ff-My Life Starting With An Unknown Person updated part72(a) aug28 - Page 22

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Posted: 10 years ago
pm me plz when u update part 32
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part32:
ishu:listening to the doorbell rushes to open the door thinking raman might reached home,with a wide smile she opens the door but within secs her smile was faded out witnessing the person infront of her.
driver was holding raman ,who was unable to stand on his own,he was wiggling as he was over drunken
ishu:enquires with teary eyes,"raman thumko huva kya,why u r wiggling stand properly",she turns to face driver ,bhayya what happened to raman
driver:mam sir asked me to drive to the bar in the evening and till now he was in bar,sir was unable to walk properly,so i helped him,its very late mam,i have to leave
ishu:she comes to near raman and holds him allowing driver to leave
raman:with half mind he speaks to ishu"mi thumse bath nahi karungi thum java mujje chodo aab,bahuth hurt kiya miney thumko,iam not a good person,u cant see my change hi na?
ishu:she was fully concerned about his situation,without listening to his words "raman thum sharab kisa peekar aaya ,acha ghar ka aadhmi isa kartha hi kya?
by saying she makes his hand around her shoulder and with other hand she holds his waist to give support for walk,"still how many bad habbits left with u,u dont have any good habbits"
raman:lowering his head facing ishu he starts staring at her
ishu:kya isa kyou dekh rahi hu,kuch lika hi kya meri chehre par
raman:with a smile isa kuch nahi,i cant understand from where u r getting lots of energy to blabber continuously,kabi kabi muhh ko rest lelo
ishu:with an angry look with teary eyes she confronts hims"why u drunk raman?"
raman:mera iss galthi ka karan thum hi ,by arguing both fells on the floor,raman's back facing the floor and ishu on raman,
ishu:iam helping u but u r taking revenge on me,u made me fall on the floor
raman:holding ishu by wraping his hands around her,"yeh bewakoof dekho ekbar u r taking revenge on me,u fallen on me and before saying he shouts with pain saying"ha my back was broken"pagal aurath
ishu:u r the reason for this how can i bear all ur weight u r not at all supporting me,why cant u walk even iam helping u?by shouting she getsup from him and helps him to get up ,with lots of efforts she takes him to his room and helps to lay on the bed
raman shouts saying ha maa mera peet yeh pagal took revenge by breaking my back
ishu:is it paining heavily ishu asks with a concerned tone
raman:thumko kya farak hi?,when u thought about me,now u r showing ur concern for me
ishu:without wasting a sec she takes a balm to help him "raman remove ur shirt i will apply balm ur pain will be reduced
raman:u dont try to pretend as u r worrying about me,there is no need of ur help,u leave me
ishu:sorry raman,galthi meri hi na why u have to suffer with pain,please u forgive me this time,i wont speak rudely at next time
raman:who iam to forgive u,why u r asking me,chodo mujje aur javo yaha se
ishu:kithna zidh hi thum,ok let it be first u remove ur shirt
raman:nahi
ishu:smacking her head,u doesnt have the habbit of listening to others,by saying she starts unbuttoning his shirt,he thinks to stop her to show fake anger but he stops himself even in drunken state he know how to stare at his beautiful wife,meanwhile ishu removes his shirt which was not at all sensed by him
from few mins she was asking raman to face the bed so that she can apply balm on his back but he was lost in dreams looking at her,she finally shouts which makes raman to come out from his thoughts
raman:kya why u r shouting?
ishu:where ur mind was how many times i called u,turn to otherside i will apply balm
raman:turns unwillingly as he cant look at her
ishu starts applying balm while raman can sense her fingers on him,he was enjoying her touch and concern for him
ishu:disturbs his mood by speaking"raman now iam helping u na?did u forgiven me?"
raman(st):mera mood disturb karne se unko kya miltha hi lekin ithna aasani se mi thumko kisa choodunga
ishu:raman u didnt replied me
raman:u hurted me, its because of ur fault i fallen on the floor,so u r helping me,why i will forgive u,to change the topic he mocks her"vaise did u runned any massage centre before, u r doing massage as an expert
ishu(st)instead of forgiving me he is taunting me,getting into her jkr mode"pahale kuch centre nahi hi lekin aaj hi open kiya "raman bhalla massage centre "by his wife,to the surprise raman bhalla was my first customer,if u give ur beautiful autograph i will hang it on my shop by making a frame
raman(St):eh ladki ko counters marna acchi tharah se aatha hi
meanwhile daadi calls to ishu,
raman with an annoying tone koun hi aadha rath phone kar raha hu?
