the topper of my university,i wrote 100times i forgot to give numbering its not a big issue
ishu:then u dont know the spelling of my name where is "t"in "ishitha",she enquires raman pointing to a line
raman:galthi sab karthi hi meri maa maff kardo,in hurry i missed the letter,even all my school and college teachers are very far better than u,they are very soft hearted,u r not at all pleasing with my efforts in addition u r microscoping the mistakes
did ur appa joined u in military school u r very strict,let it be i finished my task now u have to come with me to hospital
ishu:keeping the papers aside"mann nahi hi aane ke liye "i wont come raman,she smiles looking at raman
raman:ruffling his hair bewakoof ladki thum mere sath isi tharah games kelna bandh karo,thumne kya kaha,after finishing ur task,u will come to the hospital but what u r doing now,if u wont come with me then i will take u forcefully,he gets near to ishu
ishU:moving away from him,"no raman i wont come please the smell in the hospital makes me uneasy
raman:then u intentionaly made me to write 100times,u made rkb as a clown if anyone knows about this what about my prestige,pagal mi thumko choodunga nahi
ishu:she again moves far from him,she was almost at the edge of the bed,raman notices that and pulls her towards him which makes her to fall in his arms,ishu holding his shirt for support she speaks out"raman i dont have energy to fight with u,i want rest u dont worry i will be ok"
raman:helps her to sleep on the bed and covers her with a duvet,he checks her temperature by placing his hand on her forehead
ishU:tilting her head,"raman miney kahatha na i want rest u dont disturb me
raman(st):pagal mi kab disturb kiya thumko,u r disturbing me daily with ur beauty,ur body is boiling with fever how u will be ok?by thinking he marches to hall

part b is at the bottom of part a,i compensated with a long part
Edited by sarayasriya - 10 years ago
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part -34(b)