ishu:daadi hi,by saying she attends the call,"daadi is everything fine u called us at very late night?
raman gets up worryingly wearing his shirt as daadi called at very late night
daadi:everything is fine ishitha,i was worried about u,from morning i was feeling uneasy about u,r u fine,is raman behaving good with u?
ishu:murmurs to raman saying "will u forgive me or should i say that u came very late night by drinking alcohol
raman:yeh pagal thum mere sath blackmail kar rahi hu,by saying he takes the mobile from her forcefully and answers to daadi"ha daadi everything was fine u dont worry take care,he cuts the call without listening to her response
ishu:nahi daadi voh jute bol rahi hu by saying she tries to take the mobile from raman
raman:kya daadi,miney call cut kiya,thum rkb ko blackmail karne se kuch nahi milenga
ishu:ha tho kya mi phir se call karungi aur bathavungi daadi ko thum kya kiya,by saying she struggles to take mobile from him,where raman was enjoying by teasing her
ishu:by making me alone in this house u r playing with me ,and u r not forgiving me,i will go to INDIA tomorrow give me the mobile i will call to daadi
raman:by holding both hands of her he pulls her to the bed and places his both hands on the eitherside of her,his face was very close to her
ishu:kya kar raha hu thum?chodo mujje,by saying she pulls him away and tries to getdown from the bed
raman:pulls her back to the bed and holds her tightly by wrapping his hands around her waist
both are lying on the bed facing each other,
raman:dont dare to move even an inch,listen to me if u want me to forgive u
ishu:looking at raman ,ha bolo but u have to forgive me
raman:ha thum suno,why u r unable to see my change of behavior towards u,tell me really do iam hurting u now?
ishu:with teary eyes and guilty filled in her voice she speaks out"nahi raman thum badhal gaya lekin appa ka barrey me soch kar rahi hu,and i outed my frustration on u,sorry raman i didnt said those words intentionally
raman:kya sorry kithna hurt kiya thumne,baar baar appa appa bolrahi hu thum,mujje kisa lagtha hi,iam trying to make u happy but he stops speaking
ishu:i tolerated ur anger for a month but u cant tolerate my anger for a day
raman:ladki ho thum,aurath ko bahuth patience hotha hi,jo adhmi ko nahi hotha
ishu:did u written this rule in ur rule book
raman:by pulling her nose "har bath ko counter marna bahuth acchi tharah se aatha hi na thumko
ishu:holding his hand through which he was pulling her nose"ayyo amma meri naak hi yeh" chodo
raman:removing his hand from her"u dont worry i wont do any damage to ur nose,without nose u wont look good,how can i show my wife to outside world without a nose
ishu:thanku raman
raman:why thanks?for leaving ur nose without doing any damage ha?
ishu:by giggling,nahi thum mujje maff kiya na isiliye
raman:looking into her eyes ,there is some magic in ur eyes no one cant stay without talking to u
ishu:but my appa is staying without talking to me na?
raman:ruffling his hair"har bath me thumhara appa ko kyou lekar avungi thum
ishu:he is my father raman,today iam in this world because of him,he loves me a lot,he is the worlds best father,
raman:tell me how much u love ur father?(ST)today i want to know his place in ur heart
ishu:by laughing "raman till now no one invented any devices to measure love"but as u r asking me i will tell u one thing then u urself understand,"because of my love towards my appa i started my life with an unknown person"
raman(st):bar me voh adhmi bi yehi bola
ok then u gave 100%space in ur heart to ur appa?
ishu:ha its correct only na,he showered me indefinite love on me for 24yrs
raman(st):dekho raman to get a place in her heart u have to shower ur love for the next 24yrs kaisa halath hi raman,daadi thumne kisa ladki se mera shaadi kiya,yeh typical woman daadi
ishu:raman what u r thinking ?
raman:then how much space u gave for me in ur heart?
ishu:after thinking a while she says 10%
raman:keeping a puppy face only 10% u gave to me,u r very injustive
ishu:kya injustice isa kuch nahi,u came into my life just before 2months how can u expect more than this,even not to hurt i told 10%
raman:remains silent thinking about her words
ishu:giggles looking at raman which distracts his thoughts towards her
raman:why u r laughing did i made any joke
ishu:controlling her laugh nahi,thum ek bacha ki tharah behave kar rahi hu raman:what?
ishu:then what raman why u r comparing urself with my appa,he is different and u r different,next time u dont do any comparisions
raman(st):ha mi kya karu,instead of the love which u have to shower on ur husband u r showering on ur appa
ishu:raman kya soch rahi hu thum chodo mujje,i want to go
raman:tightening his grip on her,kaha jayengi thum eh raman bhalla ka clutches these are more powerful than handcuffs,ithna aasani nahi hi thum yeh clutches se bahar aana
ishu:raman thum kithna piya isa bath kar rahi hu ,mujje kuch samajthi hi nahi
raman:thum ek bada duffer tha ,mera bath thumko kaisa samajthi
ishu:angrily ha mi duffer hi na ,aab chodo mujje ,bahuth neend aarahi hu
raman:thum kumbakarna ka sister hi kya,?
ishu:raman chodo na please
raman:neend athe tho mera sath so javo
ishU:kya chodo mujje u r hurting me,ithna joorse pakada thum mujje
raman:u r very flimsy its not my mistake,by saying he pulls her hand which she tried to cut in afternoon,looking at the bruise"ishitha how is the pain now"
ishu:no pain raman aab mi teek u
raman:how can u do this if anything happens to u then what about me,now u have to promise me in further u should not do this brainless things
ishu:with teary eyes i wont do raman promise
raman:ok iam leaving u for this time without punishing u
ishu:ha ok if u leave me i will go to my room
raman:how can u sleep alone,u r frightened about that sounds and u seen some weird person yesterday,so u sleep with me
ishu:i checked entire house no one was their and today i didnt listened any sounds now u leave me
raman:so u didnt listened any sounds,now u r not frightened?
ishu:ha
raman:ek min by saying he picks his mobile and plays those wierd sounds which he played before,by looking at ishu he smiles "aab dar gaya na"
ishu:she was in hell shock,she covers her opened mouth with her palm "ayyo amma yeh thumne kiya,kithna jutavala thum,to frighten me u did this and do u the one who walked in the garden?
raman:with a naughty smile ha yeh sab miney kiya
ishu:how can u do that , i terrified listening those sounds,will anyone do this type of pranks
raman:if u terrified me by messing ur room,offing the lights,hiding from me intentionally then why i should not do?
ishu:dedho mujje phone,aabi mi daadi ko phone karungi
raman:do u think i will be afraid of daadi,iam not a child to get frightened listening to ur blackmails
ishu:thumse kuch bath karna hi waste chodo mujje aab mi javungi
raman:thum chupchap se mera sath sojavo by saying he pulls her face towards his chest and other hand around her waist
ishu:she tries to come out from his grip but he pulls her again tightening his grip on her
raman mi bacha nahi hu isa pakadkar sone ke liye
raman:ha u r not a child but u will sleep by placing half of ur body on me at everytime
ishu:yeh meri aadath hi raman,from childhood i used to sleep in this with my appa
raman:shh thum badhme thumhara appa ka dictionary open karo aab nahi by saying he pulls her face again towards him
ishu:with a smile she holds his shirt tightly,hiding herself in his shirt,she remembers words of the daadi which she said on the day of her marriage "my raman always takes care of u"
daadi ne saach bola voh bahuth caring tha,sorry raman i wont hurt u again with my words
raman:in sleepy mode ishitha sleep silently stop ur blabbering by saying he wraps his hand around her while ishu smiles happily for his care

Edited by sarayasriya - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
superb update..
i love this story very much..keep update everyday..pls..
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Posted: 10 years ago
wow...awsm...
loved IshRa convo & masti...
so beautifully written...
thanks plz update soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice update. can u please add like they going to c places in U.S and going ona date. then eating out. that will nice. also why u r not writing anything abt Ishita's appatoo. she Is missing him a lot. he also have to feel the same right. he loves her a lot. slowly show how she cares for Raman and falls in love with him. lovely writing.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Lovely update- great to see them getting closer!
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update
Loved ishra part
It was too cute
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Posted: 10 years ago
awww this was a superb update
hayee their convo was so sweet
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Posted: 10 years ago
sriya thanks for your update...😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome update
loved it
thanks for pm 😊

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