aftersometime:
raman:wakesup ishu by patting on her cheeks
ishu:she was surprised seeing a lady doctor infront of her,turning to raman"raman miney kahatha na
raman:cutting her words,u keep quiet,turning to Dr."she has a very high fever u please check her"
dr:after checking ishu's temperature she talks with raman"nothing to worry mr.bhalla,she will be normal by tomorrow,iam prescribing u some medicines,u make her to take tablets in time
i will give an antibiotic injection to her
raman:with a tensed tone why injection Dr.?u prescribed medicines na?while ishu looks at him surprisingly
dr.:mr bhalla injections works faster than tablets u please let me do my work,taking a syringe from her firstaid box filling it with medicine,she asks raman to hold ishu hand
while injecting
raman:holds her hand very tightly closing his eyes
ishU:shouts with pain
raman:see dr.how pain she is feeling,u injected her hardly
dr.:smiling at raman,she is not feeling pain because of injection but the way u held her hand tightly,raman ruffling his hair apologizes Dr.while ishu smiles looking at raman
dr:mrs bhalla i think so ur husband was very loving and caring,by saying she walks out with raman
ishu:she smiles reminding his gestures infront of Dr.bath yeh hi raman bhalla injection se dartha,ishu thumko aur ek mouka milgaya
thinking of dr words,i know he was very caring but from where this love came in b/w,he married me reluctantly and even he called me before the marriage to cancel the wedding,i think so this dr is also a mental,thinking of her words she falls asleep
after 2hrs
ishu:she was in deep sleep due to injection effect
raman:sitting beside her on the bed ,he disturbs her sleep again by patting her
ishu:pushing his hand back still in closed eyes,"kya raman,why u r disturbing frequently?u please go to office and let me to take rest
raman:by taking duvet away from her,"ekbar uto ishitha"
ishu:gets up reluctantly as she know he wont let her go easily,kya raman?baar baar kyou disturb kar rahi hu?
raman:u didnt ate anything from morning now its almost evening,now u have to take medicines,so u have this soup by ordering he forwards the soup bowl to ishu
ishu:turning her face aside from the bowl"nahi raman iam not hungry
raman:kithna zidh hi thum,by turning her face towards him,he starts feeding her
ishu:she starts sipping the soup silently as she has no energy to fight with him,tears are escaping from her eyes silently
raman:keeping the bowl aside,he enquires "ishitha is the soup very spicy why u r getting tears
ishu:she suddenly hugs him and starts wailing like a child
raman:with a concern,he pats her to console,"ishitha what happened to u,why u r crying now,while ishu was not at all listening to him,pulling her out from him,he wipes the tears "ishitha did u hided any water tanker inside ur eyes,why u r opening the tanker frequently?
ishu:listening to his words she hits him playfully on his chest,"iam in grief but u r playing jokes on me"
raman:now u say what made u to cry?
ishu:laying her head andholding his shirt tightly to control her grief while tears are rushing from her eyes"appa yaad aya,today is his birthday till now he never celebrated his birthday without my presence,so i called him yesterday but he scolded me harshly,everyone left me alone,amma,appa,akka,jiju saab mujje choda ,they easily ended their relation with me,in this 3months they didnt called me once,they left me alone
raman:why u r alone mi huna thumhara saath?
ishu:looks at him surprisingly
raman:i mean u have daadi,mama,papa,romi,mihir,and i then why u r saying that u r alone
ishu:u all are with me,but how they can leave without talking to me,then why i cant forget them,iam still unable to forget appa words,i called him to wish him in advance but she starts crying vigorously
raman:he gets angry on appa for scolding ishu,u know about him then why u called him again?
ishu:because he is my father
raman(st):i know that he is ur father,no need to play ur old tored casatte,i brought her very far from her appa,but i was unable to make him away from his thoughts
ishu:raman what happened u r silent
raman:ha nothing u wait for a min,by saying he takes ishu's bracelet from his wallet secret zip
ishu:looking at the bracelet she abruptly takes away the bracelet from his hands,"yeh bracelet mera hi lekin thumhara paas kisa hi?she asks him surprisingly
raman:four months ago u came to delhi jhandewalan temple,did u remembered?
ishu:yes but how u know about this?
raman:on that day u dashed me and we both fallen into the pond.
ishu:u r that person whom i dashed on that day?but i didnt saw u with daadi,then u seen me before our marriage hi na?she asks with a smile
raman:i seen u on that day lekin thum ek bada duffer hi na isilye thum mujje nahi dekha pagal madrasan,and u dont know how to apologize,will any apologize by closing their eyes and why u r running,u were not present in playground but in temple,har bath me manners ka bath lekar avungi lekin thumko kuch manners hi nahi hi?
ishu:she takes out her fingers from her ears after looking at his lip moment stopped,"kya raman why u r scolding me,i told u sorry na,u leave all that but u tell how u got my bracelet
raman:when we fallen on the pond it was strucked to my shirt,today morning when i opened my secret zip of wallet i noticed this bracelet by saying he ties the bracelet to her wrist
ishu:she opening the dial of bracelet shows her and appa's photos ,"raman it was my childhood gift from my appa he used to say me always that i can feel my appa when i look at this bracelet
by hugging him "thanks raman for giving my appa back"
raman:to lighten the situation but u have to give my mobile back on that day u broken my 70000rs mobile
ishu:ha ok i will give u the money by asking my appa,she keeps a puppy face looking at raman
raman:ok let it be now u have to take rest by saying he makes her to take medicines and helps her to sleep on the bed comfortably,
in mumbai:
at 11:30pm
appa:receives a parcel,everyone are anxious looking at the parcel which appa got in late night,after opening the parcel he takes out a bouquet of orchid flowers which was his favorite
along with a greeting card tied to the bouquet
opening the card he reads "many many happy returns of the day appa-please u cut the cake which i sent to u from ishitha raman bhalla"
vandu:taking the card reads it out
bala:he takes out the cake from the parcel,the cake was decorated with birthday wishes"happy birthday appa"with a duo photo of ishu and appa at the corner of the cake"everyone eyes gets wetted with the cute gesture
vandu makes appa to agree for cutting the cake while bala records the event,everyone feeds him by wishing him
appa:walks into his room with full of happiness"ishu beta iam sorry,i hurted u very much,but i did this intentionally how can i be anger on u for a longer time,after ur marriage fixing with raman i coated myself with anger,if i didnt done this then u wouldnt have married raman,i know he married u reluctantly if i behaved with u normally then u might have rushed to me leaving raman as i know that he will hurt u in the begining,but what i did was only for ur future i believed that raman can be ur best half,i cant live with u for the entire life only raman can stay beside u in ur whole life,iam enquiring daily about u through kowsalya maa,sorry beta appa ko maff kijiye,see now u r doing the same,u went to US with raman but u r thinking about me ,how he will feel?i doesnt want this to happen so iam keeping u far from me,i hope u will soon realise ur love for raman.
in US:
raman takes care of ishu whole night by placing the wet strips on her forehead and checking her temperature"ishitha when u will start loving me along with ur appa?"


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